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    Hate or Love- A different beginning for Alice and Dana(chapter 4)

    “I can’t believe that!” said Alice

    “She’s joking with us” continues Lara going back to her job

    “Is there someone who can explain me?” asks a lost Dana

    “Dana I’m sorry you met Shampoo” said Shane pointing to the girl next her “I said I would protect you from Alice (Alice makes a killered gaze to Shane) but I had forget the worst, Shampoo. You don’t have to hear her voice she could hipnotyse you and later could find you in her bed” warns Shane

    “I am absolutely not like this!” retorts Shampoo

    “Ok whose think like me lift the hand up” said Shane loudly lifting her hand up. Alice, Dana and Lara left too their hands, and even some women in the Planet whose heard Shane. They all looked Shampoo with an incriminating gaze. Shane smiles proudly.

    “Well it’s always the same. It’s not my fault, I am who I am and I love women!” said Shampoo proudly too

    “You love women too much!” said a voice beside her. Dana looked at her. She’s tall, with dark hair and brown eyes, pretty smart.

    “Bette maybe you, you can get under your control this ***** weapon” said Shane

    “Yeah I think we need some help here” adds Alice

    “Oh Bette I would be so glad if you get me under your control” Shampoo’s smiling charmingly. Bette put her hand on the forehead and she sighed.

    “You all seems to be enjoying the night” said Tina who just came.

    “Tina! I’m so happy to see you here. You’re the only one who really trust me. Come with me I will give you the World” said Shampoo. She grabbs Tina’s arm and whispers in her ear but enough loud to let Bette listen “Why are you with her?”She has to pulled away as Bette grabs her arm protectively.

    “Bette! You know she was just kidding!” complained Tina

    “Tina you have to be careful, if you don’t pay any attention I can loose you” said Bette looking straight in Tina’s eyes before staring Shampoo suspiciously.

    “Come on Bette I could never loose you and you know perfectly that Shampoo will not do that, she was just joking as always” Tina comforted Bette

    “I wonder if we can have a calm night sometimes now that you entered in our life” said Bette to Shampoo who’s now closer to Alice

    “Calm night? God it would be so anoying! Come on gals, lift the hand whose think it’s better now that I’m here” said Shampoo lifting the hand. But no one left the hand up so she staid alone with her hand left “Hey!” she shouts as the group made his way to the table.

    “I’m happy to see you here! You staid even if you were here with Alice and Shampoo” said Shane cheerfully to Dana

    “Oh I have to say it was funny. And Shampoo was really nice and sweet with me…” began Dana but she had to stop as Alice and Shane put their hand on her mouth

    “Don’t say that!” warns Shane

    “Don’t you had enough with the barmaid?” said Alice rollling her eyes

    “Too late ladies” said cheerfully Shampoo on Shane and Alice’s back “I had heard all that she said”

    Alice and Shane sighed as Shampoo began to talk(and flirt) again with Dana. The night has just began but it looks like it will be a long and a testing night.

     

    TBC

     

     Well that was the forth chapter. I know they are a lot of dialogue but I prefer right this one like this. Tell me if it’s not good I can change the style. Hope you enjoyed it at least and thanks for always being here and read. Bye

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

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    Comments

    1. Just because I’m a Japanese Anime nerd I really can’t help but asking if Shampoo is from Ranma 1/2. I know you said it’s an original character but how many people are really named Shampoo, right? lol. Amusing fic though. Nice job.

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