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Her Guardian – Chapter 34
Meanwhile in the water, Bette is alert to a feeling that something just wasn’t right. The hair was standing up on the back of her neck. She grabs the cable as soon as it is in reach and hooks it to her belt immediately. She gives the “thumbs up” signal to Shane to raise her from the water. Bette scans the area around her, praying that everything will be ok for the sake of all these kids watching. It has to be ok, for Tina and all these kids.
Back on land, no one but Jodi has any idea that something may be wrong out there. Tim continues his narration of the incident.
As Bette is being hoisted from the water, she feels it. A presence, a very large menacing presence, in the water with her. Dear God no, not in front of Tina and all these children. Please God.
From her position in the helicopter, Shane can see it. A large shadow near the surface of the water, just below Bette. She watches in slow motion as Bette begins to be lifted from the water. Shane wills the cable motor to move faster, to no avail. As Bette’s feet are at the ocean surface, Shane sees the fin. She watches as it appears just at the surface of the water.
Bette wasn’t watching the water; she was looking up at Shane. She could see the fear in Shane’s eyes and she knew exactly what was causing it. She felt her feet start to clear the water, but knew she wasn’t out of danger yet. God please, please let me make it through this. Don’t do this to Tina. Don’t do it to the kids.
Shane feels completely helpless. She doesn’t look at Bette. She watches the water under Bette as the dorsal fin grows closer and then suddenly disappears under the ocean surface.
As Shane pulls Bette into the copter, they share a meaningful look. They both know how close Bette just came. “Look at this,” Shane shows Bette the rescue dummy which has its left leg bitten off just below the knee.
They both immediately turn back around and stare out the open side door of the helicopter into the water. They stare at the ocean looking for any sign of life. The water looks so peaceful and serene. No sign of trouble anywhere.
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(46 votes, average: 3.54 out of 5)
Thank you for this story. I have missed it. Great update. Jodi! Jodi! I hope she gets what she deserves.
glad to see this story back also. jodi is one sick puppy…please have her meet the fate she was planning for bette.
Welcome back! Thanks for the chapter, and I hope your November is a calm and happy one.
Dr Brennen? Forensic anthropoligist, slick insert there but I got it
I was so happy to see you have posted another chapter of this really interesting story! Thank you. Sorry you have had so much drama in real life, hope things are better now.
Welcome back again. I love this story, I hate Jodi always have. Lt Porter please arrest Jodi and let sharks have her. PPVS
So glad to see you are back!!!! Hope all is well with the rekindled relationship!!! This story is AWESOME!!thank you
Great to see you back here ldw604 & glad for you that things are looking up. Please try not to wait to long to let us know what you have in mind for Jodi. Thank you Md aka Oma
Thanks for the update. It sounds like your life has been a roller coaster ride lately. I hope things settle down for you.
Hei!!! where is you – to continue the history please
Good to have you back. Good luck with all the new stuff!
I agree with skycaptain. And welcome back.
Welcome back. Great update! Can’t wait to see Jodi get what she deserves. Here’s to hoping that you have a calmer period in your life. Post when you can.
Welcome back..wow I hope Jodie gets whats coming to her…can we say attempted murder??
Wow, good to have you back! Great update. By the way: I hate Jodi!
Your baaaaack! I thought you’d forgotten about this little story! So glad to see the update. Sounds like you had a full plate while you were away. Glad you’re back and it sounds like things are lookin’ up.
I’m glad this is back (and one of my favorite characters in books AND tv had a cameo!). Thanks for the post!
Jodi!!!welcome back.
glad your back sorry to hear about your relationship ending i know what you are going thru on that count. it was a great update and please post when you can. i understand life sometimes gets in the way.
It’s great to see a post of this story! I hope the end is near for Jodi. Thanks for posting!
Welcome back, I missed this story. Hope that life is beginning to settle down some what. Glad that they have already a suspect in mind.
hi just finished reading your last chapter of this story,please come back soon!
Oh No is that it?!
Great Story but would have liked to see Jodi get her just deserts!
that little airhead! how dare she try and get the one and only Bette Porter killed. Please tell me you coming back to update soon and I mean we need justice for Bette…ok it’s not like she died or anything but you know what I mean. Jodi will really go all the way won’t she…arghhh why is she in here again? but this story was good