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Insight. Ch2
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Insight. Ch2
“Someone moved into the house opposite,” Helena mumbled, lighting up her fifth cigarette,
“I thought you were going to cut-down?” Dr Kennard remarked, picking up on an assurance from an earlier session,
Helena nodded, “I was,”
“What happened then?”
“Life.”
“So she just … introduced herself?” Alice asked, as they gathered at Bette’s the following day for lunch.
Bette nodded, “Uh huh, she’d been to the shop for cigarettes and was coming back when I was,”
“What’s she like?” Dana asked, growing just as interested as Alice since it seemed they wouldn’t be coming off the current topic any time soon,
Bette shrugged, “I dunno … she’s ‘nice’ I guess,” she paused, thinking about it carefully, “it’s a little strange though, don’t you think, that she shut herself away all week then all of a sudden decided to speak to me?”
“Maybe she just didn’t feel like it?” Shane suggested, cracking open a bottle of beer. She grinned wryly, “can’t tell you how many times I wish *I* could just ignore Alice,”
Alice picked up a bagel and threw it at her, “Hey!”
Across the courtyard the door to Helena’s place slid aside and she stepped out, barefoot and wearing an extreme array of clothing,
“Oh … my … God,” Dana mumbled, staring opened mouthed past their heads,
They turned to look, seeing Helena in a multicoloured sundress with flowers in her hair and an eccentric cardigan on pacing back and forth along the edge of the pool, shakily dragging on a cigarette,
“What’s she doing?” Alice wondered, watching the display,
Bette looked and frowned, feeling as uneasy then as she had done the morning before when Helena failed to show for her morning swim. Her grey and black wintery clothes replaced by an unmatching outfit of reds and purples, making Bette wonder for a fleeting second if her across the way neighbour was entirely sane.
“Should we invite her to lunch?” Dana asked, thinking from the look of her it seemed like a meal or two wouldn’t hurt,
Bette shook her head, “I don’t think so,” she paused, “I get the impression she doesn’t like to be disturbed,”
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Holy Shiii…Shoot! What are you doing to me?!?! This is soooo not fair! I need more! Now! Please! I’m begging…*falling to my knees*…Gawwwwwd!
YOU have zheese on her knees !!! Damn! You are good !!!
intriguing….and there’s a doctor Kennard in blue fuck me heels!!!!!
I like! Waiting for more, intrigued….
This story is really different and I like it very very much. Just great! I’m eager to know more about that mysterious Helena. PPS!!
I love a good mystery!!!!! jinjur
Now, I really like this Helen, as a mysterious, smoking recluse, and Bette all intrigued and wanting to keep Helena for herself. Wonder what Marina knows? This is very good, as always, sofa. Can’t wait for the next chapter. Cheers!
seems there is a connection between Helena and Marina. am I right???? huh??? And once again I ask is this a Belena or a Tibetter story???? please answer this time!!! thanks!!
really enjoyed the post…like the different backgrounds…eccentric…yeah, eccentric, funny!
Oh, Sofa – the plots you weave are always so intriguing. Tina has the doctor that makes housecalls — I love it! Bette seems lost in the mystery of Helena. I have a feeling she’s going to regret having this housewarming party. PPS!!!
As an old stoner (we were potheads in my day. We used to walk to school 10 miles barefoot in the snow and gave the school marm a daily apple), I am pleased no end that Helena, Bette, and Shane all know their spliff. (I roll beautiful, free-hand joints, everyone says so.) So, uh, just what kind of doctor is Tina? Is she of the ‘feel good’ variety? And what happened to Helena’s finishing school manners? Usually it’s Jenny who is a weirdo, but your Helena is a bit dodgy. What the hell’s going on here, anyway?
Aha…a Dr Tina Kennard I presume…and she makes house calls…a rare commodity, so Helena or her Mom have money. That was an interesting reaction from Marina, so I wonder if she knows Helena???? Can’t wait for the next update Sofa!
I’m really intrigued by this story… Helena is so mysterious.. this is awesome!!! PPS
i loves me this story, just love it. my girlfriend, the creative genius;) it’s making me itchy though…the knowledge that *you* know what is going to happen and *i* do not. i want more, but i shall restrain myself since you have work and are apparantly ill. xoxoxox, get well, don’t be sick…and post when you can my brilliant cutie
I am just getting a chance to read this and I am very intrigued even if it may be a potential Belena story.I guess Tina is Helena’s doctor who makes house calls.I am interested in Helena’s background and why she hides herself away.