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Honesty chapter 9
“Miss Porter, Miss Kennard was in a very, very serious automobile accident. She was wearing a seat belt and that is the only reason she is alive at this moment. The crash was so violent that although she had a seat belt on, the collision was horrific, we are waiting on x-ray results but, we feel as though there may be a brain injury. She is not responding ….”
“No! She knows I am here. She heard me speaking to her.” Bette looked up at the doctor, her eyes filled with tears only to see him gently shake his head.
“Did she respond to you in some way?”
“No, but she heard me … I know she did.”
“She well may have but, unfortunately until she responds appropriately, we have to assume that she cannot. She is not responding so, we are classifying her as in a comatose state at this time. Other than some relatively minor abrasions, the laceration to her scalp as a result of her impact with the side window and the cut on her knee which will need to be sutured, we are at a wait and see standpoint. When we feel as though she is stable, we will send her up to ICU.” The doctor tried to make all of this as gentle as possible but, there is no good way to tell a family member the devastating details.
“I need to go out to talk to my family. I will be right back. Please come and get me if anything changes.”
Bette turned to walk back to the waiting room but she stole one quick glance at Tina. Her eyes were full of pain at the sight of Tina lying there motionless.
When Bette arrived back in the emergency waiting room, Kit and Alice had been joined by Shane, Helena and Angus. Everyone was overwrought with grief. Shane was the first to reach Bette as she walked into the room. Shane’s arm felt strong around Bette. Holding her she walked back to the chairs so that Bette could sit. As they gathered around, the gasp from Bette was as if she were drowning in her tears, “She’s alive but comatose”. The collective silent chorus of thank you was barely audible but felt deep in the souls of all.
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(27 votes, average: 4.15 out of 5)
Thank God, Tina cannot die and leave Bette. Not to mention, you do not want all the hate mail that you would surely receive ;) Glad to see that you did a second post. Whew! Great story, need to get a new box of Kleenex out before you post again.
Thank you, Thank you, Thank you!!! PPS
Bette will pull her through this!!
sigh…..thank you!
So happy that Tina is alive.now with the help and love of her family and Bette she will get better thanks
OMG! My computer died right after Bette recieved the call so I’ve been waiting two days to see what happened.I don’t know whether to be happy or sad happy that It wasn’t some secret lover Tina had been seeing, or sad that Tina had to suffer such a horific accident. I know she’ll pull through her love for Bette and Angelica will pull her through. PPS
Thanks god Tina are ok and hope she will wake up soon!
I was this close to stop reading because I can’t read stories when one of our favorites characters dies ! It makes me cry too much :D But THEre is HOpe that’s she’s alive !PLEASE I HOPE SHE’S OKAY !!! gREAT STORY
I hate truck drivers, really i do…
what a relief that Tina did not die,you had me worried a bit there.Even though is was a sad post it was still a great chapter.Hope Bette will pull Tina through and that she recovers quickly. PPS
u scared the shyt out of me so much i couldn’t read the last 2 chapters fully…plz don’t do that again (Lol) pps
thank goodness for hope.
I am glad that Tina is alive!!!! Bette will be there to help Tina through this. Sad but very good. Thanks PPS
tina has got to get better! i am glad she is alive… :)PPS
Commentary/commentators. …You’re the Decider and I hope you decide that Tina will live happily ever after.
Bette and the family will help Tina through, at least that is what I am hoping for.