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    Half Bliss- Chapter 6

    Story written on April 26, 2009 by mshornygettingdirty.
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    “I was just-“

     

    “I invited her, Al.” Shane interrupted Tina. She flashed a quick apologetic smile to the confused blonde.

     

    “Hi, I’m Kit… This is my sister, Bette.” Kit’s menacing looks made her frown further. What is going on?

     

    “Hi…” Bette reached out her hand which Tina took in her hand in daze. A wave of static traveled up their hands from the touch itself. The locked eyes between the two former lovers scared the others

     

    “Well, are we supposed to stand here all day, Kit?” Alice chirped in to prevent Tina from asking any questions or revealing too much.

     

    “Yeah, come on in guys…” Kit’s handle on the situation weakened as she tried hard to come up with an excuse to pull Bette away from Tina. This is getting really out of control.

     

    “Tina, didn’t you say you had a meeting- now? It’s ok, I told Kit that you were just swinging by.” Shane tried to stage a quick exit for Tina hoping she understood.

     

    “Actually, I-“

     

    “Yeah, we just wanted a quick introduction with you guys… Tina is erm… new in town.” Alice cut her mid-sentence. Her frown increased. Tina decided enough with this, she was going to get to the bottom of this once and for all.

     

    “Guys, actually I canceled my meeting. It’s a Saturday and I thought it would be great to meet some friends… After all, you’ve been talking so much about Kit and –Bette,” That was how she took control. The girls exchanged quick terrified looks with one another before they proceeded into the apartment.

     

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    “Tina, I heard you are a great cook. Would you care to help out with the salad?”

     

    “Yeah, sure.” Tina glanced quickly to Bette who was lost in the conversation with Shane and Alice.

     

    “Bette, I’ll be in the kitchen. Be nice, girls…” Shane and Alice took the hint and began distracting Bette with small talks and jokes, anything to keep her away from Tina. It was easy. They had a lot of chemistry together and the conversations flowed with utter ease.

     

    “What the hell are you doing here? Haven’t you caused enough trouble already? What the fuck were you thinking waltzing in here as if nothing happened? Are you fucking delusional, Tina? Are you really-”

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    4. Hm, everything’s a bit jumbled, is this Bette’s confusion, or Tina’s, or just mine? I take it Bette recognized Tina, but for some reason, no one’s letting her talk to Tina at all? And did the get-together occur before or after Bette read the letter from her attacker? I got a lot of questions… hopefully you’re posting more soon to clear it all up. Thanks for the chapter!

    5. Thanks for this chapter. I know that this story has to run it’s course but I just feel like I want it all out there already, you know :) i lknow that you will clear up all the confusion soon. Thank you again :)

    6. Hey MsHGD, (trying to improve that acronym) loved this chapter. I’m impressed with the stream of consciousness that reflects Bette’s current reality and her efforts to try to piece her world together. I thought your treatment of the letter from the perpetrator/criminal and how it sparked memories and emotions that are seemingly unrelated was particularly skillful. It was good to see that Kit actually took Angus’ advice and stopped hovering and started giving Bette some necessary freedom, especially allowing her to go home. I guess that talk also helped her calm her reaction to Tina’s presence at her door. Can’t wait to see how Bette will deal with the other memories as they come to her and with her pregnancy. Love your pacing as well. (Okay, enough… I’m done..for now.) Thanks for writing. PPS.

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