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Indiscretion- Pt 1
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“What are you doing?” Alice asked. “We’re going to be late.”
“One minute.” I shouted back. “I just need to put on my shoe.” I ran out of the bedroom to see her tapping her watch, “Ready.” I smiled.
“Its about time. I told them we would be there at seven and it six thirty already.”
“Who are we going to meet anyway?”
“Our new client.”
“Oh ok.” I opened the door of my ever so faithful nineteen ninety-three Honda Civic. Camille called her Uncle Sam, said it was her “civic duty”. It was as corny as things like that got but it always bring a smile to my face when I remember it. “You have any idea when the job is about?”
“Not yet. He is one of our clients but he wants this done as a favour.”
The drive to the restaurant was like any other drive with Alice. She talked mostly and I listened. It’s usually about the same thing. Why am I still single after all these years? Why am I throwing away my life? I have to get over what happened with Camille. Simple reality, I’m not ready.
We arrived a few minutes late. There was a dark haired, fairly handsome gentleman waiting for us at the table. He stood and held his hand out to Alice. “Alice, good evening.” He looked in my direction, “And you must be Tina.”
“Yes.” I shook his hand. “Nice to meet you,” I had no idea who he was and he realised.
“Jeff. Jeff Johnson.” He replied. “Please have a seat ladies.” We made small talk before getting down to the purpose of the dinner meeting. “I know it’s not the kind of request you expected from me, but I didn’t know where else to turn.”
“Well why don’t you tell us and we will see if we can help you.”
“I need you to follow my wife.” He said frankly.
“Your wife?” Alice and I shared a look. “Care to elaborate on that?
“I think she is having an affair. If I have to get a divorce I need proof.”
“J.J. I don’t know if we should be the ones to do that.”
“Alice I’ve known you longer than I know most of the people in my life.”
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WOW, really like this story. PPS
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