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I have to have her CH 11
I have to have her. Ch 11
” Bette, I don’t know how to say this so I will just say it quickly . . . ”
Tina stands and starts to pace around Bette’s livingroom. Gathering her thoughts, she doesn’t notice how pale Bette has gotten, or how close to tears she has become.
” Tina? Can you please just close the door on your way out?” Dejectedly Bette says as she gets up from the sofa, and starts to make her way to the back of the house and her bedroom.
” What?” Tina asks incredibly. ” Why would I leave? Is that what you want Bette? For me to leave? Shocked, Tina stops pacing and turns to face a retreating Bette. She quickly starts after her, and grabs her hand to force her to face her.
Upon Bette turning, Tina notices Bette’s tears sliding down her delicate face.
“Oh god! Bette. What is wrong?” not knowing what is going on in Bette’s head , Tina is worried at her discovery.
” Please tell me Bette. What is wrong? Have I done something? I don’t understand. I thought things were going so good? Please, please tell me what is going on?” Exasperated Tina squeezes Bette’s hand to get her to respond.
Wiping her tears as they fall, Bette looks up into Tina’s eyes. She sees her confusion, but is unable to answer her questions. Her emotions so close to the surface is new for her, and her own confusion is clouding her rational thoughts. She lowers her eyes back to the floor not answering Tina.
” Bette, maybe you don’t want to tell me what is going on, but you can damn well hear what I have to say then, Annoyed Tina continues, ” We have not known each other very long, and although we are only starting to get to learn about the other, I know that I have very strong feelings for you too.”
Getting no response from Bette, Tina decides to hit Bette back right between the eyes as Bette had done to her at the planet. ” Bette, look at me please”, Tina demands.
Still looking at the floor, caught in her own misery and thoughts, Bette still does not respond to Tina.
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(44 votes, average: 4.07 out of 5)
That was sooooo incredibly HOT!!!! I’m glad Bette finally let Tina say what was on her mind. Very nice update!!
Very nice! Yes, a sequel is in order here.
WOW!!!
oh man that was HOT HOT HOT….
Good lord, please continue soon……like NOW!!!………this is really good…….. =0)
oh yeah… keep typing and working on that sequel.. this was HOT… so HOT… i would have ripped off her thong also… please continue
OMG!!!I just finished reading all of your story and you are a great writer. Please give us a sequel or continue this story. We need our Bette and Tina in love like this and we certainly are not getting it from the show. This last chapter was–words fail me!!
SEQUEL!! SEQUEL!! SEQUEL!!
Smokin HOTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT continue please
LMAO dammit, funnyone, I wanted to do the chanting. LOL Oh fuck it. SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! Or should I say SEXQUEL? ;)
Hot chapter definitely work on a sequel!!!
OH..please let there be a sequel…love it, girl!
Please continue with your story. I am enjoying this beginning for Bette and Tina.
*falls over*
Fantastic…and we need a sequel.
OMG….bad, bad mistake to read this at work LOL….That was so hot and sweet at the same time. I love this story and the way you write…..SO YES PLEASE MAKE A SEQUEL :o))
Speechless…it happenes to me now and again,a good NC17 will always do it…lol and THAT WAS SO SO GOOOD!!!ive actually read it twice…What can i say…ijust loed it and you really HAVE to do a sequel… thanks
Damn that was so hot hot hot, and lovvve it. Ok let see more hot coming, thanks!
WOW=====Awesome Thanks