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In Too Deep
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“What do we got?” The two women bent down and looked at the corpse.
“White male, in his late twenties, about one-hundred sixty-two pounds, gunshot to the head. He was found floating up and down this dock, and we got called down here.”
Dana looked at the man’s beaten body. “Did he have any ID on him?”
The woman shook her head. “No, he’s another John Doe.”
“All right,” Bette stood up. “Take him to the coroner and take down his fingerprints. We’ll find out who he is.” Dana got up and followed Bette.
“This is the third murder this week. What the fuck in going on?” Bette continued to walk around the dock and smiled.
“Have you heard of the McCutcheon family?”
“Yeah—some, what does this have to do with anything?” Bette stopped and turned towards Dana.
“The McCutcheon Family came from New York City. Gabriel and Sheila McCutcheon were big in the mobs back in the seventies. They decided to move out here when Sheila got pregnant and start a new life, but it didn’t happen. Their old ways followed them out here in Los Angeles. Gabriel began to start a big smuggling business here with cocaine and acid, and he was big with making money. He had the money and the power to buy a few cops from LAPD.” Bette sighed and looked at the river. “Gabriel disappeared after Sheila gave birth to a healthy baby girl. Sheila was all alone with the business and didn’t know a damn thing about it. She got help though. She called a friend back from home to help her out. Danny Bello, and he became a father to Sheila’s daughter Shane. Shane grew up watching her mother and new father take over Los Angeles. As she got older, she began to work for her mother and father. She enjoyed every second of it. The fast cash, the booze, the drugs and the parties.”
“How old was this girl?”
“She was about fourteen.” Bette put her hand on her hip. “Suddenly, her mother died from AIDS. The business was left to Danny until Shane got fed up with his bullshit and his beatings. She took matter into her own hands and killed the man.”
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Interesting start … keep this coming, you have us – hook, line and sinker!!
I always love it when authors break the mold of the L word characters and I’ve always been a fan of your writing Akira. And this fic is no exception. I love it how you portrayed Dana in a different occupation. I definitely want to see where you take this fic.
very intresting …. like it keep it coming
nice….. shane’s an ass….. carmen anyone haha sorry cant help it. love the story so far
This is interesting and like it!
I’m loving this already, please carry on with this story :)
Akira, Brilliant beginning and very fascinating. Please continue soon as I can’t wait. Again your imagination and talent have created an awesome adventure. Many thanks, Your loyal fan.
Moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore…LOL. Hot start and I’m digging Shane as the drug lord and Jenny ‘finally’ gets to be crazy with a purpose…method to her madness, if you will. Genius. And Carmen? W00t I think I can spy where this is headed but please, do tell ;) Continue please! btw, Alice is positioned for great comedy as usual. And Bette and Dana are an unusual pair so I’m interested. Great…now I’m all tingly :p
I’m in!
i would much rather have either one of your two other stories, i have been dying for another update on either one!!!!!!please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
this is wicked, please post again soon! X
I like it so far, keep going. PPS
Yip IM HOOKED SO FAR!
Ok can become a really interesting story, that. I love Bette in the role as a fearless guardian of the law. Therefore further writing story.
liking this. looking forward to see where it goes. post more soon :)
I’m loving this story already, please continue!!
Oooh I’m loving this already Dana and Bette in police outfits, yes please :D This is going to be very interesting so I’m def in too! xx