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    In The Army Now Part 17

    5/19/07:Hospital-West Germany-6:45 A.M.

     

    Dana woke up just as the sun was rising. For some reason, she didn’t want the sun to fully rise. Dana hadn’t seen a peaceful sun rise in a long time, and she wanted to share it with somebody. But, visiting hours hadn’t started yet, and she didn’t want to call in one of the nurses just to watch the sun rise.

    Dana tried to sit up, but as soon as she did, a jolt of pain ran through her body. “Damn, why’s there so much pain?”

    “You know, talking to yourself doesn’t usually help, it makes people think you’re crazy. But it’s okay, I do it sometimes” Dana turned her head to where the voice come from and saw Theresa standing in the doorway. “Just checking up on you. I saw you trying to get up. It’s probably not a wise choice to do that.” Theresa looked out the window. “Wow, that’s beautiful. I haven’t seen the sun rise in a long time. Mind if I sit here and enjoy this sun rise?”

    “No, go ahead.”

    Theresa sat down on the chair next Dana’s bed. “You know, you have the best view in the whole hospital.”

    “Oh, I didn’t know that,” Dana yawned.

    Theresa got up. “You should get more rest, I heard that you hardly slept last night.” Theresa walked to the door and opened it. “See you when you wake up,” she said as she walked out the door.

    Dana just stared at the door and even though she didn’t feel tired, sleep overcame her.

     

    5/19/07:Alice and Dana’s house-West Hollywood-7:00 A.M. (L.A Time)

     

    Alice woke up tucked in bed fully clothed. Alice got out of bed, trying to remember the night before. She reached into her pocket and pulled out a piece of paper that had “Vanessa, 783-1957. Call anytime,” scribbled on it.

    Alice finally remembering part of the night before picked up the phone and dialed the number on the paper.

    “Talk to me.”

    “I like the way you answer your phone.”

    “Oh, hi Alice. Was the house I took you to yours?”

    Alice looked around. “Yep.”

    “Oh, that’s good. I thought I took you to the wrong house cause you were practically passed out when I took you home.”

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    Comments

    1. I agree with Adelefiz why doesn’t everyone know about this. i bet you if Aliss knew she wouldn’t be so quick to move on and I’m sure I’m not the only one who thinks so either.

    2. I see a lot more drama to come please post soon I love it and I hope that danna gets back to alice before she moves on with her life so to speak

    3. ‘Sup Stripes? Hey, I’m probably the only one here who knows you’re real name. Anyways, I haven’t been on in a while, but when you told me you and Solid were writing FF, I jumped on the computer and checked ALL your stories. A long and grueling process, but hey it was worth it. I don’t know if I really mean that, or if I’m just afraid you’ll kick my ass, but I said it. I can tell something’s up with, what’s his face? Peter. And the whole Vanessa thing, kinda wondering how far you’ll take it. You tend to stop when it starts to get good. I know I can say that from experience ;). Anyways, keep up the good work laddie, get ungrounded soon so you can post more and so I can call you again. Also, I know that little brain of yours has something cooking up. I’ll be sure to check your somputer later to find out ahead of time. Just get Dana home to Alice SAFE.

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