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Home – Chapter 1
I rolled her over on her back and took hold of her engorged nipple into my mouth. I bit down on it lightly as my tongue flickered it. Her body squirmed underneath me, struggling to contain her needs. She was such a control freak, and although she loved sex, she didn’t love the part where she was completely under the control of someone else. She struggled with her ability to let go of the need to dominate, and just allow herself to be dominated and pleased. My fingers found her drenched center, and I moved them in and out of her at a rapid pace while my mouth continued tantalizing the ‘ladies’ that were proud and at total attention.
“Fuck yes….oh god…….faster……..right there…..juust….juuuust….like that”
Jenny’s hands held my head firmly in the place she wanted me to stay. It wasn’t a request, it was more of a command.
Jenny was on the edge. Her insides tightened up and clamped down on my fingers at the moment she climaxed.
“OHHHH FUUUUUCKKKKKKK” She screamed into the still air of the room.
Jenny was screaming and cumming as Tim was coming through the door, ironic huh… We both looked up at him in shock. The vain in his neck was jumping and his look huge like on the cartoons. He yanked Jenny up towards him and growled at me to get my clothes on.
“Get the fuck out of this house" he yelled.
Jenny was crying, telling him she was sorry, she did not want him to find out this way.
I was finally dressed. I headed toward the door.
“Marina! Stay the fuck away from my wife” yelled Tim.
I calmly walked out the door and too my car. On the way back to the Planet it hit me we got caught screwing in Tim’s house by him, what did that mean for Jenny? I hit the dash board. I pulled into the parking lot of the Planet and saw that it was full. I walked inside, welcoming the distraction of the customers.
The night went by quickly. When I got a chance to call Jenny, it went straight to voice mail. I left a message for her to call me. After the bartender left, I told Kit she could leave, I would close up. She left. A few minutes later I heard the door open.
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(32 votes, average: 3.63 out of 5)
T!!!! It’s great hun! Sorry it took a while to get the “hot” in there, but I was busy pampering someone this weekend, cooking, and doing the Cancer Society’s walk. I was going to send you the “hotness” but decided, eh! just add it in there and get this story moving along. I hope you approve of it. I must say, that I do like the story in the “first” person. I found that you can be so much more stronger in relating the emotional element to the story and dialogue when you delve into the narration in this form. Excellent choice my friend. It reminds me that I need to get moving on “A Life Denied” as that too is in the first person. BRAVO!! You’re idea is now brought to life on paper. I know I created a monster, but I can’t tell you I would have done anything different. I liked encouraging you to write, and I have a couple of other newbies ready to take the same journey in the near future. Love and Hugs hun. Talk to you soon. XOXO
The adventures of Marina I love it! She is such a dynamic character with such mystery and grace. She is such a fun character to read; by far my favorite. I like where you’re taking this.
WOW this is a nice change,not many marina stories out there i love it.lets see where this goes lady.GREAT JOB!marina has this mystery about her and i think this is going to be another great story looking forward to reading more of it.p.p.s.
I was afraid it was a Jenny story lol. Just kidding, I knew it was not. Do you remember when Marina was speaking in french in Ep 1 or 2 of S 4? hehe… The way you write it, I think Im gonna like Jodie and Marina together. C’est une très bonne idée…see, I didn’t forget this time lol.
Ooohh a story with Marina, a nice change; i like it so far =)
okayyy.. i know this is really a LATE LIKE REALLY REALLY LATE COMMENT… but its better than nothin..well here goes… ermm i dont know if i shld smile or cry wen i read thsi cuz its JENNYYYYYYY… THE CRAZY ONE… is thsi gonna be her story.. i hope not.. lmao.. ill read more.. and comment more on next one…