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    Honesty chapter 11

    Story written on June 26, 2008 by djrk.
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    Author Notes:

    Did Tina respond to Kate Ardens name

     

    The nurse was interested to see if there would be another reaction, “Move your hand and see if she reacts.”

     

    Bette tried to pull her hand away and Tina’s grip tightened. “She won’t let go. She won’t let go of my hand!”

     

    The nurse encouraging Bette, “Talk to her.”

     

    “Tina,   T,    baby it’s me. It’s Bette.” She is gripping my hand harder!” Tears start to fall.

     

    The nurse tells her to keep talking.

     

    “I love you Tina. Can you open your eyes and look at me.”

     

    With all the strength her frail body could muster, Tina’s eyes began to open slightly. She furrowed her eyebrows as if to indicate the light hurt her eyes.

     

    “Tina squeeze my hand if you can hear me.”

     

    Tina gently squeezed.

     

    The nurse leaves to call the neurologists. Bette keeps talking to Tina. She wants her to hear everything.

     

    “Tina, squeeze my hand if you understand what I am saying to you.”

     

    Tina squeezed.

     

    “Do you remember being in an accident?”

     

    Tina does not respond

     

    “Tina, you’re in the hospital, ICU. you were in an automobile accident. You were talking to Kate and you were hit by a huge SUV. Do you remember any of it?”

     

    No response.

     

    Tina, opening her eyes a bit more as they adjust to the light, looks around with her eyes, she does not move her head.

     

    “Tina are you in pain?” Bette is sure that the grimace on her face is something other than the light.

     

    Tina squeezes her hand with more strength.

     

    “Can you tell me where you hurt?”

     

    Tina shuts her eyes. She tries to open her mouth to speak but nothing happens.

     

    “Let me get you a damp cloth.” Bette is now in overdrive to reach into Tina’s mind. She disappears toward the nurse’s station, but the nurse is a step ahead of her.

     

    “I’ve been through this a time or two.” She smiles warmly at Bette.

     

    The nurse is on one side of the bed and Bette is on the other. Tina’s eyes are open wider now and they show her fear.

     

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    4. sorry I sliped behind again, but catching up it was hard to breath. These are early days for recovery but we just CANNOT have any lingering problems for Tina, Ok, please. Thank you, Md

    5. Glad that Tina is waking up hopefully the doctors can find what is causing the pain in her head. Probably hurts because she was banged around in the vehicle during the wreck and hopefully with time the pain will lesen. Until she can tell them exactly how and where it hurts it is really a guessing game. The brain is so fragile. So happy that she has awakened, that will give Bette more hope for a full and complete recovery. She just has to be okay, they deserve that chance to be a loving family. PPS

    7. Wow, Kate as a supportive friend is a different spin. I am so glad that Tina is awake and hope that she will be speaking soon. Poor Alice this has to be rough seeing Tina in a terrible situation after losing Dana.

    11. So…Tina was talking to Kate when she had the wreck. I knew she was bad luck when I first laid eyes on her. I don’t care if your Kate is a softer and kinder JINX!

    12. Very realistic! Wow! You sticked to all the minor and significant details, as far as commatose people are! Really AWSOME! We love where you are leading this story. We surely welcome the ride. Take us along with you. PPS Lucero & Marsha (JC’s Salsa Aunties)

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