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Houseguest 1
Dedicated to gina, Lyn, Wayout, Tee, Weavers fingers, Love Bette, Jamarikn, tlw05, adway, trecelovinit, Felt Hat, c2bc, Paula, B&TF, rondayvue, and B; you are the few and the brave to, as of this posting, comment on my last two "When It All Became" stories.
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"Houseguest"
Battling through one of LA’s winter storms, Tina walked towards her car. While fighting with the umbrella, trying to keep it from turning inside-out, she saw the young woman. The woman, girl really, was cold and shivering, soaked through, as she huddled in the doorway which was providing only minimal protection.
It was right then that Tina decided to do what, she realized, could be one of the stupidest things she could ever do. "Are you ok?" she asked the girl.
The girl’s eyes were ablaze with the oddest combination. Distrust and something else; something like hope. The girl, body clenched tight, took a drag off her cigarette and nodded.
Tina stopped. "I’ve seen you. At Milk, right?"
The girl shrugged. "I get around." The bravado was in full effect, even though her lips were turning blue.
After hesitating for a moment, especially after giving a thought to Bette’s reaction, Tina felt compelled to act. "Look, I know this sounds weird. But I can give you a place to stay tonight."
Another shrug. "Not weird at all." Tina held out the umbrella and the two of them walked in silence to her car.
Heading towards the house, Tina turned up the heater hoping she could make a dent in the young woman’s chills. "I’m Tina," she announced, feeling a need to break the awkward silence between them."
"Shane."
Nothing more was forthcoming. Tina remained silent for the rest of the drive. She pulled into the driveway and frowned. "My partner’s home."
"It’s cool, I can just take off from here."
Tina shut down the ignition and met the other woman’s gaze. "I didn’t mean it that way. I’ll just need to talk to her for a moment when we get inside. Ok?"
"Whatever."
The two women entered the front door, and Tina motioned for Shane to wait on the couch. She took off her coat, and smoothed down the front of the cotton shirt that she was wearing.
"Bette," she called. "Where are you?" "Here," came a voice from the back room.
Tina motioned again, one minute, and shot Shane a smile.
After the blonde woman walked away, Shane started to look around, size up the place. It was nice. Homey. Lots of art, but not the usual stuff, paintings purchased to match the sofa.
Nice stuff. Stuff of value. Now it was Shane’s turn to smile. (tbc)
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(129 votes, average: 3.36 out of 5)
please dont let shane try and steal anything. that would be very bad.
nice.. i hope shane would not get any bay ideas
very cool lm liking this already but then im a fan …. of your writting thanks
Love the way you started your new story, please post soon.
Oh, my! And tsk, tsk, too. You are a tricky one, aren’t you?! Now how alternate is this reality? Will we see the emotionally scarred but caring Shane start to emerge, or will you leave us with a coked, toked, and/or smoked Shane whose sticky fingers (not that way!) secure the means for the next fix? Hmmm. Time will tell.
By the way, I’m flattered by the dedication. Rarely one of few words, I’ve only recently joined the ranks of commenters. I guess I couldn’t leave you and the other talented writers not knowing of my gratitude for your work, and you sharing it here. I’ll never write a fan fic – honest! – but I’ll always appreciate those who do, and most especially those who do it well. Thank you, pseud.
I wondered how Shane came into the group, she’s the one who really doesn’t fit. Kepp going, this is good.
Wow good start. I really like it, and please post soon, thank you!