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Heaven Can Wait, Ch. 2: Miles To Go
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“Now, Bette,” Shane announced, striding into the other room. “It’s your turn.”
“My turn for what?” Bette asked. “And you still haven’t explained what’s going on. Should I be calling the hospital? You don’t look too well, Shane.”
“I’m fine,” Shane insisted. “Now just listen to me. You haven’t been very good to Tina lately, and you’re dangerously close to losing her. Now I know you don’t want that, so you’d better straighten up your act. Be nicer with her. Calmer. Help out more. Stop being so anal and controlling.”
“I am not – ” Bette started to protest.
Shane held a hand up. “Just remember what I’ve said, Bette.” She hugged Bette to her. “I love you. Take care of yourself and Tina and the baby. Just remember that you can’t do everything, okay?”
“I love you, too, Shane,” Bette replied in surprise.
Shane pulled away and handed her a letter. “Can you make sure Kit gets this?” Without waiting for a response, she leaned over and kissed Angelica on the forehead. “You be good little one. Listen to your two mommies, but don’t let them give you too much *****. Sometimes a kid has to live a little.”
With a stunned Bette watching, Shane turned on her heel and left.
Shane had been driving around aimlessly in the Mini, unsure of what to do next. She’d already taken care of her friends. She was pretty sure she’d gotten through to them and they’d remember her advice when she was gone, whenever that time came. Right now, Shane was unsure of how to get justice for herself.
She couldn’t quite figure out who had shot her. She knew, yet, she didn’t. The answer was there, lingering in the back of Shane’s mind, the name on her tongue, yet she couldn’t fully grasp it.
Pulling the Mini over, she closed her eyes and laid her aching head onto the steering wheel. Remembering she still had that ridiculous hat on, she took it off and flung it into the backseat. Pinching the bridge of her nose, Shane forced herself to think.
Think, McCutcheon! You know who it was! You recognized that voice!
She replayed the voice over and over in her mind, until it suddenly clicked into place where she’d heard the voice before. Seething with rage, she threw the car into drive and pulled a u-turn in the middle of the street.
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This is some story chapter, don’t know that I have read anything quite like it. Post soon please. Thanks.
Oh I know it’s Lacy! J/K love the suspense and Shane trying to put things right was touching.
that was great but what will happens to shane and who was at the door please post soon and when will dana ask alice to marry her can’t wait I love it so much
“…Shane stood on a doorstep across town, impatiently knocking. The door opened, bringing her face to face with the person who’d shot her.”
And right in front of Shane stands… Foxfire? ;-)
can’t wait to find out who shot Shane. Update soon!!!
dying here post now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ok I don’t know if I should feel special because alice’s mini is named after me or not??