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Half Bliss- Chapter 16
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“I miss her… So much,” The conviction threatened tears to make it’s exit from the corner of the blonde’s eyes.
“Me too. She’s… I miss her too,” Shane allowed herself this confession. She had kept her sadness all bottled up for far too long. She was losing so much in such a small amount of time. First Dana; then by her own fears, Carmen; finally now she’s feeling as if she was losing Bette as well.
Alice looked up from her coffee and noticed that they were referring to two separate persons and had a wry smile on. She had to. At least she still had Shane here. Tina was busy helping Bette, as she should be and Kit was… Well, Kit has changed but not that much and right now she was trying to keep everything together by occupying herself with The Planet. Sometimes, she wondered if it were the Porter genes. She saw the same thing in Bette. Saw.
Alice got up and shifted to Shane’s chair, silently occupying the space and putting her arm around her friend. Together, they held one another in the midst of the busy coffee shop. It was the same place that once hosted their family breakfast meetings on most days and now the two of them were there mourning for all their loss. Kit looked in their direction after serving the unattended customers their drinks and saw the picture of unwavering friendship between the two of them. She didn’t remember walking there but in almost an instance she was there with them, resting their head gently against her chest. She bent down to place two kiss on their heads with tears brimming through sad, understanding eyes.
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“I made a mistake. No, I did a lot of things… to hurt you.”
Sore eyes strained shut. Swollen and tired from the day. She- no. They needed to stop the pain and this was the only way.
“I’m not proud of them. Far from it. I hate myself. For everything that I did then.”
It is far too late now to close up. Easy but that’s the whole point- the hard parts needed to be out in the open as soon as possible.
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Whoa! Who died?
powerful and sad…i hope everyone will find peace and happiness soon…love cummings poetry too…
Another great update! This is truly sad. Bette will get better, won’t she?Tibette needs to be victorious with a happy ending. PPVVS
If “he” is who I think he is… then I almost want to say that death is a release he maybe didn’t deserve. But maybe that’s what Bette might need to start healing and moving on. Great update, thanks MsH. (and I love e.e. cummings)
Interesting story, but too vague. I do hope that eventually you plan to tie everything together and not leave things open to interpretation. I, for one, would like a clear-cut explanation on everything. Also, earlier in the story, you mentioned that Alice, Shane, and Helena were in the planet wanting an explanation from Kit about what happened to Bette and had ended up giving her resigned expressions when she wouldn’t. Now you are making like no one has ever met Helena before and she just showed up. It doesn’t make any sense and you should probably go back in the story and edit it so that it does. If this story is supposed to be somewhere between the third and fourth season, then Helena would have been a part of the group anyway according to the show’s timeline.
Great update the story is great! So sad and hopeful at the same time. Plus ee cummings poetry magical!
Loved that opening you’ve written about love. So true. Great update by the way. I, too hopes that everyone would find peace. Update soon!
loved it, pps!
Great update. Have missed this story. Thank you for it. At least they are talking which is good! Thank you again!
i just found your story, and think that you did well by not spelling things out. you write well, not least because you know the value of subtlety in fiction. thanks, i enjoyed reading your posts.