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Alice was floored by the anger. “You really are in this to help Bette aren’t you? You really have feelings for her!” It was a statement not a question.
Not feeling she owed Alice any explanation, “Jesus you really are all flash and no substance aren’t you? Think I’ve got nothing to gain from this. So whatever hell my reason it’s mine and none of your business. Now where to?”
Alice thought for a moment, her apartment would be the best but suddenly she didn’t want to be alone with Candace. A public place might be the better. She also was dying to find out what was on the jump drive that she’d slipped into her pocket while on the floorboards of the truck. But that would have to wait.
“Let’s go to the newspaper. It’s quiet this time of day and we can be in public but also have privacy. It will give us time to go through everything.”
Candace’s only acknowledgment was to turn the truck around at the first opportunity and head towards the LA Times.
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Tina was almost to the gate that would let her into the gated community where Helena’s house was located. She dreaded the first encounter with Helena in a few days. It wasn’t going to be pretty if the encounter went anything like her imagination was saying it would. Helena would want her pound of flesh for Tina’s lapses. Judgment, attentiveness, promptness, avoidance and the list goes on, all of these things Tina either didn’t do or did and thus were lapses that Helena would hold her accountable. Tina was willing to take Helena’s abuse, she just didn’t want to be thrown out. She couldn’t be free to find evidence of Helena’s activities if she got thrown out.
Smiling at the guard at the gate, Tina waves before she lowers her window to punch in Helena’s security code. It was while she was punching in the last number that her cell starts ringing. Tina didn’t even bother to look at the caller ID before answering. Helena had called so many times in the last 12 hours she just assumed it would be her.
“Hello”
“So? How did it go with my Sister?” Kit’s booming voice comes across the cell waves.
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I’m gonna hold my heart together ’til it gets better. Can Tina be more naive at Bette falling apart in front of her? I can’t wait to see how you fix this! Thank you!
Well Kit does have a point. What did Tina expect? That Bette would clean up instantly, forget the past and join her against Evil personified. My money is on Candace. Whatever the reason she got involved in this, her heart seems to be in the right place.
Tina has tunnel vision and just couldn’t see what was in front of her face with Bette’s behavior. At least Kit knows the score. Hopefully, she can help Bette wise up! Thanks for the post.
You describe the aftereffects of the pill so perfectly. I still hate to see Bette like this.PPS. Great writing!
Great story, thanks so much, Jwet.. I’m usually a silent reader but after reading yours, I just have to leave some words, it hurts so much to see Bette sink n fall apart like this. Please save her, please Jwet, don’t let her suffer too much… Kit was pretty harsh on Tina but Tina needed it.. End ranting. PPS, thanks again, Jwet :)
I love the way you described the effect the drug had on Bette. It makes it easier to understand how an addiction like this can be soooo hard break.I really wish Kit had given Tina a chance to take in what she said and respond. Kit has been exposed to drug addiction, apparently Tina hasn’t and Tina has a lot on her mind. I can understand how she mistook Bette’s withdrawal symptoms as anxiety and avoidance behavior. She made a mistake in letting Bette go but her intensions were good. Give her a break!I hope Candace and Alice figure this thing out soon.
Thank you, it is a relief to know that Bette will actual get better. I don’t mind reading now because I know Helena will pay for what she has done to Bette.Now, Kit has been mean to Tina. The girl is confused. She doesn’t know what is wrong with Bette. Kit could just advise her on what is really happening to Bette. Together work on helping her get better. I just hope Tina will have the time to leave Helena’s before she comes back. PPVS
Tina needs to turn around and go with Kit to find Bette. Tina had no clue what was happening to Bette, but Kit should not have gone off on her. I can understand why Kit did what she did and hope Bette can be found before she kills herself.
really worried about bette, i hope she’s gonna be okay…i hope to see happier times
thanks for the post….rotflmao at Alice and Candace! Oil & water but hopefully they can put heads together to figure away to help Bette. I know you’ll take care of Bette…won’t you? Kit just being protective but needed to give Tina a wake up call. I’m sure Tina won’t let her goof happen again, she’ll know what to watch for from now on! Thanks again & PPS
Oh my this story gets more interesting with each post, I really hope that Bette doesn’t get in an accident. PPS
I appreciate your going to the dark side with the story. Very interesting. Looking forward to more unfolding.
Oh I’m so worried for Bette. I am sitting at the edge of my chair please post soon :)
Great writing, thank you. I’m not happy about Bette being portraited like that, so miserable and down, but I guess things like that can happen to anyone. But driving while high, well, it’s a bit too much. Not only can she hurt herself, but she can hurt or kill innocent people, and that is just reckless and criminal. Not something I’d ever expect from Bette. Anyway, I really liked what Kit said to Tina because she was spot on. I’d rather not comment on Tina’s behaviour, calling her naive would be IMO lenient to her.
Kit is right. What was Tina thinking? I don’t know what’s going to happen but I’m curious ;) Thanks for postingPPS
Tina is acting like she’s the one on drugs. How could she possibly think it’s a good idea to go back to Helena. Has she forgotten that it’s not only her life she’s endangering but that of her baby girl? I hope she comes to her senses after Kit’s phone call and makes a U-turn to get away from Helena. Hate to see Bette portrayed in this way but keeping the faith she’s going to get through it with Kit, Alice and Candace helping her out. Just hope she’s not too far gone to accept it. PPS
Hey Jwet, I have faith in your skills and talent as an author that things will work out for the best between Bette and TIna.For now, you really captured the intensity of Bette’s addiction in the last chapter.What was striking for me was how quickly this demon had taken hold of Bette. She had slipped into the well-worn cycle of “after this one I’ll give up.”The difficulty Tina and Kit face is getting Bette to a point where she is ready to fight her addiction.Now Bette is high, feeling invincible, and driving her car at high speed.I do see a big dark cloud foreboading untold misery over Bette. I do think she has to reach the complete bottom of the barrel before she will be ready to fight her way back. I just hope that she doesn’t do anything that harms anyone including herself irrevocably.Candace and Alice are the light to this darkness with their banter and actions. Alice has a fabulous turn of phrase as she is ready to take on the world’s biggest large mammal. It is good to have this humor and I want thm to find some incriminating evidence that will hold Helena at bay.It is all about the leverage.Then thanksfully Tina and Kit caught up. I do feel Kity was harsh with Tina as Tina has very little experience of addicts and their typical behaviors.Tina would be best to head back to Helena to smooth things out and ensure Helena still believes Tina is under her spell. Then Tina will be in a powerful position to keep up with Helena’s devilish plan.Such intrigue, angst and heartbreak. more please as i adore your wonderful works and perfect plotting.There is just so much to love.Your Loyal Fan and Friend.
A fabulous story, but hard to read about Bette keep up the great work.
i would be obilvious if someone needed a fix also. im kinda slow. loving this. thx
Bette is on the highway and will have an accidentTina,Tina.PPS
This is just awful and Tina didn’t understand that Bette was needing more drugs. Shane should be horsewhipped for getting Bette started. All drog dealers and the people that supply the dealers should all be put on the largest ship that’s made and sunk to the deepest part of the ocean. In fact they should be shot up with the garbage they’re selling then sunk. And by the time they realize what happened they would be looking at the devil himself. Rant over. Maybe this accident Bette is about to have might be the best thing to happen to her if she lives over it. She can finally get help for the addiction and Tina can open her damned eyes and see what exactly what is going on and come to her senses as well. BTW, you aren’t telling too much info. They do need to play that jump drive and Tina needs to see this info for herself, then maybe she will leave helena alone or maybe kill the bitch. Thanks for posting.