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If it makes you happy – Chapter 4
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As Abby lay on her back so serene in the early morning light, Bette found herself a little jealous of the restful night her girlfriend had enjoyed. Still she relished the opportunity to gaze unhindered at her lover, a pastime Bette was yet to tire of. It was almost three months since they had first met, Bette still smiled when she recalled how Abby had initially won her over. Bette, despite protesting vehemently, had found herself dragged out to Milk by “Would you like to dance?” A smooth voice enquired. “No, thanks” Bette replied without even looking to see who had made the request. “You just look so sad.” The woman said quietly. Bette looked up into blue eyes which were filled with concern. “I really shouldnt have come out tonight.” She said to the woman before offering a weak smile “But thanks for the offer.” “What if I promise not to touch you?” The woman ventured as she returned Bettes smile. “What?” Bette asked, hoping that she had misunderstood. Her eyes narrowed although she couldnt help but smile at the absurdity of the statement or how it totally complimented her current state of mind. “You have the most beautiful smile.” The woman said sincerely “But you look so upset. Id just like to try and make you smile. Im not looking to take you home, like I said, I wont even hold your hand unless you tell me its OK.” Bette smiled and shook her head as she wondered were the vibes she was sending out really that bad?
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I agree that the times, they are a-changing as regards Bette and girlfriends who are not Tina. I actually loved Courtney from lastkid’s story and so wished that story had been completed. But S3, I think, changed many people in their view of Tina and made many wish that Bette could find another woman with whom she could be happy.
Yup, me too. Thumbs up for Abby. She treats Bette right. Boo, hiss for the ill-mannered, game-playing, passive-agressive Tina.
Abby seems sweet enough, but you never really want to be the “transition” date. Anyway, I am still very interested in what brought Tina to Bette’s house in the middle of the night. She had to at least think that Bette might possibly be on a date and might bring a girl home. What is Tina thinking????? Please update soon.
What a surprise two chapters Hackgirl, and a NC-17 wow, now this was a surprise, my opinion I don’t think Bette was thinking of Tina at all when she was making love to Abby. What I do think is that Bette and Tina never got the closure that they both needed to fully move on from each other, Bette does have a big issue with her access to Angelica, I would love to see this explored, do I see Bette and Tina getting back together, I would see no and I would be surprised if they do. They hate for Tina in the comments section on various ongoing stories is still strong, sorry it is just so repetitive now, not going to or ever will jump on the hate Tina bandwagon, looking forward to reading what you have instore for us HG, whatever it is I’m sure it will be written very well and thanks again for coming back with a story.
Like Abby…but i really wonder what Tina wants also…Very nice chapters!
Hackgirl – I am your newest fan – I think it’s great for Bette to have someone who cares about her and wants her and will let her find her own truth – otherwise Abby might never know if Bette realy chooses her or just ends up with her. So like everyone else I want to know what’s up with Tina??
Abby seem a nice person and I kinda like her, ok really what the hell is tina want now and can’t wait to see what’s. Ok post soon please, thanks!
I too am liking the Abby character. I’m not able to second guess where this story is heading! I just love your style of writing.Please continue xxx
Dammit I don’t want to like Abby but you’re not making it easy. lol Well, if Bette and Tina get back together, send Abby over to me. ;)
why you have to make abby so darn nice and sweet and loveable?
Geez, I’m finding myself liking Abby, what a woman. I think she is right to give Bette room to figure out what is going on. Love this Hack. Thanks for writing.
Oh my, I like Abby…
i read the comments before i read the chapter and i was looking for an indication where bette was thinking of tina while making love to abby but i didnt see it at all… i believe that bette does care deeply for abby but tina being in the picture with obviously a lot to resolve, unanswered questions and bette seeking some sort of closure… tina would be a nagging thought… i am anxious to see where this goes… i would go on a limb here and say that i would like to see bette and abby’s relationship grow into something where abby would feel secure enough to tell bette that she infact is in love with her…
Maybe Abby is the one for Bette. It’ll be interesting issue to cover in the story to deal with the fact that someone you loved deeply before re-appear in your life when you’re in another relationship or found someone makes you better off.
Make Tina talk and not just accuse Bette. I have no problem with B&T again. Abby may be nice, but if Tina is the one let Bette have her. Abby can be a friend, just like Tina has kept Helena around, Bette gets Abby.
I read two Hack submissions this morning. What a lovely start to the day! And this Abby character seems really nice. Why is she not taken?
I like this abby character, so she sounds cool. Personally I am on the sence if Bette and Tina should get back together. TIna has still got her head in her ass and I am not sure bette should be dealing with all that shit(no pun intended). Either way you go I will enjoy the story! Thanks!
I too am liking Abby! Thanks for braving the waters and giving us Bette happy with someone other than Tina. Now, what exactly does Tina want? I don’t trust her one bit.
sigh..Abby is juz too sweet and nice. But i guess..for a tibetter like me,still can’t help but always believe that b&t are meant to be?
Do you guys remember Courtney and Bette from Lastkid’s story – and how many of us revolted putting Bette with anyone else? This new woman seems to be going down much better. What changed? Has S3 leveled the field? Are we more mature? (I doubt that).
Abby sound like a keeper. If Tina wants to come back, what will Bette do with her???…Big Love!!
Yeh Abbey seems nice, hope she dosent get her heart broken too much
I was never revolting! ha ha, no I was one of the 2.5 who liked Courtney and I like this Abby too. What I don’t get is why Abby left in a huff before she even knew what Tina was doing there? I notice that in alot of the stories people react, badly, before they even know what is going on. Tina is up to her usual #@$#, coming by in the wee hours just to tell Bette everything is all her fault and walk out…Tina just needs to leave Bette alone and let her be happy with Abby. Great story!
I think that Bette’s g/fs react badly b/c they are unsure of Bette’s true feelings. They know that B & T have this deep, abiding love for each other. And when push comes to shove, they will most likely be pushed out of the relationship. Tina trumps all. Bette is just pwhupped when it comes to Tina.
Let’s see how this all plays out. Post soon. :)