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“Hoops & Layups” – Chapter 7
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“If you open your hips wider, but bring your feet closer and plant them here, your shot will be better”
“Really?” Bette asked in a low husky tone. “I need you to show me”
Tina remained standing behind Bette, her hands had never left her hips. She slid her right foot between Bette’s legs, thus forcing the rotation out, her hips opened more as she placed her feet on the base line now. Tina leaned back in and whispered.
“Remember, you have to be able to “feel” the stance….”feel” what your body is telling you” Tina said before placing the ball in Bette’s hand. “now…take a shot”
Tina looked into Bette’s eyes, which had now dilated, causing them to appear an even deeper color of brown.
"You expect me be able make the shot after that" she asked in a low voice.
“Why not? You’re a pro” Tina said with a small smirk.
Bette shook her head. “Yes….I am!” Confidently she released the ball and the ball went in.
“Anything else we need to work on?” Bette asked. “How about we play some man on defense. We each will call out a scheme and see if the other person can run the play ok.
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“I’m not exactly dressed appropriately” Tina added. “However….I can certainly do my best”
Bette went first She called a press, and knew this would cause body to body contact with Tina.
They started at mid court. Bette had the ball in her left hand, did a crossover that caused Tina to leave her feet. However, she quickly recovered and closed the space between and Bette. They had gotten so close, that their feet tangled up and they started to fall. As they did, Bette twisted her body so she would be the one hitting the floor, taking the brunt of the fall, as Tina fell upon her. As they remain in the position they had fallen on the hardwood floor, Tina leaned her head in a few inches more and kissed Bette. She weaved her fingers through Bette’s hair and started to intensify the kiss by adding tongues. They stopped, when the ball rolled and hit Bette on the top of the head.
As they got up Bette said "I definitely like the way your helping me improve my shot” She looked down at her watch. “I have a team meeting in 5 minutes. Maybe we could grab dinner later?”
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Oops!!!! sorry, forgot something! lol! Ce chapitre est superbe, beaucoup de sensualité et d’émotion…J’ai vraiment eu du plaisir à le lire…Am I forgiven now? You got not just one word, but 2 sentences… lol…
I just caught up with both chapters. Damn woman that was HOT!!!!! I loved the floor action. Thanks PPS
Ok, I need Tina to give me a few pointers on basketball too! I love this story, pps.
okay slacker!3pages…lol tina needs to tell bette was up,where b can help her..the on court action was hot woman.and i would take the press action tooo.im soo glad youre getting into the flow of this writing business and youre doing such a great job.im willing to bet youll inspire other writers to jump on board,that have been a silent reader.the only thing i didnt like was needs to be longer….lol p.p.s.
Wow that was really good! A few really “hot” points as well. I always look foreward to this story. I hope it is not too long away for an update!PPS
Congrats Vols! Of course, it took a little time for us in Husky Nation to figure out who to cheer for – inconference rival or outofconference rival. All I can say is that a lot of UCONN fans never thought they would be cheering for UT – myself included! Great story!
That was one great chapter and I loved it,,,,Tylo I am enjoying your story and can’t wait for more!!!
I sure hope that Pokey has a better time of this new job then the last. She is an awesome coach and I hope that she lands somewhere soon. Love the players that make up the teams. Now add Tammy Reese and Carolyn Peck and I will jump for joy. Does Bette know that Tina works for an opposing Team? I hope that that will not be a problem. A co-worker’s daughter was in an accident that sent her and her boyfriends car off into some trees on I-10. They both got out just in time because it exploded within minutes of their exit. Can’t wait for the next post.
Tylo!!!! Great chapter. The scene with the fire is intense. Tina must have felt like her heart was ripped out in that very moment. Great chapter T, I am looking forward to the next chapter!!!
Damn B&T are hot at the court. That was sad for Tina and Bette there will help her get through that. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Great chapter!!!!! I love how you are using real present players and past players of womens basketball to tell your story. I also, was happy to see that Kelly Jolly is part of this story ( she is one of my favorites from UT. I think I told you that before, anyways what about our TEAM Winning it ALL. That game was great. Keep up the great writting. I love the tibette stories and yours is one of the best.
Tam, you know exactly how I feel, but once again, I applaud you publicly my friend. My fave line? Hmm….I’m sure you know that one..*snickering* She silently walked up behind Bette and placed her hands on Bette’s hips, which caused Bette to stand still in the position she had. Tina brought her mouth in to Bette’s ear and whispered.”If you open your hips wider, but bring your feet closer and plant them here, your shot will be better”YUMMY – **** THUD **** a few things are making me go Thud this week, and that line was just pure lust and hotness…mm-mmm go Tina. Just remember Tee…blondes sometimes have more fun, BUT brunettes at least remember it the next day. ROFLMAOOO…god I’m sorry, but someone shared that with me the other night and I laughed my ass off when she did. I guess it’s all in how it is voiced….writing it does no justice.Many hugs my friend, and I’m loving the Fic. So many angles and such. Oh BTW, I am NOT always in *** …just saying. Love and Hugs.
oh 2 experience what T has where her brother is concerned must b hard. wonder how B will respond when she finds out and all the stuff that comes along with it…..dreams, sleepless nights, memories coming up when new memories jog them back to life. its fiction I know. lol pps
they girls on each team are real players,and miss rai is a hotttttttt and a great actress.. just borrowed them dont sue me!!!!!!!!!
That was great!!! Each time these two make some contact, my screen is kinda melting , and they even didn’t “!§?%£”, yet, know what I mean? lol… Btw, a sexy brunette and a nice blonde would be so yummy for dinner, don’t you find? Hotter than any kind of casual food lol! Again, love this story…Keep on entertaining us T!
Well now I know why Eric had been mentioned a few times before. I kept thinking it was a mistake. lol PPS
The things that come out of their mouth(not tongue) is so HOOOOTTT. Looks like Bette will be playing with some of the best. Tamiks Catchings is from my home town and grad from here. Wondering how the new coach from Duke will do here in Texas. maybe pretty BlueEyes in Tenn will have a good rival again. MBA will start 22 and I go into the hospital 25th. My family will tivo the games while I,m gone. I,m a Mavs fan so You;ll know who I shall be rooting for. Love Tina and Bette and Shane thanks
I think Bette will help Tina after Tina tells her what’s going on. By the way, the court action is hottttttttt!
ROTFL!!! hahaha.. No-Hands Skateboards.. thats a good one.. i like this chap..but heyyy can i have another assistant??i dont like rai!!! hahahah..and the flashbackkk.. its a good one.. sounds real.. keep it all comin tylooooo