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insatiable part 4
Insatiable part 4
previously : Dana n alice make it official, Dana gets a nasty leavin gift from Tonya
They stood there watchin the flames on dana’s home destroy everything in its path
Alice: im so sorry babe, she will pay ill make sure of it
Dana: No this is my problem ill deal with it
Alice: sweetie if its your problem its mine to, i love you dane im not gunna let anyone hurt you
and get away with it
Dana: alice i love you 2 but im guna deal with this ok, she will pay for what shes done
Alice: come on lets take you back to mine baby
They walked off towards the car just as they were a few feet away they caught a glimpse of a
vechile parked close by the driver a spitting image of Tonya
Dana: ***** im gonna get her
before alice could grab her dana had already began 2 run towards the car
Alice: ***** DANA
Dana: come here you god damn ***** im gonna ***** kill you
The car reved up a vicous purr leaving its engine before it jolted off down the street
Dana: FUCKKK
alice quickly got into her car speeding off picking up dana on the way
Alice: come on get in
they speeded off headed in the direction of the cat murderin pyshcotic *****
Dana: come on alice faster shes getting away
The streets were a blaze of tryes scretching police sirens faint in the back ground
Alice: ***** dane the ***** cops are around
Dana: i dont care just GO!
the cars becoming closer and closer dodging objects that were in thier way speeding thru red lights
causing mayhem on the roads
when right then it happened the car stopped right in its tracks
Alice: *****!
alice pulled over getting out of the vechile as so did dana
Dana: ok ***** come on show yourself
Tonya got up out of her car 1 hand behind her back
Tonya : awwww u make such a sweet ***** couple look at you standing there your pathetic
all this love ***** what the ***** is that i gave you everything
Alice: dont ya mean took everything, you’ve destroyed her home killed her cat , god knows how much
money you took her for your nothing but a ***** money grabbing ***** let alone a MURDERER
jesus whats wrong with you
Tonya: dont talk to me that way alice, who are you your nothing a NOBODY
Dana : ok dont you even ***** dare speak to her that way
tonya began walking closer to the 2 one hand still suspiously kept behind her back
Tonya : ok ladies here’s whats gunna happen your gunna get into my car and were gunna take
a little drive somehwere ok
Dana: ***** you i aint going nowhere and neither are you other than jail!
tonya at this point slaps dana around the face
Tonya: awww snookims always was the dumbass
alice walked over to tonya ready to kick her *****
Alice: ok you did all that but hitting her oh ***** no
tonya pulled out the suspious hand revelaing she had a gun
pointing it at dana
Tonya: 1 more step and i pull the trigger and she goes bye bye’s
Alice: ***** !!! tonya this is crazy stop ok
Dana: tonya please leave ok ill forget everything and let you go ok i swear just please let us go
poking the gun at dana’s head banging it against her temple
Tonya : SHUT UP!!! now get up and get in the car
dana got up shaking like a nervous wreck tears dropping from her eyes and crashing hard
against the floor her legs shaking so badly she could hardly walk
alice began to follow
Tonya: NO! not you just her you back off
Alice: tonya please this is crazy it doesnt have to be this way
Tonya: SHUT THE ***** UP OMG ALL YOU DO IS YAK YAK YAK
dana had already now seated herself in the car lookin out of the window at her lover alice
tonya now heading towards the car with a smug grin apon her face
Tonya : oh and alice dont even think about following 1 sign of you or any other of your little
geeky mates and BANG ok
she slammed the car door n speeded off down the road
Alice: FUKKKKK
quickly reaching for her cell banging down hard on the buttons her hands shaking so bad
Shane : helllooooooo
Alice: ***** shane its tonya shes got dana she just drove off shes got a gun and everything we gotta
find her god knows what shes capable of
Shane: whoahhh slow down ok
Alice: shane shes got her we have to move now
Shane: ok ok ill meet you at yours we will get her dont worry ok
Alice: just hurry ok
Alice hung up jumped into her car speeding off into the direction her lover was taken
TBC
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(35 votes, average: 3.43 out of 5)
ok dont feck with the ton, ton cos she’s packin a piece. Shane go kick tonya’s ass. well done rachey. Smashin chapter sweetie.
hey rach great chapter baby and i´m with addie i hate those 3..lol..
good job rach. i hope alice can save dana. Yoda is coming so all is saved LOL
Tonya ,Helena and Candace all belong in the same sinkin boat i hate that beeyatch!! anyway awesome job keep goin!!!!
i agree with addie