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HEREAFTER. Chapter 28. uneven
Upon feeling Bettes hand stop hers, Tina thought for a second she had hurt her, but as soon as her eyes landed on Bettes she knew different, no words were necessary, it was clearly written on Bettes face.
Bette looked at her as if asking for something, Tina was there motionless, anticipating the request her lips slightly parted, needing to take a little more air to her lungs, her heart was beating way faster and Bette didnt even lay a finger on her yet.
Moving herself to a sitting position, Bette pulled Tina to sit on top of her
Bette, baby, you knee
Bette keep looking her in such way that Tina felt as if were actually seeing her for the first time, a bit self conscious for her scrubbed face she felt shy, not the perfect makeup and the negligee she had envisioned, but then again Bettes face was as clean and scrubbed as hers and Tina felt she just could keep gazing at forever,
Bette kept the stare and her hands went to untie the robe Tina was wearing, Tinas chest was up and down with expectation, it was obvious to Tina that Bette was in no hurry, it was obvious to her she needed to speak her mind, even at the risk of ruin the moment
Bette baby, are you sure?….. Because I dont think Ill be able to stop if we start….
By that time Bette had manage to open the robe and her hands went to firmly grip Tinas waist, a sigh of surprise escaped Tina as if her body didnt knew that was bound to happen
Finally Bette found her voice to say something So Beautiful it was a reverence and Tina felt like burning alive, then Bette surprise her more so,
Tee, would you love me?
Bette Porter wasnt taking, she was asking to be taken.
And Tina did, there was very little that could have prevent her from doing so, because this was a gift from god and although undeserving, She was taking it!
For the first time Tina felt she held some power and all the tumult of emotions where now erased for a stronger one, Love. She didnt hesitate, not for a second because she was sure of what she wanted and for now she felt Bette was right there with her in the same page.
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(83 votes, average: 3.55 out of 5)
It is about time,Bette. Need to see the morning after,Bette better stay in bed cuddling Tina.
Whoa… you’re gooood! That was DamN girl! Great job!
i absolutely love this story and wait everyday for a new chapter, the only suggestion would be to check spelling errors
OMG. So good. That was like watching the show. So intense.
this is hot and sensual and loving all at the same time. wow, fantastic writing. please post soon. thanks for writing! :)
Wow! What a great way to put apicture in our heads on how Bette and tina’s first time together from being apart would be. Great Job.
Hot, hot super hot!! More soonest!!
Wow! What a hot day in the life of fanfiction!!! Between this and Cramit’s chapter today I am going insane! You are just too good…I can’t wait until they catch their breath! Thanks
Wow! What a hot day in the life of fanfiction!!! Between this and Cramit’s chapter today I am going insane! You are just too good…I can’t wait until they catch their breath! Thanks
Suspiroooooooooooo. Great, T. Make them talk, they have to talk a huge lot yet.
Whoa…my hands are trembling and it’s hard to swallow…that was hot.
Beautiful,so hota d damn sexy. They do need to talk. thank
OMG..this is so hot so right and so perfect. Wonderful thanks