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Indiscretion- Pt 6
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Chapter 6
***Tina***
I wasn’t sure if I heard right. It was said so nonchalantly too, like it was understood in our relationship, but I thought I should have said something and, “I love you too.” Was the only thing I thought of, and as clichéd or rehearsed as it sounded at the time I really did love her.
We pulled up in front of the home. Naomi was waiting for her on the porch. She ran to Bette as she exited the van. She didn’t notice me in the van until I opened the door. She looked confused more than surprised to see me. As I made my way around to them Bette broke the embrace. “Nai, this is Tina.” She introduced me.
She hugged me as I would a family member I haven’t seen in years. “Thank you.”
I looked at Bette and mouthed, “What did I do?”
“I told her what you did that day at the beach.” She replied. For a brief moment I had forgotten what had happened a few weeks ago. I the realised that had I not saved Bette that day, Naomi would have lost her mother and perhaps the only relative she knew. The worse part was that all she would have known was the Bette stopped visiting and never have known why. My heart grew heavy at the thought. I couldn’t speak. My voice was caught in my throat and I was struggling to hold back the tears. I did the easiest thing at the time, I bent over and kissed the top of her head. “Come sweetie, you’re squeezing the life out of her.”
I got the basket out of the car while Bette spread the blanket for us to eat. I could tell with each flip of the blanket that she was in pain, which she did her best to hide from Naomi. I walked over to her and whispered, “You ok?”
“Yeah, it just hurts when I use force.” She replied softly before heading back to the car.
“You know I’ve never met any of my mom’s friends.” She started when we were alone, “You’re the first. She told me you make her laugh.”
Bette came back before I could comment on Naomi’s statement. “Are you guys talking about me?”
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With Bette spending more time with Tina, I hope her husband doesn’t continue to abuse her. Something needs to be done about him and quickly.
Glad that Naomi liked Tina! :D Dana rocks and it´s cool to imagine Dana being a doctor not a Tennis player! Great chapter and PPS
I thought noone including Naomi knew that Bette was her mom. Go Tina way to go being there for Bette. Her husband is not only having an affair he is also abusive to Bette I hope Tina builds a very good ironclad case against him so he can’t touch her or her assets. PPS
Well Tina has won Naomi’s heart. :D I think she would have done so even if she hadn’t had to save Bette.
bnt I am really enjoying your story and dang Bette’s husband is a jerk and so glad that Tina is helping her out. Loved reading Dana in this story!!
Some good stuff, like Bette acknowledging Naomi and Tina meeting her; Naomi liking Tian and thanking her for saving Bette and Bette and Tina’s growing closenss. Some bad things, like Bette being abused and living in fear. Luckily the good outweighs the bad. Hopefully there will be sufficient evidence for Bette to get her freedom from the bum whose her husband… soon. Love the update. Keep it coming. PPS.
the ass wipe that did that wants a divorce, yet he threatens her??!!! what a dick, he needs to go and to go NOW!!!! I MEAN LIKE YESTERDAY!!!!! and Bette falling asleep at Tina’s won’t be good, how will she explain that to the ass wipe???
This is a very interesting story regarding the abusive marriage and why Bette is staying rather than leaving the jerk. I do so hope she leaves soon, and hopefully Tina can build a strong enough case against the bastard and make him leave and not harm Bette anymore. He should be UNDER the jail rather than just in it. He is a vicious mean bastard and a bully to boot.There is always a place for people lke him. I hate to see her hurt. Hopefully she and Tina can profess their love and maybe that will give Bette the strength to leave the animal. Gottaget off my soapbox. You are doing a very good job with this story in showing the many aspects of abusive relationships. I have lots more to say but I won’t. PPS
Tina still needs to take some pictures. Tina won Naomi heart as well as her Mother. thanks
I just started reading this story and love it. Thanks to Tina Bette may just have a life and maybe her daughter together. Somehow Tina, Bette, Dana and maybe Alice can get some serious dirt on Jeff and put him in jail. Bette needs to be free of him.
Poor Bette and glad Tina is there for her. Wow Dana is a Dr. thats cool!
Hmm Ive just read this, intrigued, will have to go backwards.
Well, Bette sleeping with Tina is alright with me ;-), but I don’t think the scum she has as a husband will appreciate it :-§ Unless she NEVER returns to him, but perhaps it’s a little too early to have a good case against him… or maybe, by any chance, he’s gone on another business trip or with his mistress ?!! that would be good, and they would have some time for themselves, hmm ?… Keep posting please —– oh, and I loved Naomi :-)
Hope Tina can get enough evidence against Bette’s husband soon. I’m afraid for her life. He’s dangerous.