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I have to have her CH4
I have to have her. CH 4
Tina’s POV
I have walked by here a few times. It looks like there is still someone here. Maybe I should just go in. As I think this to myself, a very good looking man bursts out the door right across my path.
“Sorry” he stammers as he rushes across the street to a new Mustang and drives off quickly.
Well he didn’t lock the door, so there must still be someone there.
After a few moments of trying to gather my courage, I enter the front door of the Bette Porter Gallery.
It’s exquisite! Hardwood floors polished to a gleam. Soft lighting and what I presume to be acclaimed art pieces all placed to view in a very enticing and attractive set up.
No one has come to greet my entrance, so I assume there are no alarms active to alert people of someone entering the gallery.
Well I guess I will have to find someone on my own. I walk around a bit, and am instantly caught up in the pieces on display. Dana was right; I should have just come in to browse.
It was at about this point that it hit me again. That enticing, and teasing aroma meant I am almost sure to arouse, and lure one to the master of that glorious fragrance.
I round a corner of displays and am stopped dead in my tracks.There “she” is! The long dark curls cascading down her back. That fantastic ass atop a long sleek pair of legs, she’s just standing there seemingly lost in thought.
“Oh, GOD!” I think I am going to faint.
Ok Tina, Ok, get it together, just make a noise to draw her attention. When I open my mouth, I gulp air, but no sound comes out of me. I stare at the back of my destiny, yet can do nothing to start on the path towards it.
As at other inopportune times, when I am nervous or stressed out, inappropriate things seem to happen.
This being one of those times, it came as no surprise to me that my body took over when my brain failed to do so..
I broke wind!!!
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(42 votes, average: 3.60 out of 5)
I really loved this chapter. Tina seemed so confident in the first chapter, but to hear her POV, it was hysterical. I guess we’ve all been there. Very nice job
It’s nice to see Tina taking the first step. Her relationship with Dana is a riot. Now, Tina just needs to be able to breath and think a little more clearly when she’s confronted with Bette. LOL. Really enjoying the story, please continue.
Ok..that fart was hilarious! thanks for the post and can’t wait for the next
That was too funny. The breaking wind part had me busting up for awhile. Tina is so cute and loveable in this story. To bad she has no clue how Bette was feeling when she came into the gallery.
That was a good read. And yes Tina that is what we call Karma, it can be a bitch. Loved it.
haha wow tina is a dork sumtimes…luved it
good update
Too funny. Now onward. I think Bette should walk out and Tina still be there. She’s got her name now how to find her, I can’t wait.
Tina is funny and cute. Ok let see what’s next, thanks!
First of all, Tina breaking wind was hilarious. Second, it would really have freaked me out if I got back to my car and had a flat…way too much of a coincidence. Finally, GREAT story!!
This is soooo great – I’m really looking forward to more from you….I love this story already and your writing is so wonderful and beautiful. More please….
:D absolute quality! T all stuttery hehe fab :D
Poor Tina if she only knew what Bette was thinking. Let’s have some more, this story is great, I am so hooked. Thanks a bunch cdngrl
45 mins! Somebody has to do something! drooling…
That was a great chapter. LOL at Tina’s flat tire. Looking forward to more.
LOL this is great, i love this tina..and do we get more Bette POV’s?..pleeease post soon :)
funnyone, farting is more like a WIND breaker. :P I swear I laughed my ass off over that because it sounds like something I’d do, except for me I’d probably let out a big honkin’ belch.
And I sincerely hope despite all the resulting declarations regading shit, holy and otherwise, that absolutely none was involved, for everyone’s sake.
well, tina’s way intimidated by bette, i wonder what’s her next step would be?
nice to see Tina taking action for once, being the passive aggressor that she is..so funny to see Tina not being able to get a word out upon seeing Bette! LOL…post soon=)
Tina farted? Always a great icebreaker. Besides totally cracking me up, I have to say that’s unique in the annals (and anals) of B/T. Beginnings. I’m sure Tina’s “flat tire” story was some sort of psychological transferance-letting the air out so to speak.
I so Love this Story!!! Tina getting a flat just great. Let Bette go out and find her Please!!!! More Soon I Hope!!!!