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Hephaestus – Chapter 16
”I have no abiding memory
No awakening, no flaming dart
No word of consolation
No arrow through my heart
Only a feeble notion
A glimmer from afar
That I cling to with my fingers
As we go spinning wildly through the stars
And I’m full of love
And I’m full of wonder
And I’m full of love
And I’m falling under
Your spell…”
“Oh yes! Oh God! Right there, right there!”, Carmen shouts straddling Shane.
Their car is parked in a remote corner of a lot.
The glasses are all misted up, and inside the cab the atmosphere is steamy.
Carmen’s gown is lifted over her hips.
Her panties, somewhere on the back seats. Together with Shane’s jacket and shirt.
Her shoulder loops lowered, revealing her full, perfect breast.
Her head leaned back, her long hair caressing her almost naked back.
Shane’s lips run on her collarbone, biting, sucking, kissing, nibbling.
Carmen’s hands are clung to Shane’s neck and she is panting, and moaning, and panting, and moaning.
“What about that coffee?”, Shane whispers, out of breath.
“Shut up and keep on fucking me”, Carmen whispers back, claiming her mouth.
She bites her chin, her neck, making her wince in a delightful mixture of pain and pleasure.
“I love you”, Shane says huskily.
“I love you too… Oh God…”, Carmen murmurs, grimacing and thrusting harder against Shane’s fingers.
Shane moans and hides her face into Carmen’s neck.
It’s hot.
And sexy.
And raw.
And pure.
And wild.
And true.
“I need you…”, Carmen is whispering into her ear.
“I need to feel you… I need to see you… I need to live you… I need you…”, she adds, speeding up the pace.
“Come back home then…”. In a suffocate moan.
Carmen swallows, her eyes closed.
“No… I can’t do that now but…”.
“Jesus Christ… Yes…”, Shane sighs feeling Carmen’s hand touching her where she needs it the most.
“…But I am not leaving you, and I am not giving up… I am just…”.
“What…?”, Shane pants.
“….Licking my wounds…”.
Shane holds back her tears
– tears of pain? Tears of joy? –
And chuckles silently.
“You should not use that word while we’re making love…”, she jokes.
Carmen smiles, sighing, not opening her eyes.
Shane swallows and watches her, transfixed.
My God, how beautiful you are, she thinks.
You are literally dancing over my body, she thinks.
Just an idiot like me could leave you at the altar, she thinks.
Just an angel like you could take me back, she thinks.
I won’t do the same mistake twice, she thinks.
“What?”, Carmen says, opening her eyes.
“Nothing…”, Shane huffs, sinking more into her body.
“Shit…”, Carmen says loudly, closing her eyes again and arching her back.
Then she hugs Shane tightly, biting her naked shoulders.
”The wind lifts me to my senses
I rise up with the dew
The snow turns to streams of light
The purple heather grows anew
I call you by your name
I know not where you are
But somehow, somewhere, sometime soon
Upon this wild abandoned star
And I’m full of love
And I’m full of wonder
And I’m full of love
And I’m falling under
Your spell”*
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SOUNDTRACK:
* “Spell” (Nick Cave & The Bad Seeds)
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(19 votes, average: 3.84 out of 5)
wow, great update. Hopefully Carmen finds the answers she needs in therapy. And I LOL about Mercedes with a bucket of cold water.