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    Hotel California #23 Touch Tones

    Story written on October 13, 2015 by Blackbird.
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    ”I noticed them coming in. Yours, I presumed.” ”Correct. One’s coming with me now,  and you’re not to go anywhere without his friend, especially anywhere with my daughter.” The SheBar – Denbo Miami I had wired.  My food and beverage guys slipped me extra cases during the holidays, my wait staff wasn’t always late, and

    ”I noticed them coming in. Yours, I presumed.”

    ”Correct. One’s coming with me now,  and you’re not to go anywhere without his friend, especially anywhere with my daughter.”

    Denbo Cindy at railing shebar

    The SheBar – Denbo

    Miami I had wired.  My food and beverage guys slipped me extra cases during the holidays, my wait staff wasn’t always late, and tearful over failed auditions for some fucking movie.  I should’ve bought a strip club, and stayed out of the high maintenance lesbian business, but like a know-it-all dumbass, I didn’t, and now, I’m in deep with the Vegas moneylenders.

    Two days ago, my brother had called from a hotel in Palm Springs, with a lifesaving tip. Tomorrow, the Dinah Shore party planners will be scouting clubs in LA for a seven day blowout event at New Years.

    Spitting out of the printer at my elbow are color ads promoting the event I’ve organized for tomorrow night to Wow! Dinah Shore’s people. ’The ’SheBar’s Sports Illustrated Swimsuit Competition with Cash Prizes!’ posters are stacking up one by one in the printer tray.

    Cindy walks in. ”I’ve been looking everywhere for you! The swimsuit models are waiting downstairs.”

    ”You ordered the chocolate fountain, right?”

    ”Dawn, I’ve done everything on your list.”

    ”I’m finishing up now.” I write my final line of instructions to Margarita and her crew, and attach a picture of Bette I found online. ’ASAP!  Leak this picture to the media: University Art School Dean Missing”

    I’m an evil genius. I’m certain of it.

    Bette Great smile microphone stage

    As the news travels around West Hollywood, and far out into Los Angeles, I have two scenarios I’ve imagined in detail. One, is that the Dinah Shore party planners do drop in at Kit’s tomorrow night, and see a club full of distraught women, all wringing their hands over WeHo’s missing heartthrob.

    Or two, the Dinah Shore gals stay all night at my swimsuit competition and avoid The Planet’s nightmarish scene completely. Either way, Bette Porter, the fretted over missing woman, wreaks havoc on her sister’s business, while spending day after miserable day locked inside my dungeon.

    cup of coffee top view

    The Planet – Joyce

    ”Some news finally! In a few hours the LAPD will have to classify her officially as a missing person.  The news stations will follow up with their ”Tip Lines”. You should be ready here, too.”

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    3. Via email to me –

      It was perfect for the desperation of Denbo. I didn’t give her character enough credit for being that smart. You did perfectly as your story kept me on the edge the whole time I read it. Everything was wonderful: the storyline, the timing, the identity, everything. Yes, You have Tina on the edge perfectly as well. Hopefully this will allow her to see and appreciate the relationship she has with Bette with no more questions asked.
      I loved that Billy stepped in with what’s really happening on the nightclub front and with the help of Alice and Penny will take Denbo’s plans/plot and blow it out of the water. Everything will backfire on her and Kit will be saved as will Bette.
      You totally caught me off-guard with where you took the story. I’m so impressed. I’m loving every morsel of this and the past few chapters.
      Excellent write my friend!
      Bearski

    4. Via email to me from hicys…

      Hey this is so good, nicely written, intense and emotional, I hope in the next chapters the She Bar’s girls will be expelled from the sight, Bette and Tina marry and they have new adventures. Very well done

    8. Brilliant writing as always, you are truly in a league of your own. Please don’t make us wait any longer for the next chapter. I cannot get enough of your writing so I find myself going back and rereading your stories over and over much like a favorite book that you fall in love with more each time you go back to it. I would encourage everyone following this site to read everything you have written.
      Marianne

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