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Hindsight – Chapter 37
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Would I piss all over him…, not the most lady like behaviour I had displayed, but in the circumstances…, I would call it well justified…, so that was a yes…, I would…
Jesus Christ…, why did the fucking roads seem longer when you wanted them to be shorter, twenty minutes was the norm for a trip to Alice’s, I should be cutting at least five minutes off that with the time of night that it was…, midnight…, Jesus…, something had to be going on…, midnight for god sake…, I’d fucking kill him…
My mind was all over the place, surprisingly my car was managing to keep to the road…, I needed to keep an eye for any flashing blue lights…, I really didn’t care what speed I was going, but my drivers license did, and with accruing unnecessary violations recently, then it was best to dodge the flashing blue lights and…, breathe…, deep breaths…
Why was it that in times of distress…, times when you mind should be focused on what was ahead that it wandered…, was that avoidance tactics of preparing yourself for the worst…, preparing yourself for the unknown…
Jesus, why didn’t someone just tell me what was going on, rather than just have me driving the streets of LA at midnight to go to Alice’s…
Surely if it was something majorly wrong I’d be driving toward the hospital…, surely…, oh fuck…
The hospital…, what if something had gone wrong between her calling me and when I got there…, where is my cell…, shit…, fuck… fuck… fuck…, I left my fucking cell at home…
Okay two more streets and would be there…
My god…, I’ll kill him if he has done anything to her…, I couldn’t help the way my mind’s thoughts were travelling…, why else would Alice call me out at midnight and just say ‘It’s Tina…’
God…, please…, don’t let there be anything wrong with her…, please…, I’ll do anything…, absolutely anything…, I won’t piss on him…, I won’t feed his bollocks to the neighbours dog… or the crocs…, please I’ll do anything…, just so she will be okay…, I’ll even go to church…, please anything you can do…, do it for me…, for her…
I know I’d die a slow death if anything had happened to her…, I told her I would be there for her…, and I wasn’t…, I wasn’t there…
I should have made her stay with me earlier…, would this have happened id she stayed instead of went to him…
Jesus Christ…, I’ll never forgive myself if something has happened to her…
Alice’s apartment…, Jesus, I could see it now…, there it was, just a little further, nearly there…, come on…, why did people have to park on both sides of the road…, oh fuck where do I park…, ah a space…, quickly…, reverse…, okay…
I take a deep breath and then let it out slowly…, I couldn’t help but cover my eyes, my head was banging harder than when I had obliterated myself with alcohol the day she left…, I don’t think I had a coherent thought for about four days and a hangover that just wouldn’t disappear…, maybe that was because I had continued to abuse my body with alcohol most days since…, apart from today…
Hell fire…, I hadn’t touched a drop today…, but geez I could do with a quick shot of JD right now…, just to feel that heat down in my chest…, Dutch courage…
I take the steps two at a time…, was that my heart pounding that loud thud or was it my footsteps as I rushed toward the door…
There it was…, just a few feet away from me…, the corridors were quiet, her apartment seemed quiet…
My hand clenched as I brought it up in front of me…, I knocked it hard against the door, I knocked again…
I held my hands against the frame, leaning my head against the flat of the door…
‘Come on Alice…, please open the door…’
There was silence…, just a low hum of noise coming from an adjacent apartment…
My nerves overtook me then…, my nerves that were torn to shreds…
I knocked again…, much harder… and with the knock my voice echoed through the empty corridor…
“Alice… open the fucking door…”
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Please let Tina be ok!
“Okay – 2 apologies are in order” Nonsense Jo, you don’t owe us a thing. just be aware that cliffhangers left too long causes bald readers as they tear their hair out. We’ll all look like Britney if you don’t continue. ;-)
You have a mean streak. Tyre? Isn’t that an ancient Levantine city? What happened to Bette’s odometer?
okay jo this isnt FUNNY and give that damn hat back to ally there is only room for one drama queen she has the title.thxs for my almost heart attack whats up with these cliffys now? p.p.s.
Okay. Right. That is just. Not. On. I’m pretty sure, not positive, mind, but *pretty sure* that my blood pressure has just spiked to completely dire levels… C’mon, Jo, you’re killing me here… (Great chapter, btw.) Post again before I flatline…
Ok, that was just cruel… I think you’re getting (way too) comfortable with that Drama Queen hat of yours. Damn it, Jo….! I don’t know if I should be pissed at you for being such a tease or if I should just admit that I love your teasing… Hmmmfff!!!! LOL…. *sigh* like I said… please let Tina be safe. This story is seriously giving me an ulcer….
God you’re evil!!!!!
Okay, what the hell was that Jo? I hope that wen I come back there had better to be anohter post, which should be within the next 5 seconds! lol :)
Did you seriously just do what I think you did???… Okay, just so that you know, all my hand nails are bitten off, and I’m about to start on my toes now…! And Jo, go on like this and that drama award is yours! … Scratch that, don’t go on like this, please tell us what the hell is going on…!!! Oh, but no, that would spoil that little dramaqueen growing seed of yours, which by the way, clearly indicates that you’re spending way to much time with Ally! Oh, and I can see it coming big time that next chap’ is gonna be Tina’s POV right when she leaves Bette’s house! And there you go leading us on for at least two more chapters…! But hey, that’s your genius, and what makes you the best! And you what? I LOVE IT!!!! Thanks Jo, but please post soon… ;)
wow i think im more anxious than Bette lol you mean Jo!! Can’t you update like NOW?!! :P
Jo, we’re going to need you to stop talking to ally! we can’t have both of you living us hanging off the end of a cliff by our fingertips!! lol. pps!
Oh man, not again. Now I will be restless the rest of the day and night until you post the next chapter. Please make it soon before I go crazy with worry.
SO not funny. You can´t say sorry for leaving us with one cliffy and 2 sec. later you do it again. That Slytherin hat of yours has just got to go.
i agree with nanc…..lmao……post again soon….not so sure i would look good if i looked like a bald britney!!!
Okay, that last line was supposed to be “And you know what?”… But you probably figured…;)
That was evil, just plain evil PPPPPS
JO! You would be responsable for a lot of women´s heart atack around here, honey… The ERs would be full on town… Post soon…like… NOW!
tease
Oh that’s so not fair!!! You better be posting in the next 10 minutes because once I post mine I am gonna be here stalking your post! Cruel….but very well written as I am on the edge of my seat Jo!
i believe you have something belonging to me – look i don/t write hot sex scenes like so freaking stop the DQ stuff cos i’m going to get lynched here – or was that your intention you old tart ???
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEVIL! *runs off to read the next chapter*
what’s up????
I can’t believe you did that! Give me that damn &%$@!(&% hat !!!!!