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Home to Stay, til the 12th of Never, Epilogue Finale
Epilogue Part 4
“Take it off.” Tina demanded.
Bette reached for the bottom of the dress and then pulled it off over her head. She tossed the dress carelessly aside.
Bette stood before her in a black lace push up bra, black lace crotchless panties, a black lace garter belt, black silk stockings and black three inch heels. The ebony eyes were smoldering with passion and locked on the blonde waiting to see how she would respond. She shook out her hair knowing that would further test the blonde’s control.
Bette almost thought that she could see Tina’s nostrils flare. There was no mistaking the flush that washed over her. Tina’s blood was racing.
“You are so mine.” The blonde declared, claiming her with her words and eyes. Tina took off her own shirt and then her trousers. She wore a matching black bikini set which contrasted with her ivory skin. Tina advanced across the room and the sound of heavy breathing filled the air. “Don’t move.” Tina laced her fingers through the brunette tresses loving the silky feel through her fingers. Bette’s lips slightly bruised from earlier kisses and reddened from her lipstick tantalized her.
She ran her tongue over the soft surface eliciting a moan from Bette who opened her mouth further inviting her in. She licked the outer surface of her opened lips boldly leaving her lover wanting more but not giving it to her yet.
Tina was not sure how long she could refrain from entering her ready lover. She wished for a strap on to fuck her properly. She would just have to improvise. She shifted her attention to the long graceful honey colored neck and licked her again this time from her shoulder to her ear. Bette began to tremble and Tina knew that she had hit the mark. “Do you need to sit down babe? You seem to have weak knees all of a sudden.” Tina said smugly.
The ebony eyes opened and looked into the hazel eyes filled with teasing lust. The heat between them flared. The ebony gaze was mocking and confident suggesting she could take all that her wife had to offer. Not only was she sure that she could take it she looked forward to it. Tina’s clit throbbed in response.
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(35 votes, average: 4.69 out of 5)
You all are killing me here, 89 views and not a single comment…turnabout is fair play huh…
This story is so fucking hot, it should be outlawed.I don’t recall you writing such a hot NC-17 like this before. Definitely at the top of the hotness scale.
No shit!thats was kinda worth all the teasing you did to us.*wink*kelika that was awsome smokin hot and it was about damn time,plus the best part u left it wide opened for another chapter.off for a cold shower now before bed shit i shoulda known better.lol please come back to us babe,please
Turnabout is truly fair play (lol)! That or everyone had a heart attack and couldn’t respond. The ER may be full of your fans. This story has been a hell of a ride. Is it really over? If so, thank you, if not, looking forward to what’s next!!!
Okay that was incredibly hot. Geez. I think I need a cold shower. So is the story really over??? or is there more to come so to speak??
HOT HOT HOT! Love it!! PPS
No way you are allowed to peacefully ride off into the sunset, you must continue
*note forwarded from the Doctorthis is to inform Miss Kelika that we have her loyal fan Tanisha here with us as she couldn’t handle the voltage of the chapters that u write. So we advice u that inorder for her to recover u should definitely continue this story!!We believe in treating with Heat with more Heat. So Bring on the H E A T with B&T :) Thank you p.s Tanisha sends u hugs&kisses :)
*disclaimer: the state Tanisha is in she cannot be blamed for any typos in the earlier comment :)
Oh GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!. I really don’t know what to say except, WONDERFUL. 89 views and no comments, well they couldn’t right away, you left everyone speechless and over-wrought. They had to take care of things first. You MUST continue this story. It simply can not send now. WE LOVE IT.
You didn’t just try to evoke the memory of the earlier scene, you brought it all forward and then some.
Kelika *THUD*
wow that was hot..you really need to keep writing because i really need to read more ;)
Damn, I’m speechless. Your provocative Tina takes the cake. Please, Neka’s Baby Jesus, make it so!
It may be kind of difficult to leave a comment after that chapter. I need relief so I am going to put my head in the freezer for about a minute. Whew, now I feel better. That was burning, sizzling, incredably hot chapter. Bette in that dress and Tina in silk that is one mean combination, just like peanut butter and jelly. Awesome story, please do not stop writing. Oh BTW keep Bette and Tina together and no one else.
Damn that was so fucking hot and sexy!!!!!!!!
Not the end. More pretty, pretty, please :)
Well. That’s one heck of a way to start my day. That was just… words fail me, kel. Just the usual ones: wow, hot, amazing… You maybe get the idea, but my praise isn’t going to live up to your writing, so I’ll shush now. Thanks for this, kelika. Write your next soon, and I’ll be around to read it.
eh? I thought u said this story was over, the end !!! BUT u just left me dangling…that’s not fair play!!!!!no wonder no one commented???!!! Lol, u deserve it for being such a bloody tease…not really gf, u know I love your writing!!!!
DJEESUUUSS Maria mother of god!!!!This as so fu***ng hot!!! THIS I WHAT I CALL HOTNESS!!!!
Kelika, Thanks for this story. Good pacing, teasing that kept us on our toes,(or somewhere), great dialogue. Always love an Alpha Tina! Thanks for writing!
OMFG! What a way to wake up. Please continue.
I have such a weakness for f*ck me heels – Good God woman!
DAAAMMMNN, girl! I am most definitely in need of a cold shower. When I saw the post I thought after all of the teasing this is the chapter or maybe not. Looks like another story might pick up where this one left off. MORE, MORE, MORE please.
“I need whatever the fuck you are willing to give me.” damn Kelika that was crazy hot! Are you going for the next cold shower award? I think you just nailed it. Well done. I need to go cool off now.
kelika – the reason why you had 89 views and not a single comment is if like me most of your fans where in a complete and utter state of shock that it was reallllllly over. I know I reread the post three times. Then I had to go make a cup of tea in the vein, distant, crossing fingers and toes that you where just doing your nightly tease … And leaving us hanging out there and any minute the next post would magically appear.But alas I fear that this story maybe over..This was smoking red hot and I requesting as one of your adoring fans… for a sequel to it….
wow is all I can say f***** crazy hotttttttttt
Blowminding, girl! I agree completely with chelseagal! This is more than hot:)
GOOD GOD girl, what are you trying to do to me??? I need an extremely COLD shower…loved this story.
On the scale of Richter, it would be a 10 of Hotness :D THANKS !