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Infinite Possibilities pt 20
The production progressed nicely, no mistakes to point out. Drew read his lines perfectly, making Bette feel even guiltier about this surprise. She watched him and Tina dance, during the Capulet party scene. But Tinas attention wasnt there, and Bette could see it.
Tina floated across the stage, her hands in Drews. She glanced to the stage exits, trying to spot Bette to show her how happy she was. The nerves had disappeared when she stepped onto the stage, the light flowing over her like a beautiful blanket.
Ms. Galla placed a hand on Bettes shoulder, startling her for a moment, You ready for this, Porter?
Absolutely not. She laughed nervously, her voice a hushed whisper.
Well I say youve got 2 minutes till youve gotta get out there. She watched as Tina climbed on the ladder backstage, finding her way to the balcony that Bette had built so long ago. Drew scrambled off to the side of the stage, hiding in the bushes that were a mere few feet from Bette. He motioned her over, forcing her to kneel beside him.
At first she did nothing, but eventually followed over to him.
Good luck, He whispered as Tina read her lines.
Thanks, Bette smiled and winked as Drew pushed her out onto the brightly lit stage.
Tinas breath caught in her throat as a surprised Bette Porter took to the stage, crouching below the balcony.
But, soft! What light through yonder window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun! Arise fair sun, and kill the envious moon, who is already sick and pale with grief, That thou her maid art far more fair than she: Be not her maid, since she is envious; her vestal livery is but sick and green, And none but fools do wear it; cast it off. It is my lady, Bettes warm eyes looked up at Tina, staring directly into her soul. Tina thought she might cry, this was beautiful. But Bette continued. O, it is my love.
It wasnt until that line, that Tina understood what was really going on. This was Bette confessing her love, opening up in public. She heard nothing more of Bettes monologue, and her lines were but a blur. The room was dark, and to Tina, they were the only two there. She watched, saying her lines, but her eyes remained on Bette, who was dressed in her street clothes. The whole audience seemed just as confused as Tina was, gasping as Bette began to climb the balcony.
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(36 votes, average: 3.75 out of 5)
Holy frak *THUD* aakdhgieakdnv…*Climbs back into the chair* wow that was freaking amazing oh evil one! You are going to leave us, wah! Gotta love it and I love ya, woo!
K
That was excellent. I hope Dana comes up with something good. I can’t believe I have to wait 2 months to find out. I am sure it will be worth the wait. Have fun and be careful. Love this as always.
You’ve stolen a page from the book of Reba. With all the evilness and ‘muhahahahaha’. I can’t believe you’re gonna leave us like this for 2 months. It was beautiful. Very loving and romantic. Have a great time at camp and we will we eagerly anticipating your return. =)
That’s wrong, leave it like that then leave for two months. SO WRONG. Well have a great time at camp. Good Job.
How can you do this to us??? I love this story. I sure as hell hope they have a computer at this camp of yours!!! LOL Have fun while you’re away, we eagelry wait your return.
you’re leaving us like this??? Cruel, very cruel.
Have a wonderful time at camp. This is an excellent way to end this chapter–this is a cliffhanger!!! I will be here anxiously awaiting the updates you will have when you return. Stay safe but have lots and lots of adventures.
You gonna leave us like this? Come on give us a nice little post tonight before you leave tomorrow……PLEASE, PRETTY, PRETTY PLEASE!!! TWO WHOLE MONTHS??? HOW WILL WE SURVIVE!!!!!!! HAVE FUN AT CAMP!
So, you more than deserve to walk around camp with your chest puffed up thinking you’ve got one over on everyone – ’cause ya’ know what? You do! Great story & what a great idea to have ALL of your readers hanging on a cliff! ;) Thanks! And be careful who you get in the canoe with…
I am more excited about your return than the return of season 3. Have fun at camp! Stay out of Drama!:)
I knew that, just knew that! :) [read spoilers;)]but you caught me with Tina’s parents’ appearance. Great finale!! Want more but have to wait.. HAVE FUN on your camp, enjoy holidays!
thanks for sharing kiddo. Have a great and safe summer and hurry back soon. What a Great and wonderful story you have given us to read and reread, reread reread for two months.
thanx for the long post. have fun at camp…can’t u maybe take a wireless laptop with u? please??
Feelin woozy…since I held my breath for most of this chapter! That was excellent , brilliant , better than the season finale of the actual show-
In response to a few comments asking me to write at camp: I don’t have a laptop sadly, and even if I did, I couldn’t get internet at camp. Oh and they don’t allow laptops. It’s like a prison, I know. Thanks for all the wonderful comments, guys!
omg!!!! that was an amazing chapter!! i’ve been reading this story since the first post and wow i love it ..i cant believe we have to wait 2 months for the next post aahhhh!!cant believe ur leaving us like this!!! anyways i’ll be waiting for ur return… have fun at camp
Megga- YOU’RE LEAVING US FOR 2 MONTHS WITH A CLIFFHANGER LIKE THAT!!! OMG YOU ARE SOOOO EEEEEVVVIIIIILL!
It’s going to be a long 2 months wait. Have fun at camp.
PRISON CAMP! We are in prison while you are at camp! Well, your return will give us something to look forward to. At least it isn’t likr the real TLW…making us wait 9-10 months. Hope you have a wonderful time, stay safe and take care of you.
P.S. Your story is awesome.
….*WTF???* That was so beautiful…I started crying during the Balcony scene…then I started shouting in protest of T’s parents being in the audience…Girl, you ARE NOT SERIOUS by leaving us hanging for 2 MONTHS!!!!!!!!!! *flustered expression* Hmmm, you’ll have to make it up to your faithful readers in the future..*winks* This story was FABULOUS!!!!! Utterly FABULOUS!!!
i can’t wait two months. we are at the good part. noooooooooooooooooooo. but i am loving it.
damn!!! have a great summer – it’ll be a long wait over here
That was great. How could you leave us hanging like that!!!!!!!!!!! The time is going to crawl by have fun at canmp
dude- strangles you- hurry back, also have fun though : )
Two months??? Can’t you sneek in a gps laptop or something??? LOL Be a good girl while at camp.
wow! that was awesome, and NOT FAIR that you are leaving it at that for TWO WHOLE MONTHS!!! you best be kidding and post before you leave ;) have fun at camp! you will be missed!!!
2 MONTHS AHHHH!! thats cool i have enjoyed this story have fun at camp and i wil be lookin out for u in august
2 months, 2 fu*#ing months! How long does this camp go for?!?!?! This is sooooo not fair, I can’t wait that long, I love this story buddy and your going to make me wait. I reckon Tina should tell her mum and dad to get stuffed as if you would say that to your daughter, the poor thing. Bette was soooooo cute though granted I don’t really like Shakesphere and Romeo and Juliet but you just made me look at it in a diffrent light! Anyway have fun on your camp and get your ass back to posting ASAP, we’ll miss ya like hell!!!!!!!!!
To quote a famous rooster,”Well subdivide me and Kentucky fry me!” That was so romantic, risky but romantic. And now you’re keeping us on a leash for 2 months…8 weeks…approx 60days…1440hrs…86400mins….ok you get the pic. Well enjoy camp. Take time out and relax and when you get back we’ll all be eagerly awaiting Dana’s plan and pray that it works!
Damn this is so fucking excellent and driving us crazy, love it. Wow this is bad for Bette and Tina and now Dana help them and have an idea for Tina and Bette, but we have to wait “I’m sorry to said this” for 2 fucking months. What you guys doing in there, killing some animal? tiger, bear or elephant or what? LOL. Anyway, enjoy your camp, we just have to wait until you get back. Thanks! Excellent chapter, 5 stars for you!
OMG, I don’t think half of us will last that long!! LoL…loved this chapter Dorrie;) WE will miss you, take care and have fun!!
2 MONTHS #@#@%@#@#….WONDERFUL CHAPTER WE WILL MISS YOU.HAVE FUN..
Hello, hope the posting isn’t too late, but I found your story today and caught up with it. I must say, it’s amazing, but a little scary for me. Are ALL high school students like this? So much emotions for people so young (AND the bullying and cruelties)!! I’m student teaching soon (Worried I’ll get picked on!), and wow. I guess high school sure has changed since I was there. Great story though, can’t believe we have to wait two months. :(
Hi Dorrie!
I saw you leave a comment on one of the fan fiction. That must mean that you are back from camp. I can’t wait for your new post. Although, I hate this idea, but maybe you should re-post your previous chapters so that new readers can catch up too. Unfortunately, this would mean that I would have to wait a while, before a new post.
PS: I hope you had a great time at camp….please feel free to e-mail me, if you want. You know the address. Kiitos!