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" Sure thing Bette. I’ll do that for you."
Kit opened the back door and undid the child restraints to get Angelica out.
Bette stepped out of the drivers door, and place her hand on the baby’s soft cheek.
"I love you Boo. I hope you know that. I love you. And I am sorry, so sorry."
With that Bette left a soft kiss on her cheek and got back into the car.
"Thanks Kit. I love you."
With out another word she closed the car door, and proceeded down the long driveway away from the only joy she had in her life.
Kit took Angelica straight to Tina’s room. She knocked loudly as she heard some yelling coming from behind the door.
The door flew open and a loud "What?" flew out of Tina’s mouth.
She softened immediately upon seeing her daughter in Kit’s arms.
She reached for Angelica and started to move past Kit out into the hallway, heading to Bette’s door, ready to give her a verbal lashing she wouldn’t soon forget.
"She’s not there Tina."
Tina whipped around to Kit. "Where the hell did she go now? Afraid to face me after taking MY daughter with out my permission. She won’t get the chance again Kit. You can tell her that for me." Tina stood there seething.
"Um, I don’t think you will need to worry about that Tina. She left, she went back to L.A. She did tell me to tell you that she hopes you can be happy now. That is all she said she wants for you both. That and she asked me to give you this." Kit held the letter out to Tina, and as Tina took it, Kit walked away.
Tina watched her go, and all of a sudden had a sense of foreboding encompass her.
She placed the letter in her pocket and turned to open the door of the room where Henry waited to finish the argument they were having before Kit arrived.
"So she finally brought her back? About damn time! Did you tell her about our plans, that we are getting married and Angelica will be MY daughter then, not hers?"
"Henry where the hell did you get that idea? I never said that, I never said anything close to that!"
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Ouch…
That’s not to say I think this was crap as it wasn’t. It’s just painful, so yeah. Ouch.
oh so sad…i can’t wait for tina’s reaction to the letter and thank godness henry is gone
Lamentamini said it best “OUCH!”
I hope this isn’t a suicide note or anything. Tina needs to REALLY think about if she wants Bette out of her & Angelica’s life. She can’t say hurtful stuff and not think it has consequences. Bette needs to regroup and have some time to herself then come back and get her life on track…whether it’s with Tina or without Tina (hopefully it’s with Tina)
Excellent chapter and very poetic letter. Beautiful. Painful.
Is this torture Pands night? Cuz…I watched Grey’s Anatomy and bawled…I watched ER and bawled…and now I just read this and bawled…I’m going to bed!! But..ah.. this was really good…hope to see more of this!
Common dont’ stop there, post another chapter…… please…
Sounds like a goodbye forever letter to me:( Please let Angelica bring her to mommies back together.
Wow…As hard as that was to read, I am totally and completely hooked. Thank you.
More!
What a start. Hope you continue.
whoa tear
Why does Tina think that Bette should take her abuse forever!!!!!!!!!!!! Tina is not the only one with feelings, imagine thatand what hers are and what she wants now is so not the important thing. I hate her…..and I am so afraid for Bette.
So sad and good :). I hope you plan on continuing this tale, it has a lot of potential and you an amazing writer. Thanks.
Wow, what a great start….you had me from the first words.MORE please!
OMG – You can feel such pain and remorse. This is a great beginning. Please continue. I’d love to see where this goes.
Love Hurts! I think that you should continue with this story. As a Tibetter I can only hope that Tina will some how convey to Bette that it is Bette that Tina loves and not some guy. Tina has already taken one step towards Bette and that is to get rid of Henry.
I actullay liked the story until the letter. It is so pathetic, so “woe is me”. Come on Bette, you regret everything about the past seven years, even if it didn’t go the way you planned. How pathetic is Bette. BTW….Please continue
Bette is hurting so bad, that she is not thinking logically. Now that Tina has read Bette’s letter, hopefully she will realize that without Bette in her life she will never be whole. She obviously still loves Bette in some capacity or she wouldn’t have canned “Hendick”! They need to sit down and talk. Serious talking. PPS.
OMG,’ouch is right’…please post again soon. This is a great story so far.
wow…that letter would make me fall in-love with bette all over again but hey I’m not tina and I never did fall outa love with Bette and neither did Tina imo…she’s still hurting and it takes time to heal when the one u love breaks a promise of fidelity…great writing…please continue…
Ouch and Wow. My eyes were almost in tears and my heart skipped a beat.
Great writing, but so very sad and painful – I just hope that Bette won’t hurt herself, because I got that feeling (creapy)………What about your other wonderful story, I miss it :o)) I hope you’ll finish it. Have a great weekend :o))
Bette forgot to write I wish you did not trip and fall on dick….
Wow – tjat was painful! And the letter so beautiful and heartwrenching. Surely that would melt Tina’s heart – but then where’s the drama? Great start – look forward to the rest.
ok it was pretty good and pretty painfull but why the hell does Bette has to take all the blame over and over and over again. Why is it that in every Tibette story I read Tina has to be the fucking saint???????
that was very sad. is bette contemplating suicide? i hope not. tina has some decisions to make.
wow!!it’s a shame ileane doesn’t share your talent for writing!!!!!!!
i agree with lamentamini…tina doesn’t look like a saint to me here, even if it’s a tibette story, it looks to me like a long way for them to reconnect
Did anyone say this was a TiBette story? I didn’t read that anywhere. I don’t see Tina being a saint here either. In fact, she’s kinda being a cokehead. xD Oh and lol@slipperynipple’s comment! Seriously it made me laugh because I too wish Tina had not tripped and fallen on a dick.
Man, that really did smart. I take it Bette is off to be fitted for some custom made hair shirts, just as soon as she’s done with the self-flagellation. An interesting display of ego turned inside out. Same for Henry getting all hurt when Tina didn’t conform to his assumptions of taking over her family. And why do either of them view Tina as a faultless golden idol when she’s actually kind of crackers?
OK this was a gut rencher and a heart breaker to say the least but what really got me was the way Bette signed the letter! Wow! If Tina doesn’t call Bette or Kit (or someone) to make sure Bette isn’t driving into the ocean somewhere, she’s loonier than I thought she was! (Tina can’t be that dumb/crazy, can she?) Well CDN I loved it, but you didn’t say you were continuing this story – was it just a one nite stand, or will this story be ongoing? It would be nice to see more…please?
OUCH…. OUCH…. So much pain. But Great Chapter Thank you PPS
Man, that was sad! It’s a great start, I can’t wait to see what’s Tina reaction for the letter. :)
Damn you made me cry man this is so sad and so much pain and hurt so bad. Glad Tina kick henrydick out of the picture and now hope she will go after Bette and win her back. Hope you will continue this please, this is good and want to see more, thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!