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Hate or Love? A different beginning for Alice and Dana
The lanky brunette looks Dana with a smile “Don’t worry I don’t think she’s gonna ever disturb you again”. Dana starts to cry “Oh thank you! If…snif… If you wasn’t here I don’t know if she left me”. “Hey guy, don’t cry, its finished. Look I will stay with you, ok?” proposed gently the lanky brunette. “No I don’t want to ***** up you night so..” began Dana. “You’re not ***** up my night. Actually I think I’m gonna have a good night” said smiling the lanky brunette. Dana reached over the tears and smiles, th first smile of the night. “Yeah is that what I want, Oh by the way I’m Shane” “Dana, my name is Dana” she said.
Back to today
(She’s been so nice with me. And she saved my life. I had to accept to meet her friend, just to thank her for her help. Plus I had a great night, the first good night since I’m here, I could talk with her about all and it was really surprising but so good at the same time. If she’s a great person, its obvious that her friend too) Dana looks the sky (mmh a warmth sun, a good day. All is gonna be great). “Aouch!” she said, her head shocking with another.
Alice decided to stop her car far of the Planet. Just to see how looks the “shy and hot sportive” woman. its a long time ago she doesn’t felt this nerviousity before a date like in this time. She hadn’t be in a serious relationship since years (forgetting Gabby Devil Deveaux, if you could call that a relationship). She spots trought the window of the Planet to see her friend but alone “she’s late too!”. “Aouch!” she shouts, she shocked with something hard. “Can’t you look where you’re ***** going?” she said angrily. She lifts her head and sees a dark and curly haired woman with the most intensive blue eyes she ever seen. “I’m sorry” said Dana lifting her eyes to the blond in front of her. Her heart makes a bound on her chest, but she doesn’t know why. She became nervious for some ignoring reason and when she became nervious she said things she never said “But you are the one who shocked me so you better apologize instead of complaining”. Alice felt the angry growning inside her (Who do she thinks she is? To come here, hitting me and talking to me like that) “Sorry? YOU should better look in front of you instead of have your head in the coulds. “My head in the clouds? I can look where I want. And its not a blond in pigtails who’s gonna tell me what to do!” retorts Dana (Arrgh I don’t know why but this woman upset me more than anyone in this world). “The blond in pigtails says you to ***** YOU!” shouts Alice before lets Dana here. (Arrrgh. I don’t know her and I already hate her). Alice enters the Planet but she doesn’t have the mind to a date actually. She sees Shane and takes a seat next to her. She lies on the chair crossing her arms.
“Hey, what happened?” asks Shane
“I just met a woman, and I must admit that before she started to talk I was finding her hot, but she talks and Oh God I think that anyone upset me like her in my whole life!” said angrily Alice.
“***** just a minute with her and you seem to hate her! Anyway forget this because the girl is gonna arrived in a few time. And I don’t think she’s gonna appreciate your look”
“Yeah I know but, Arrrgh If I saw her again I think I can struggle her” said Alice with a terrifiying gaze.
Shane smiles and looking behind Alice’s shoulders “Ah Dana glad you came. Look this is my friend Alice, Alice this is Dana” said cheerfully Shane. Alice turns over Dana and she gets freezed. Dana looks down and she feels her body all tense by the angry.
“YOU?” said Alice with a disgusting gaze
“YOU?” said Dana with an angry gaze
TBC?
Well this is what I wanted to show you. Let me know if you like or dislike. Bye
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You are one busy girl celineta, 2 fantastic stories! I love this, Alice and Dana arguing was top, keep it up. Pls post soon
your 2 talanted…TBC?…Like or dislike….i LUV! it…great start…please continue…Keep it up..thnks 4 writing..Post sOON!!!
yes, I’m happy to see a different danish beginning (there aren’t many of them). Thanks and keep going.
LOL. keep it up!
this is awesome keep writing please
I really like this, like i told you i would. Dana was so cute at the start and Shane coming to protect her. I really like angry Alice and Dana. Please continue soon.Lxxxx
I love it! I can’t wait to see what happens next.