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I Need You Here – 1
Only a breath’s difference separate the living from the dead, and in death there is always someone left behind.
Bette Porter stood near the doorway as the hospital’s medical staff placed a sheet over her father, the two staffers chatting with each other about lunch as they wrapped Melvin Porter and moved to transfer him from the bed and onto the gurney, to bring him to the morgue.
The morgue. Things always seemed so much more dreary and depressing when the words "the morgue" were brought into the mix.
If only there was a way that she could shake off this feeling of being completely abandoned by his death.
Beside her, her sister Kit Porter was talking to the nursing attendant, who was repeating to Kit things that the doctor had told Bette only moments before. Bette, of course, cannot remember anything.
The two staff members were discussing the weight of "the body", to which Bette wanted to scream out, that was her father.
Her father had been lying ill here in this room for weeks, his cancer having taken its toll on his body. Bette had stayed here, taken vigil at his bedside the whole time, and had relied on her friends and Kit for food and support. Work had taken a backseat, everything else seemed so unimportant and trivial.
And now she stood silently, her emotions in shock, as she watched them wheel her father out of the room and on the way to the morgue.
Bette swallowed the lump in her throat, and deciding that she could not deal with this, pulled out her cellphone and began to dial.
"Miss Porter," she heard vaguely, which she chose to ignore.
"Bette," Kit called out to her.
Bette turned.
"Miss Porter, you can’t use your phone in here."
Oh. Okay. Bette nodded mutely, and slowly made her way out of the room, touching Kit’s arm as she passed, to acknowledge her departure. Somehow, Bette ended up outside the hospital walls, and pressed the speed dial for entry number one.
"Hi, it’s me. I…" Bette took a deep breath, but quickly succumbed to her tears. "I need you. Please. I just… I need you."
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Emotive beginning. The hurt and pain fo losing a parent is truly captured in this story. The deepth of emotion is unimaginable until you have suffered this loss.
Heartfelt and sombre.
Want to read more as you have hooked me into this sad, sad story.
Please post soon.
*sniff* That was sad, but moving, too. Hope there will be more soon!
Damn good start. This story is so sad and emotion, I feel really sad for Bette, hope Tina will come back and stay with Bette. Post soon, thank you!
Very emotional. Good Job.
Very sweet and sad; thanks for sharing.
This is a great start, I can’t wait to see how things work out
Like your style. Would like this story to continue if you don’t mind but you don’t post often enough now that i have read your other stories
sad…so sad but keep it coming!
great start please contine.
Damn, Karma really comes back in kicks you in the ass huh? I hope that Bette finds happiness. Please post again soon,