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HOPE ALONE – Chapter 24
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“The night she found out I cheated on her,” Bette said struggling with having to further explain it.
“Oh.”
“Yeah,” Bette said shaking her head. “Oh doesn’t really cover it. She had left out a pretty important event that then created an inconsistency in the storyline for future scenes.”
“And it was caught?”
“Yes,” Bette said as she closed her eyes. “So she was told to fill in the gap to ensure that the following scenes were validated and the movie would be plausible.”
“What did she leave out?”
“The confrontation we had about it at home,” Bette tried to remain as vague as possible. “We both did things that night to each other that were horrific. She wanted to keep that private, as did I, but they pushed her to write more detail. We went back to the house last night to write the scene together, so we would have some privacy and both be comfortable with what was being presented.”
“Ok,” Kit continued to rub Bette’s back to offer her comfort while she listened.
“We had some scotch to loosen our nerves up,” Bette began as Kit smiled.
“I know this part, you slept with her after professing your love.”
“And I stayed up all night and wrote the scene so she could rest,” Bette finished Kit’s thought. “It made me sick.”
“Thinking about that night?”
“That,” Bette tried to offer a logical explanation. “But not only that. We had agreed not to go into the real details of that night. I had to come up with something plausible to fill the scene. It forced me to examine my actions in our relationship before I cheated. I was such a fuck to her Kit.”
“Because you knew Candace wanted more and asked her to quote on Provocations anyway?”
“Not just for putting myself in that situation,” Bette said. “That’s part of it, but it’s so much more. I put Provocations ahead of her, to the point that she practically begged me to come home for dinner, and I snapped at her, when all she wanted to do was tell me she was pregnant.”
“Oh Bette,” Kit said with disappointment laced in her voice. “You can’t go back though.”
“Who treats their wife like shit when all they did was ask them to come home for dinner?” Bette felt a wave of nausea wash over her. “Plus when she did tell me, after she told you and Alice because I wasn’t never around, I bit her head off for being the last to know.”
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I love this story my friend, you are spot on
Bravo!!! This silent reader had to finally come out! I have loved all your stories since the beginning this one included. You have done an amazing job with portraying what it is that make Bette and Tina our beloved Tibette! True Love indeed! Thankyou! Keep going pls :)
you just summed up true love gumby. thank you
Were is the rest of page 5.I loved it Gumby.
So I was about to go to sleep and I checked the site one more time to see if you posted tonight. Glad I did! Great chapter, Gumby. Tina said it all, my friend. Good night! Lin
This seems so easy for you to write…yet I know it isn’t…which is obvious because IC can’t write it like this. This story and your others are a precious gift to us….thankyou.
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah. Shit! This is so sweet :> You handled the difficult conversation about THE SCENE with aplomb and now you’re steering them to “process” what caused the downfall of their relationship and own up to their mistakes and sins so that they can start over on a clean slate. Thanks a lot for allowing Bette and Tina to grow up, Gumby! How I wish you and the other hard-core B&T fanfic writers here are part of the show’s writing team. I’m still giddy about the episode 506 too. I’ll take whatever B&T moment IC throws to the TiBette mob. But the cheating thing really puts them on a slippery slope. And I hate IC for choosing to immerse these two tortured souls into more shitty stuff. Thanks again for this post, Gumby!
That was perfect. Great chapter.
Oh God I wish tis was what happened. I love Tibette but I hate cheating. Great job in writing PPS
I am so glad that Tina found Bette! Tina’s true love comment was so beautiful and powerful. Bette needs to share her fears with Tina, it’s time they talked as Tina said.
I couldn’t resist Gumby… this is just too good not to leave a comment! Amazing story, I love the way you write… thanks for the quick post!
Gumby this chapter was wonderful just as the rest. Your description of true love was perfect. You are doing and have done such an amazing job in portraying the love our girls have for each other, even when they are not together and with someone else. This has been quite a journey for them and for us to read it and you are preparing them for their future and I know you will let us see that also. Thanks for sharing your awesome talent with us.
Gumby, oh Gumby, I had the pleasure of reading two chapters at once, I kniw thats cheating but I had to catch up. Your writing is so so so well sad then hard then scary than so, so tender, very passionate. This is a great story. Thank you. Md
I love this story. they are so perfect for one another. well done
Gumby–this was so sweet and touching. Thank you.
I couldn’t think of any better way to end this, this chapter was INCREDIBLE I love the way you write, wow Tina was unbelievable. To true love. Thanks Hun
I agree with you about Bette still being with jodi when she and Tina reconnected physically. I had hoped that it would have gone a different way. I prefer your story to what is taking place on the show. The physical reconnection was awesome but will ic let it last?
Gumby…that is true love! Thank you for this story…I just love Alice.
Gumby, you are one of the finest writers on this site and this is THE most beautiful Tibette story. You re truly an artist when you write about these two and the keyboard is your palette. I can never get enough updates for this story. Please post soon?
just a simple and heart felt thank you..I love this and al your other stories. You truly know this show, I only wish you wrote for it…
Tumeke!!!!
Hello G-gal, This was awesome. Good to see Tina taking the bull by the horns and hunting Bette down. Loved the sisterly discussion between Bette and Kit. These two really have bonded over the last five years. This moment showed that Kit wants the best for Bette while being ready to kick her butt into action. Tina’s declaration was perfect although don;t think either she or Bette would be happy with it being available for all the see online. These gals are more private than that. Anywho, can’t wait to read how Bette responds. More please. Much appreciation from Your Loyal Fan.
Go tina!!! finally the TALK and of course whatever else is to follow, hehe :)
WOW
awwwwwww damnnnnn IM GUMBY DAMMIT no wait IM POKEY because this shit u writing right here is all that and a bag of chips. Girl keep doing you!!!!
i’ll drink to true love!!! and i just want to add that true love is when you know everything about another person, even her darkest moments and biggest flaws and still you love all of her…and that’s what B&T have with each other, i think…i wish they would talk more on the show though :)
OMG, you made my heart beat very fast and tears in my eyes. Tina was right on that is true love. thanks HAPPY VALENTINE DAY TO YOU
I agree Gumby about episode 6. JB & LH gave themselves completely to these characters in this episode and it was sexy and hot. “Hope Alone” gives me what IC doesn’t. Your story shows that B & T have earned their second chance at true love. Great chapter. Happy Valentines Day!
Uh huh!! And what’s next? *curious* Oh KD… you romantic heart! ;) xxx
That was great!