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Heartbreak
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She knew her new mission from that point on was to help Alice Pieszecki find her soul and her spirit again.
Helena could not believe how absolutely beautiful Alice was. She had always seen her as the pretty blond with the quick wit and the big smile that was often contagious. But looking across the room at the fund raiser she had dragged Alice to. She couldn’t believe what an absolute gorgeous creature she was. She had to admit she was proud to have Alice with her, and enjoyed watching Alice working her charm on the room. She had never met a person who could charm both men and women and yet not offend either. She wanted to walk up and put her arm around Alice and then tell everyone Alice was hers. She knew she couldn’t yet lay her claim to Alice’s heart and she wasn’t going to rush it.
Helena knew that Alice still had feelings for her old friends and knew if she pushed to hard she would lose her back to them, and that was something that she didn’t want or think was good for Alice. So she decided to be patient with her and continue to show Alice how important she was to her.
Helena would make it a point to tell Alice everyday something good about herself. Sometimes it was something as little as how much she enjoyed her column or her hair looked really nice. Other times Helena just couldn’t help herself and she would tell her how her eyes were the window to her soul and how she could look into them for hours. How the more time she spent with her just made her want to spend even more time with her.
She knew she sometimes was pushing Alice for feelings that she wasn’t ready to have yet. Alice’s heart was still to raw and numb for it to feel what Helena wanted it to. Yet Helena still hoped that one day Alice would feel toward her the way she felt toward Dana. She knew if she ever received Alice’s love that she would have it forever. And if she ever did receive this wonderful gift she wouldn’t be foolish like the tennis player. She would cherish it forever.
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Deb, I love this. Like you, I’m with Danish till the end but it’s always nice to read something different.
I am hoping that you can continue to do both. This was a wonderful, and heartbreaking story. How refreshing to read something from Helena’s point of view, and have it be positive. Don’t get me wrong, I like Dana and Alice together, as well…but maybe, just maybe, with your tender writing we can see another possibility. Please continue…thanks.
I love Danish too, but isn’t it odd how therapeutic writing Alice/Helena (Helacious) fanfic is after reading those crazy spoilers?! Great story, keep it up!
I like Dana and Alice together as well, but I still really liked your story. You made the storyline pretty believable.
Interesting idea.
I love it but I just wish dana had made it in time that would have been a better ending for me anyway
Hate you? no way!, I’m a totally danish fan, but like tennisplaya said this helacious thing is therapeutic, and I really want that somebody loves and treats Alice like she deserves.
i love dana and alice…as much as i hate to say it dana seems a little undecided..i like to see Helena with this passion to make someone happy…i think Alice deserves that at least…you’ve helped for me to accept Helena in a good light…keep it coming
Just read your story Deb….talk about Helena being positiv. Good work danish colleague. Din historie er super og for gudsskyld fortsæt med den – den er helt vild god. Post soon
I was absolutely loving it till the last line…then I fell in love with it even more! lol Please continue this story! Whether it’s Danish or Helacious I dont care, I just love it! :D
Like Nix IV, I loved it from the beginning.. the last line just.. took my breathe away :'(