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Insight. Ch4
Bette chuckled, “I know …”
“So this gallery of yours,” Helena asked intrusively, “is it famous?”
“No,” Bette set down her knife and fork, “no, not yet, but someday I hope to gain recognition,”
“Recognition … or notoriety?” Helena replied, “because it seems to me that all great art institutions get to be known because of the foundations they rock,” she paused, “are you the kind of person who rocks foundations Bette?”
Bette stared back at her, “Don’t you think that’s kind of a personal question?”
Helena shrugged, shivering a little, the weather had turned colder and her damp clothes didn’t help, she looked at Bette and then sneezed, loudly,
“You look cold,” Bette stated, “we should go …”
“No, I’m fine,” Helena protested, knowing it was useless, “I’m just gonna use the bathroom,” she added, “then we can go,”
She’d just about left the table when Bette’s cell phone rang,
“Hey Al,”
Alice walked about her room in her underwear picking out something nice to put on, “We’re meeting in The Planet at half-eight,” she stated, “I’m really getting to like it there …”
“Er …”
Alice sensed the tone, “What?”
“Nothing,” Bette was quick to reply, “nothing, it’s just … I’m in Long Beach,”
“Long Beach California?” Alice checked,
“No … Long Beach Idaho … Yes! Long Beach California,” Bette replied, annoyed with Alice’s ridiculousness some times,
“Why?” Alice asked quietly,
“I came here with Helena …”
Bette waited as Alice went quiet, her silence saying more than her words would.
“Go on …” Bette prompted, “just say it,”
“I’m not saying anything,” Alice muttered, preparing to hang up, “shall I say we’ll see you if we see you?”
Bette sighed, “Sure …”
~
The drive back to West Hollywood seemed to take longer than the drive out, as Bette tried hard to stop herself from asking any of the questions that forced themselves to the front of her mind. Struggling with the idea that whilst she enjoyed Helena’s company there was nothing concrete in their hanging out together. Knowing that Helena’s response to that would come like a line from a film or book, leaving her as equally confused if not more than before.
Helena stopped her as they walked up towards the gate from the parking lot, pulling Bette back, “I just wanted you to know I had fun today,”
Bette smiled, “Me too,”
Across the street a dark blue limousine with blacked out windows sat a safe distance away from the two women, it’s occupant in the backseat just watching,
“Helena?”
Helena shushed Bette with a finger against her lips, “Don’t,”
“But …”
Helena shook her head, “It’ll ruin it,”
Bette let out a frustrated sigh, the two of them stopping as she unlocked the gate with her passkey,
Behind them the driver of the car got out and opened up the back, revealing stockings first ending in expensive Italian shoes as a smartly coiffured, middle aged woman got out.
“Helena?”
Helena turned and sighed, “Hello Mummy,”
tbc ….
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(44 votes, average: 3.43 out of 5)
i f**ing love this story, it reminds me a little of Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind in the best possible way, and it being one of my favorite movies of all time, this is a good thing…i love how the characters are bridging the strange terrain between them, how bette’s being just very easily moved beyond her control issues, and how helena is being forced to communicate, not forced in a bad way, just nudged along…very very lovely writing, i want mooooooooooooore! xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
Yes. Very yes. More when you can, cheers + ta
You’re not writing fast enough!!! Please, sofa, please…Me want more too! more more more more more more more more more more more…
Things are always interesting when Peggy shows up. I enjoy her but I hope she doesn’t put too much of the kibash on the budding romance. Or whatever it is. See? You’ve still got me wondering.
This is starting to get real interesting. And I really can’t wait for your next post for it.Great update!
Very interesting and intriguing.
Ahhh O.K., still no answers to all the questions…just more intrigue and strange behaviour. Helena does have Mommy issues, even in this story it seems, but it still seems like there’s another cause for Helena’s problem besides Peggy. Now, is Helena really attracted to Bette, or is Bette just a life line for her in her current state? I’m hoping Dr. Kennard will see Helena’s dependency on Bette and that will be the catalyst for introducing Bette and Tina. Oh hell, this is your story…I’ll just wait and read your version! Great update Sofa.
Thanks for posting twice tonight. I like this tale. Helena sees to have a touch of Jennyitis…
Seems slightly like a nerves breakdown. Itss going to get better. Peggy is in town. In my mind they will be good friends. Still waiting for Ms Hottie in heels. thanks
It keeps getting better and more intrigueing. I like the slow build and the character development but I can’t wait for everything to be revealed. I’m going to cosign on the comment from toby4ever…
Yaaay, another chapter up! This story is sooooooo good! MORE PLEASE