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Honesty chapter 2
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The hour drive out of the city flew by quickly as the car drove through the countryside. Bette thinks to herself how beautiful and peaceful it is. The air is brisk and the sun is shining brightly as the car slows to a stop near the edge of a field. There is a long dirt road to walk to arrive at the location of the artwork. As Bette paid the driver, her thoughts were as dusty as her boots were about to get. She could not understand her indecisiveness. Did she love Jodie?
As she walked up the dirt road, she could see activity in the distance. The closer she got she could see the two large crates and a few people milling around. As she walked, she could see Jodie. The closer she got the quicker her heartbeat. Her breath was quick and her chest ached. Jodie had her back to the road so she never saw Bette walking toward her. Tom saw Bette just as she reached your hand out to touch Jodie’s shoulder. Jodie turned to Bette. Tom turned to Bette. He began to sign there conversation.
“Bette, I am so glad you came. I cannot believe that you stole that fucking sign for me.”
Jodie started to cry as Bette grabbed her by the back of the neck and drew her close to her.
“I’m sorry. I am so sorry ….. I’m sorry for all of my actions. I’m sorry for all of the ill chosen words. I am sorry that I hurt you. I want to make it right. Bette signed with a sense of regret.
“I love you. I have missed you. Don’t break my fucking heart”.
Were Bette’s ears deceiving her. What did she say? She loves me, she missed me? I wasn’t expecting that. I thought I had this all straight in my mind. What the fuck do I do now? What do I say? This was a peace offering. A grand apology. Tina, you didn’t prepare me for this!
Bette could not say anything. She couldn’t speak. She couldn’t sign. She was incapable of any expression except for the tears now running down her cheeks.
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Well, that went about like I thought it would now let’s get Bette back to Tina and Baby Angie.Tina and Bette belong together. Jodie could never get used to having Angie around and didn’t want to be around her. enough said. Happy it’s over for those two. Get Bette back to CA and her two special loves. Let them open up to each other when Bette gets back, it just has to happen. PPS
Bette should just give up trying to form a friendship with jodi and just get on the first plane back to Tina and Angie.While she is in New York (wasting her time with Jodi) she is missing time with her daughter and Tina (not good)Bette get your arse back to LA girl!!!!!like others have said,you really should have written your version for the show because it is ssssssssssooooooooooo much better than their version. :) PPS thanks
Just found your story and look forward to the next chapter. Hopefully, the honesty will continue when she sees Tina. I never saw the connection between Bette and Jodie to be anything more than friends, at best… no chemistry.
I don’t think Bette knew that she was going to do that when she first got on that plane to NY. I think in her head she had planned to reunite with jodi, but when push came to shove Tina will always be in her heart.
That is what I’m talking about..not get Bette’s ass on a plane and back to Tina. ; )
As much as I’m not a big Jodi fan, Bette should have attached a note, stating that this was an apology. But, then again I think she was flying by the seat of her pants. Ironic how her thought was that “Tina” had not prepared her for that. HEllo, that’s because she wants your ass back home with her. I have no doubt that Bette loves Tina, I think she’s just scared because she’s not sure how Tina feels. So get your butt back home and find out.
Wow, that was brilliant. I know that Bette did the right thing but unknowingly she rubbed salt in Jodie’s wound. I do think she needed to know that she wouldn’t cave in at Jodie’s begging before she returned to Tina. Now if you can just get them to admit to each other their feelings.
yeah, bette still hasn’t learned that she can’t control another persons feelings and responses…sad, because she’s hurt jodi but jodi will recover…bette belongs with her family wherever they are…
Bette did the right thing and now let her go home to Tina !
Bette did the right thing. Her heart belongs to Tina. PPS!!
Wow, the show writers should have hired you. I am with skycaptain though, FED EX, UPS BETTE!. She’s knows her heart will always belong with Tee.
History and a child are not of themselves going to be enough to keep Bette and Tina together. I’m getting Bette’s overwhelming love for Angelica, but her love for Tina is not as clear to me. Sounds like Bette is still uncertain about that. Look forward to reading what happens next!
FED EX definitely might have worked but it is so NOT Bette. She needs to connect personally with those in her life. I wish the writers of TLW would have used this approach in the show – it really makes more sense for Bette to go to New York with an apology rather than as an attempt to bring Jodi back with her. Bette was pulling away from Jodi before her exhibition. On top of that, Jodi takes the job in NY and resigns her position at CU without even speaking with Bette. That would seem to indicate that their relationship as lovers was over. Oh well! Thanks for posting the story. I’m looking forward to Bette’s return to LA… PPS!!!
it is about time bette came to her senses and she should have never flew to NY if she had any doubts, the break would have went better! awesome update yeah no tractor now lets get bette home to tins ASAP :)PPS
this may sound bad…but if she wasn’t going to “be” with jodie…she could have fed-ex that sign with a note…her being there along with the sign sent mixed messages. i would have thought she loved me and wanted me too. more please.