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Hidden Secrets Pt. 7
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While Mark was pacing back and forth in the waiting room… Kit and Dana was trying to get Alice to sit still… Alice was talking a mile a minute with anyone who walked in… she had already scared off two expecting parents in the process.. and when it looked like they were going to be there for a while Jenny pulled Carmen off to the side… in all the excitement she hadn’t had a chance to ask Carmen to move in… so they stepped into the quite hallway…
"What’s up Jen" Carmen asked… not quite understanding why they had to talk in private…
"um… I had this idea and i talked it over with Shane earlier and we were wondering if you’d like to rent the studio.. i mean with mark leaving we have the space…" before she could finish Carmen was already hugging her, while trying to jump up and down..
"OMG are you serious…. yes that would be great" she hugged jenny again but when she pulled back her face fell "SHIT!!"
"What… whats wrong Carmen" jenny asked as Carmen pulled her back into the waiting room…
"SHANE… with all the fuss over Tina.. we left her on the phone" Carmen’s declaration of their stupidity caught every ones attention..
"shit… shes probably freaking out by now" jenny mentally kicked herself… she was after all the one who put the phone back on the hook…
"Mark.. you have your cell.. mines in D’s car.." Alice asked… looking over at mark who already had his phone out and was punching in the access code…
"ya.. i got it" he said as he waited for Shane to answer… after 7 rings he hung up "she’s not picking up"
"how could we have been so stupid" Dana said causing everyone to look at her "what its not like Shane.."
"what about me" Shane’s strained voice coming from the door behind everyone, causing them to jump… before turning around to find Shane holding the door frame as her breathing returned to normal… she ran up 8 floors because the elevator was apparently to slow… she was shaking but no one noticed… before leaving the clinic she was forced to take more muscle relaxers but they were only making her feel worse…
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fuckin’ awesome!!! I want more like now!!!! Wanna’ know what’s gonna’ happen next, so don’t keep me or the othas waitin’ to long, Babe =D Anyways, like always from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p . . . HoLlA aT mE!!!
i love this fic, could read it all night and day please post again soon.
tbc… oh tbc. how you torture me so. thanks for the update.
Awesome, keep on going please. thanks
really cool love Carmen and Sean they are so cute in this fic. But…want more cutenesss lol update soon
I like it. Love to see the gang together
Oh, I almost forgot. I loved Carmen’s little flash of jealousy. That was great.
I had posted a comment on the previous chapter, because I thought it was the last one. Then (surprise!!) I see that it’s not. Well, I’m glad, because now it feels like I didn’t have to wait for an update. Anywho, like I mentioned before, I like the way the story is progressing. I can see that Shane will seriously put her strength and resolve to the test before she’s home free, but you know how that old tune goes, “you’ve got to go through hell before you get to heaven.” Keep it up.
Oh. My. God. Pleeaaasee update soon, this is so awesome! I really love it! So please please don`t let me hang too long ;-)