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I’ll Never Let You Go:Chapter 21
Bette ignored what her husband had said, “What did she tell you?”
Ed was beginning to feel uncertain if telling Bette was the right thing to do, he just remained silent his head down
“WHAT DID SHE TELL YOU?!” the brunette said angrily
Ed swallowed hard “She… she told me that…she’s pregnant” he said with a low voice.
Bette was so shocked by what she heard that it seemed to her that the whole environment suddenly went quiet and still, she dropped the glass that she had been holding and it went down crashing onto the ground.
Ed kneeled down in front of the brunette “Bette I’m so sorry, I’m really, really sorry you have to believe me I love you so much…I thought by being honest with you, you would understand… Please baby tell me that you understand and that you still love me…” Ed said crying.
“After hearing what you said I’m not sure now if I still do” Bette stood up and started to walk towards the driveway.
Ed stood up too and touched Bette’s arm “Where are you going?”
Bette slapped him hard on the face “Don’t you touch me… I’ll go wherever the fuck I want to go” with that she turned her back on him and walked towards her car.
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Tina was in her living room listening to Sarah McLachlan’s songs wallowing in her sadness, she lit up some candles, which somehow soothed her. Her mind wandered to the things that happened that day. It had started so great from the meeting to their lunch. She remembered how a smile broke on Bette’s face when the boy smiled at her and how so alive she looked when the brunette laughed at her silly jokes. But when the vision of Ed holding Bette’s hand and looking at her eyes lovingly, her stomach made a violent turn, then she asked herself how long can she really wait for Bette.
Tina was startled by the thunder, it had been raining nonstop for over an hour that it seemed to her that the weather was somehow agreeing to what she was feeling at the moment. Then she heard a knock on the door ‘fucking Alice I told her not to come here I just wanted to be by myself tonight! What part of no she doesn’t understand’
Tina opened the door and said “Why are you here Alice, I’m feeling so bad right now I don’t want you here…” Tina didn’t finish what she was saying when she saw the beautiful pair of brown eyes that will forever haunt her “Bette?”
tbc
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duh, do u have to stop at this moment! can’t wait to read the next chapter, this one is really worth waiting for, I’m sorry for Bette’s discovery about Ed it is really painful. but I wish this will push her more toward Tina ;D
Oh what a place to stop.reat that she has gone to Tina to talk and be with her to help soothe the pain away. But, Bette needs to be clear in her mind what she wants and only go to Tina if she really wants her and not on the rebound. can hardly wait to see what happens next. Thanks for posting.
Amazing story..Ed is a first class jerk!
Ed’s infidelity will turn out to be the best thing that has happened to Bette. Now she can act on her feelings for Tina. How does Ed know that he’s the Baby Daddy? DNA test coming up.
Carrying on an affair for two and a half years… there’s really no excuse for that. And now the other woman is pregnant. Bette should obviously throw Ed out on his ear, and she should really get herself tested for STDs while she’s at it. I don’t think Ed can make it up to her, not ever. They’re done. Tina’s going to have to exercise all her restraint while Bette gets over her marriage ending. It’s going to be interesting! Thanks for the post :)
That was great, I though you gonna let Bette catch him cheating but well this is better and he can be out of her life soon lol. Ok now let Tina comfort Bette and take care of her. Please post more, thanks!
Oh, this is getting good. PPS Can’t wait for another chpt.
ooooh can’t wait to see what happens next! PPS and I mean VERY soon ;)
Yeah! This is going good!!! PPS
Damn!!! Sooo not fair to stop there! Not fair at all! PPS!
So unfair to stop right there! LOL Can’t wait to see what comes next. PPS
good ridence to Ed… what an ass… so glad bette went to tina… and i agree what a place to stop,,, so PPS
Please post soon, cant wait for next chapter.
what??? I can’t believe that you stop there!!!! Wow a long way to go, well written!!!
Oh man how could Ed do this to Bette! Wonderful update. Can’t wait to read what happens. Thank you.