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    Hotel California #23 Touch Tones

    Story written on October 13, 2015 by Blackbird.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=92660
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    She says to the camera guy, ”Go get today’s paper for her ’proof of life’ photograph.” Ten minutes later – With the SheBeast gone for the moment, I scan my body for places that don’t hurt. The top of my right leg isn’t killing me. I think about what an unbruised part of me might

    She says to the camera guy, ”Go get today’s paper for her ’proof of life’ photograph.”

    Ten minutes later –

    With the SheBeast gone for the moment, I scan my body for places that don’t hurt. The top of my right leg isn’t killing me. I think about what an unbruised part of me might look like under the jeans I pulled on while in a mad dash to get Angelica – I’d thought – from her school’s infirmary.

    A vibrating sound coming from the photographer’s camera bag suddenly has my full attention.

    I hop in the chair over to the zipper pocket and pull it open with my teeth.  Next, I open the text app with my tongue and make a go at texting Tina.

    A garbled, ’heoiuioatme’ appears under the slick of my saliva.

    I whisper in a coaxing way to my tongue. ”Remember all the good times and delicate maneuvers we’ve ever done together? Don’t fail me now.”

    My next attempt, even worse! Texting, I realize, is not tongue material.

    With my nose leading the way, I dig back inside the gear bag searching for something to use as a stylus. My teeth clamp onto a ballpoint pen.

    ’t. . .i. . .’  Pressing one character at a time into the phone, the pen gripped in my teeth, I hear them returning.

    ’dont nowhere’  I speed through the rest and strike the tip of the pen on Send, and the whooshing sound tells me it’s gone.

    I drop the phone back inside the pocket, hop across the floor – hiding the pen I found under my shoe – I sneer at them the minute they open the door.

    ”Go ahead assholes. Take my fucking picture.”

    CU Maxine

    The Planet – Tina

    Knowing no words for what’s thick in the air, Angelica spins and spins, around and around in front of me losing herself in circles.

    ”Baby, Baby, Baby listen to Mommy for a second.” I gently grab her shoulders. ”No school today, your grandmomma’s here to be with you.”

    ”Momma B’s sleeping?”

    ”I bet she is.”

    ”Can I wake her up now?”

    ”Not yet, Baby, not yet.”

    My phone buzzes. A text arriving.  ”t i dont nowhere”

    ”Oh God!” I sink into a chair next to Mary.  ”She’s alive.”

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    3. Via email to me –

      It was perfect for the desperation of Denbo. I didn’t give her character enough credit for being that smart. You did perfectly as your story kept me on the edge the whole time I read it. Everything was wonderful: the storyline, the timing, the identity, everything. Yes, You have Tina on the edge perfectly as well. Hopefully this will allow her to see and appreciate the relationship she has with Bette with no more questions asked.
      I loved that Billy stepped in with what’s really happening on the nightclub front and with the help of Alice and Penny will take Denbo’s plans/plot and blow it out of the water. Everything will backfire on her and Kit will be saved as will Bette.
      You totally caught me off-guard with where you took the story. I’m so impressed. I’m loving every morsel of this and the past few chapters.
      Excellent write my friend!
      Bearski

    4. Via email to me from hicys…

      Hey this is so good, nicely written, intense and emotional, I hope in the next chapters the She Bar’s girls will be expelled from the sight, Bette and Tina marry and they have new adventures. Very well done

    8. Brilliant writing as always, you are truly in a league of your own. Please don’t make us wait any longer for the next chapter. I cannot get enough of your writing so I find myself going back and rereading your stories over and over much like a favorite book that you fall in love with more each time you go back to it. I would encourage everyone following this site to read everything you have written.
      Marianne

    9. Blackbird are you coming back soon? I’ve been checking daily, and I’m doing my very best to be patient. It’s getting harder and harder. Love, love, love your writing.

    10. Please blackbird it’s going on 3 weeks and not a peep from you. I know you don’t want to leave us hanging like this so please update this weekend. Missing your story so much.

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