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“Hoops & Layups” – Chapter 5
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“So where is your new place?”
“Jodie found a two bedroom apartment for me. It is downtown. A twenty minute drive to the Cleveland Assassin’s Center”
Kit put the last box in her truck. “Man….you realize how much shit you have when it comes time to finally pack it all up.
“I know…..so my place is 10min from Daddy’s, and it is huge. The inside walls are great for the art I plan to put up”
It took about a half hour for all of us to unload all the stuff from both cars, and then I decide to treat Bink’s and Kit to lunch as a thank you for helping me move. We order Thai and stay in so we don’t miss the delivery guys that are bringing my bed. We all sit on the floor watching the Birds of Prey, chatting and eating.
“I’ll be right back” I tell them as I grab the box labeled ‘bathroom items’ on it.
A few minutes goes by before Kit calls from outside the door.
“Damn baby girl, did you fall in the toilet?”
“No” I tell her as she opens the door.
“Oh…you were setting up the bathroom”
“I’ll be done in a sec”
We unpack a couple of more boxes when the guys finally arrive with my bed and dresser.
“I need to get back to the Planet” she says as we hug. “call me later”
After everyone leaves, except Bink’s. I ask her if she would stay the night.
“There is no place I would rather be” she replies.
I laid out some PJ’s while she jumps in the shower. I retrieved my book while I was waiting for her to come out. I am a few pages into Lovely Bones, feeling I am already being captured by the story when she comes out.
“I’m all yours now…which side do you want…the left?
She gets into bed before I answer.
“I’m going to go and take my shower now”
“Okay”
When I get out, she is asleep, looking like a fragile, tiny girl in my big bed. I try to get in quietly when I hear her.
“I’m not asleep” she says without opening her eyes. “I am here…..I won’t let you get lost”
“I’m trying”
“I miss Maggie so much…..she has to be okay”
“Shhhh…she will be”
Within a short time, we both fall asleep. Each trying to save the other from drowning…even if it is only for one night.
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Hey you! WHO KEEPS WHO UP LATE AT NIGHT??? LMAO….hmm…let’s think about this. Who doesn’t SLEEP? LMAO! Actually I have told you before, you don’t keep me up, I have been up into the wee hours of the morning chatting it up with people. One gal is on the West Coast, so naturally when we talk, it is only 12AM there, and 300AM for me!! Wouldn’t it be something if we were all on the SAME time? Anyway, what can I say here that I don’t already tell you? The story is progressing nicely, great pace, good structure, and please……don’t give me any credit there sweetie, you are the creator of this fine story which you have given birth to. Keep em coming my friend. I have to jump in the shower now, it was a looooooong day. I have some rather humorous moments from my Grandfather’s funeral….all I kept saying was “only Charlie” I’ll share them with you when we chat.Take care my friend, and I’m loving it!!!!!!!!!!! PPS!
This was great! Your characters are evolving at a nice pace. Bette is ever the protector. I am glad she got the team she wanted….. Great chapter lady
once again great chapter and loving the characters that are coming into the story, continue please!!!
A great chapter, I love the Bette as the protector and I am looking forward to see her and Tina get to know each other real well if you catch my drift! ;-)
Hey Tylo, I read this chapter….then went back to read the others. Great job girl. Your writing has gotten better with each post. I’m enjoying your story….keep them coming. We can never have too many Bette& Tina stories…since IC doesn’t give them any lovin’
I’m a little on the lost side, but still a great chapter. Is it Saturday yet? Well, it’s still Saturday here but I mean in your story. lol
I really like the progress of your story, can’t wait until Saturday night! PPS.
The CAC stands for the Cleveland Assassin’s Centeer were they will play.. Sorry that was my mistake. Lament why r u lost? If u all have q ask but i might not answer them
Hey your Vols won. My alma mater did not even make it to the big dance. Pretty cool that you are bringing in AMC to your story but my favorite one is GH. Did you notice that daytime does such a better job of telling drama stories than the L word. Go figure, maybe they should hire someone from daytime to help them out. Maybe then we will get to see a B&T couple. I hope that Tina is on Bette’s mind and that their upcoming date is one that they never forget.
Great Chapter!!! Okkay, Bette got picked by the team that she wanted to play for but what about my girl Tina, where did she get a job at? Can’t wait for the next chapter.
hey jr.slacker!WHATS UP WITH THIS 3 PGS.STUFFlol you are getting better with this story and every 2 wks when ya post we can tell your putting your heart/soul into this and we love it even though some freind doesnt comment on it her loss babe. keep up the great work and its needs to be LONGER! p.p.s.
Omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i feel so bad now i post every 2 weeks that is so far in between post i will do bettter i promise!!!!!!!!!!!
Tylo you are f****n funny. I have no questions in fear you might not answer…LMFAO Great update…I really like it and well….Can’t wait for Sat.
A Great Chapter tylo!!!!! Your writing keeps getting better. I really like your story. Tina and Bette’s frist date can not wait. Thank you PPS
‘ Each trying to save the other from drowning…even if it is only for one night. ‘ That just absolutely left me speechless… PPS!
Hey its walks well its getting better with each post loving it and if it means less sleep so be it lol im not far behind you with about 5 – 6 but i need my beauty sleep fact i have a craving for olives right now :) keep up the good work x chiao x
Love it! You found the balance (“l’équilibre”, french word of the day lol), it’s funny but deep and touching at the same time… talent and imagination are yours, bravo Tylo!!!
Good chapter. Nice to see B&T are meet again and have lunch, and can’t wait to see their date on Saturday. Ok post soon please, thanks! Glad to catch up with your story and love it!
Great as usual. Looking forward to your next post.
I’m lost because I’m not sure who Binks and Maggie are and how they are connected to Bette. They were probably mentioned before and I forgot.
Like the AMC connection. Binks adds to the story well. Can’t wait for Bette and Tina to get together for a hot date LOL. The story is moving along great. talk to you soon :)
CALVIN & HOBBES!!!!!!!!!!!! HAHA.. good one tylo