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    Heartbroken

    Story written on November 5, 2012 by Anyely.
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    this is a star and you will decide if I continue….

    Heartbroken……….

    – When is that you is going to believe me. Bette Porter screams again. And continues. – No one else! Christina looks at her partner. -Do not want to pity me! I told you alway. If for some reason you do not love me …. -By God! Have not you heard me! NO OTHER!. There is none!.’m Here! – So because our relationship is not public? Because everyone in the hospital will consider you single. Because the terror they know we’re together?. Your children are not idiots, they know very well that between us there is something more than friendship!.

    Because they know the fear that the mourning is over! We have four years together and I breathe air! I want to feel free!. – God! T! Today these unbearable! That is what happens to you!.

    When you calm down we will discuss today is seen cannot be!. Christina Kennard looks couple leave, slamming the door. Tina knows that even though he denies Bette things have changed! .

    They met during a medical appointment, Bette is a plastic surgeon and Tina came to visit her for recommendation of a good friend of her. Helena Peabody. Tina had a scar on one of her hands, made when she was a teenager, the attraction was automatic.

     Bette always said it was the meeting of two lonely souls.

    At first Tina agreed to keep the relationship secret because Bette’s wife, Jody was sick with cancer. they have three children at first Tina felt die because of having relations with a married woman, but simply refuse to love as that beautiful feeling that overcame her when Bette was beside her, feeling so full and yet so empty when it was alone.

    At first all the friends of Tina were not very happy with the relationship because of Bette was married. But on the other hand Tina looked so happy Tina and Bette was so loving but the other hand. Bette seemed absorbent, and although both dominant and disappeared for days leaving a sad but Tina glowed like a rose in spring when Bette deigned to reappear.

    Time went by and as the wife Bette deteriorated more and more, Tina stood firm being the refuge of Bette to soothe their sorrows, her passion was always there undismayed firm, no matter the time, day whenever Bette Tina needed it was there for her …… Some time ago …… It was Sunday, Bette promised would go to visit her.

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    1. First let me say thank you for taking the time to share another story with us. I remember them, very drama filled. I also understand that English is not your native language. Please understand that my comments are directed toward your story and not you.Bette and Tina are disgusting. Bette for cheating on her dying/dead wife. I don’t care if it’s Jody, Nadia, random NY chick or Candace “in sickness and in health till death do us part” Bette! Tina for being pathetic and waiting around for a loser like Bette. Does Tina have any idea that there are plenty of single people out there who are waiting to love and be loved? I don’t know how they can live with themselves, and there are children involved to make things worse. It sounds like Bette is just using Tina and Tina has no self respect. Thank you 😃😘 again.

    5. I understand the language barrier, so I’m just going to give a little constructive criticism. What I would say is that this post felt rushed, and as a result, the story line is jumbled. There hasn’t been enough time to become emotionally invested in anything the characters are doing or experiencing. It maybe would have flowed better if you’d simply had Tina meet Bette for the first time at an appointment regarding Tina’s scar, and had things develop from there. How did they fall in love? We know that Bette’s wife was dying, and they had children, but was it a loveless marriage? Were they about to go their separate ways and divorce when the diagnosis came through? Why did Tina accept the situation and take on the role of mistress? There are a lot of questions, but if you consider a re-write and patiently set up the story, the pay off will be better, language aside. Anyway… ;) Thanks for posting. Cheers. :)

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