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I thought we could spend the evening together… PT32
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"When I finished the call to ‘the great Melvin Porter’ I put the phone on the deck beside me and forgot it was there." She said sarcastically.
Tina looked embarrassed at the words, she had said some hurtful things which she immediately regretted, but she wasn’t sure how she was going to apologise for what she had said without it sounding like she was just back-tracking on the words she had used. The words had come out so venomously that she hadn’t even thought about what she was saying, as she had told Shane, she’d snapped.
"I’m sorry…" Tina said quietly, finishing the cleaning of the wound, and applying a small discreet plaster.
"Yeah, so you’ve said. You sounded like you had some predetermined notions about how I would deal with that subject the next time it arose. And it obviously arose much quicker than we both expected."
"Yeah, it did, it kind of took me by surprise." Tina leant her bottom back against the sink, crossing her arms she studied the woman in front of her, she hadn’t been fair to her today and she was truly sorry, but she wasn’t sure it was going to be well received, she had been personal, making her comment about Melvin, and she regretted that comment, it was something that had been boiling in her for a long time, she had touched the surface of her feelings by making her statement, but they hadn’t yet talked about that, and she should have saved her opinions on that particular subject for when they spoke about it, not thrown it at Bette in anger.
"Mmmm, me too!" Bette said rolling her eyes, talking of not only the phone call but the reaction it invoked also.
"I’m sorry about the way I reacted, Shane told me what you said…"
"Really?" Bette was surprised that Shane had spoken with Tina, usually not wanting to get involved in a situation.
"Yeah, she kinda of tore me a new one!"
Bette remained quiet but inwardly smiled to herself, Shane was her hero, coming to the rescue on Thursday evening and also today, sitting and quietly listening, allowing Bette to unload without making any rash judgments, but it seemed that this time, she voiced her opinion about the situation, and she wasn’t afraid to tell Tina that she was in the wrong.
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Hey mate – thanks for the preview, what a service, I could get used to it :o)) Another great and spot-on post, I love the dialouge between our girls. I’m glad that Bette was open about her feelings and about how deeply Tina hurt her. The situation now: Bette has almost let Tina off the hook for now (they still need to talk), but Tina doesn’t know that – that’s very interesting and clever writing. I can’t wait to see how you will make Tina grovel. And again I just love your Yoda :o)) Later mate xx
I love this story- I know I say that all the time- I just can’t tell you enough! Please, more soon!!
At least Tina stepped up and took it like a woman. It’s still pretty shitty what she did, and Bette’s refusal of a quicky tweaked her nicely. I’m sure they’ll make up before bed time.
Another excellent and deep chapter! they need to learn in trust each other specially Tina, Bette did a major thing and she just snapped her. i like to see how will Bette handle the things! i like it so much this chapter~
Jo this was another excellent chapter, you do such great work. As always love this story. Yes Bette will make Tina pay and pay dearly. As I said in the last comments Tina is in for some major groveling but, the payoff in return will be much loving. Great chapter.
let the groveling begin
i can’t wait to see tina groveling and bette enjoying it
‘you do realise you will be paying for this big time, don’t you?’LOL.. bring it on, great as alway. More please
At least Tina nor Bette were yell at each other. Bette is wicked.she is going to let Tina stew for awhile//// thanks
Another great chapter by that exceptional author Jobadge. Like everyone else I can’t wait to see how Tina will make it up to her—Oh yeah major groveling and knowing you anything and everything is possible! I can’t wait for the next chapter, so get to it mate! LOL!!!
They’re both lucky to have Shane as a sounding board. Can’t wait for the groveling to begins. Post soon.
excellent chap as always sweetie. i love every little bit of this story. but uhh.. speaking of taunting when is alice and the gang going to notice the marks of passion around bette’s wrists. COME ON WHO CAN MISS THOSE!!! please post soon. PEACE.
Oh my Bette and yes let see Bette make Tina pay!
Another interesting chapter! I’m curious to see exactly what Bette’s plans for TIna are. Thanks for writing.
Taunting…ohhh, I like taunting!!!
jo…how could you leave us with only 1 page. you know I need the b & t fix. post soon…..
I feel bad for Bette. And I think Tina does need to do some major groveling. Here is tehis woman coming to the realization that she continued to let her father sway her and stoping that and she gets most of fears of opening up and putting it on the line for Tina realized. My guess someone deep inside everyone left Bette that played a female role in her life. She loved Tina they come to a beautiful weekend together where Bette thinks she can truely trust her and Tina won’t leave her, but then the arguement happens. COuld make Bette crawl back into her shell, but instead she’s talking about. THat’s great!
glad B was open and upfront about her feelings! I can’t wait to see what B has in store for T! Such a great story! plz post soon!
Well…what can i say…Bring on the taunting..lol..Like the way Bette hasnt left tina completly off the hook…..and i do believe Tina needs to grovel..just a little more…Bette made the right choice,So Tina needs to learn to have a little faith in Bette….as always a great chapter…as always looking forward to the next one….so keep it comin…x
payback is biyotch hahahah i really love ur writing would ya pls post soon coz one page was way too short :)
Excellent as usual Jo! Tina, prepare to do some major groveling! This is a step in the right direction. It will take time and in the end it will be worth it. Why do I have this nagging feeling that the “gallery tape” will somehow get in the hands ofAlice and the gang will get some free Tibette porn?!?!? Should I be worried? Although it would be freaking hilarious! As for covering more stuff in this story, it’s totally up to you! I guess I am just addicted to your story and just can’t get enough! Post soon!
well joesphine — a little too short but excellent work as always. as for paranoia — well the best writers are — its called caring about what you do. and this was really great and up to your usual high standards of love and as always it is well written and entertaining. okay babe xxx
Yes, Bette has let her off very easy right now. Glad they talked about it, but I think T’s got quite a bit of making up to to for the harshness she spat out and the doors she slammed. Great post JB!
Well, Tina’s going to get plenty of autonomy in that shower. Making Tina beg = music to my damaged S3 ears! Okay, who am I kidding, it also has the potential to be pretty hot. You’ve outdone yourself once again Jobadge. Your writing is so realistic…I had a conversation similar to TiBette’s on Saturday. Good times! Please post soon Jobdage…in the meantime, I’ll work on my residual anger towards S3 Tina.
more…more…more…soon…ok?
I am glad that even though Tina hurt Bette to the quick, Bette stayed open and listened to Tina. Both have hurt each other in the past and both need to have faith in the other that changes will take place. Tina now needs to stop walking out when angry and do what Bette is trying to do. Shane has always been one of my favorites of course right behind Bette and Tina. As always a wonderful addition to the extraordinary story.
love the ‘piss on my fireworks’ phrase, i am so eager to see where you take this….really enjoy your storytelling, have you ever thought of telling the B and T story from when they first met, I’m sure you’d do a great job of it. Thanks for the entertainment, the humour, the wisdom and especially the love. Please continue with the story.