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Hate or Love- A different beginning for Alice and Dana(Chapter 3)
Go back to hours later
‘Damn Dana! Before you came in in my mife I was not nervious about thinking of what to wear to see my friends’ thought Alice. She takes a dress she had buy for a special event. She looks fenomenal in her but she can’t wear this tonight. Friends (especially Shane) will see her and laugh out and loud seeing her coming like this.’I can’t come tonight with that. I’m always cool when I go out and see the group. Even if I’m sure Dana will not be able to pull away her eyes on me’ thought Alice smiling.
The planet 7:30PM
Dana arrived at the Planet. She entered, the first time she came she was too angry to see it but tonight she can say that this place is great. She feels comfortable and less nervious. She’s gonna meet Shane’s friends and she has to be good. She wants to keep Shane in her life. It’s the first person she’d been able to talk with without any problem or fear. But the worst is to see Alice again. She doesn’t know why she’s in a strange dilemna. She hated her since they began to talk, she insulted her. She’d never been like that with anyone. But in the other side she wants so much to see her again, just to be in the same place that her makes her feel… ‘good, so good’ she thought as she makes her way to the counter waiting for Shane to come.
“Hey Baby, come here” said gently to Dana a black woman
“Me?” asks hesitating Dana looking over her right and left
“Come on I’m not gonna eat you. I saw you yesterday with Shane”
Dana’s nerviously gets away “You know Shane? I’m waiting for her”
“Of course I know this brunette. Don’t say that to her but I always dream to go back home with her” jokes the woman, Dana smiles at her. “What’s your name Baby?”
“Oh sorry, I’m Dana, nice to meet you” said cheerfully Dana
“All pleasure is mine, Baby. I’m Kit” they shake hands “So what do you want to drink waiting for Shane to come?”
“A beer please”
“A beer for my new friend” shouts Kit to a red- haried woman behing the counter before go and salute clients.
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Yey, we recovered another story, thanks girl :D , but Lara mmm,ok only because she makes Alice jelous. Shampoo, lol great I’m an anime fan.
I missed this fic but finally caught up with it. Haha love this, different and refreshing. Hope you can update soon
Lara is always a good attention getter. Love the tension. Love to see what you do with it.
Oh, this is so much fun! There is nothing like a love/hate relationship. Please, keep it coming soon, I can’t wait to read what happens next.
You have a plan for Lara … her demise would be nice! :-) Good to see you back.
that was a great update, cant wait to see whats planned for lara.
as long as that plan is not dana then I don’t mind I love it please post soon
great update celine, i love the way alice and dana play off each other. Now what or what do u have in store for lara? Shampoo i can’t wait for u to introduce her. pls post soon