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In the Beginning……………….Chapter 10……………Shall We Dance?
Tina’s lips found Bette’s neck. She kissed her, nibbling on the soft mocha flesh. Her hands were moving now up and down Bette’s back.
Bette was dying. She couldn’t believe how Tina made her feel. She was throbbing for her. Bette pulled her back to look at Tina’s face.
They looked into each others eyes and then before they knew it they were kissing, a deep passionate kiss that melted them both.
Alice and Shane looked on at the new couple in awe.
Shane: “It’s hotter than ***** out there.” She pointed to Bette and Tina.
Bette and Tina were on fire. They were grinding and moving with each other. Oblivious to the others around them.
Bette whispered into Tina’s ear.
Bette: “T let’s get out of here.”
Tina: “Mmmok.”
Bette: “Let’s go say goodbye to the girls.”
They went to the table.
Bette: “Guys we are going to head out now. Thanks for the table and drinks.”
Tina: “Yes, thanks it was great talking to you both.”
Tina blushed. Shane: “Yeah, nice to meet you Tina. Night you two.”
Bette/Tina: “Goodnight.”
Bette and Tina went back to Tina’s.
They couldn’t get in the house fast enough. They got inside the door and Tina pushed Bette up against the wall. Their lips met. Soft low moans came from them both.
Tina took Bette’s hand and led her to the bedroom. They kicked off shoes on the way. Tina stumbled a couple of times and was laughing at herself.
Tina: “I think I had to many..adidas mother..fuckers.”
Bette was laughing at her.
Bette: “Yes I think you did. Let me help you.”
They were in the bedroom now and they fell on top of the bed in each others arms.
They were fumbling with clothes. Tina was trying to unbutton Bette’s blouse. Bette reached up and did it herself. Tina took it and pushed it off.
Bette was wearing a black bra. Tina took time to admire the view. Then she started kissing Bette’s neck and shoulders.
Bette was pulling Tina’s t-shirt over her head. Tina was not wearing a bra.
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(52 votes, average: 3.67 out of 5)
I am so happy that Bette was strong enough to wait. Thankfully, she was the DD. This is such a happy and uplifting story. We need these more in our world. Please continue soon!
GF,
That was lovely. The tenderness and gentleness came through in abundance. The lover that these two fantastic ladies share for each other was obvious.
Thankfully Bette did the right thing for Tina because I am sure that you have something special in mind for them first time.
I can’t wait so please post real soon.
A loyal fan.
Love the slow pace of this story Bette is so understanding and gentle towards Tina, love that side of her.Post soon.
“I’m looking forward to finding out just how amazing we are.”…
And so are we!
A lot of reserve on B’s part to control her in the moment sensations.
Well Done, More, More, More……….
Great update Gold. It was cute how Tina thought Shane was “cute and sexy” and then told Bette “..I’m all yours.”
Glad Bette notice Tina wasn’t ready and stopped. The wait will be worth it..I’m sure Tina will be sure and sober. LOL. Please continue Gold, really enjoy your posts.
I feel like I’ve been swept off my feet! This was amazing! Thanks!!!!
Reading this left me feeling warm and happy. Thank you for that. Please post soon.
WOW… Goldie… love the pace…slow and steady… and i know you will not disapoint us… please continue
Ugh..just kidding. Bette is being very sweet and thoughtful. When they finally make love…watch out.
Ah, I was so happy to see the return of your delightful story !! Welcome back, talented goldfish !
God yes, your story is a true delight indeed. It strokes my romantic heart in such a charming way, thanks !
I love the mixed laughs and emotions here. Now, of course, after such irresistible sparks we’re looking forward to the fireworks !
Thank you so much for this reading’s joy ! ^_^
Damn so hot and sexy, let see what’s next. Post soon, thanks!
great update, continue!
Oh my goodness, this was really hot!! More soon
juz caught up with the recent chapters. is awesome!! do post soon..!!!
The Adios MotherF***er..is actually my dad’s fav drink. I heard it tastes like grape kool-aid? Good work.
O … baby ! They have the control of Giants ! Wicked, wicked chapter ! Thank you !
I just love this story. Great job. Good girl Bette, you’d definitly would want Tina’s full attention the first time. Which we know is coming very soon, right. PLEASE
Yeeeaaaah, you posted! I love this story – great mix of love and laughter. And the building tension between our two ladies…mmmm…bring it, goldfish!
Yay Bette! She scores major brownie points. I love how she’s so considerate of Tina. They truly are amazing together. Thanks, goldie!
I just reread all your chapters!! I haven’t done a thing at work today….its a good thing that my manager is out of town. Can you pls update again really soon? I got worried when i noticed that at times there was a “gap” betweem postings. Can’t handle it if that happens again. Pls, pls post again really,really soon
*happy sighs*…. I am never disappointed when I read your story. Just the right amount of love added with a bit of sweetner, and voila… we have a cup of beautiful romanace.:) (and I usually like my coffee black) So, bring on the next chapter!! :)
Been following along but have neglected to comment. Sorry. This is a great story. Can’t wait for more.