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    Story written on September 23, 2008 by pseud.
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    Surprise, surprise.

    (from part 3…)

     

    Alice found herself engulfed in a big hug. As much as she resisted this woman and her affect on Bette, she had to admit that there was something about Tina that she really liked. She returned the hug.

     

    They were releasing each other from the embrace just as they heard Bette’s voice sound a loud, “excuse me?”

     

    (continuing…)

     

    Alice gave an exaggerated sigh. “Back off, Sheriff. Miss Tina’s all yours.”

     

    “I was just thanking Alice for…”

     

    “For being my usual helpful and friendly self.” Alice jumped in, saving Tina from having to admit exactly what she was being thanked for.

     

    Bette turned her attention to Tina. She took hold of her girlfriend’s hand. “This is a pleasant surprise.”

     

    “I thought you could use dinner.”

     

    “Thanks for thinking of me.” Bette leaned in and gave Tina a kiss on the cheek.

     

    Alice couldn’t help her put-upon look. “Yeah, because no one else wants to make sure she eats properly.”

     

    “And I wanted to thank you for the flowers.”

     

    Bette and Tina each had her gaze locked on the other.

     

    “Get a room, you two.” Alice grumbled as she walked away from the pair.

     

    “Are you staying for dinner, Alice?” Tina asked of the departing woman.

     

    “Let her go,” Bette whispered.

     

    “Bette. She’s your friend.”

     

    “Which means I know her. She’ll be fine.”

     

    Bette pulled Tina into a tight hug. “This is what I needed today.”

     

    “You had some of this today, as I recall.”

     

    “I’m not sure I could never have enough.”

     

    “Really.”

     

    “Really,” Bette confirmed, placing a light kiss on Tina’s temple to seal the statement.

     

    Slipping slowly from Bette’s grip, Tina started fixing up a plate of the Thai food. “Anything you don’t like?”

     

    “It smells wonderful.”

     

    With the food dished up, they took places next to each other at a small table in the kitchen area. “Someday we’ll still do homecooked.”

     

    “I look forward to it,” Bette said earnestly.

     

    “And you were right. Your card.”

     

    “Three weeks is not too long.”

     

    “But it’s not going to be three weeks until I see you again?”

     

    Bette gave a very hungry smile. “I don’t think I could stand three days away from you.”

     

    “You guys are still sickening,” Alice said, walking in. She went to the food and helped herself before taking a seat at the table. “I locked the front door.”

     

    “Thanks, Alice.”

     

    “And thank you, Tina, for dinner. I know you did it all for me.”

     

    “Of course, Alice,” said Tina, playing along while giving Bette’s leg a nudge with her own under the table.

     

    “So, Tina, unlike Porter who’s married to this place, do you have any exciting plans for tonight?”

     

    “Well, I did have a thought.” Tina cleared her throat as both Bette and Alice looked towards her expectantly.

     

    (good place to stop?)

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    10. Huh. For some strange reason, I dunno why, that didn’t seem like a good place to stop at all. Maybe I’ll have it figured out by the next time you post, pseud, which I’m hoping is soon… cheers.

    12. Readers: something about the dynamic between Bette and Alice in this story reminds me of, “Broken Girls with Strange Frames”, by Rachel_Raj. It is one of the finest series never to be awarded a prize on this site. Sadly overlooked, it is a unique gem. You should check it out. …thanks for the space, Pseud.

    14. Well, I would have liked to hear about those plans, but it looks like I’m going to have to wait. Pseud, you’re as good at teasing as you are at writing!

    15. No it was not, but it was fun to read. Alice is such a hoot. She really is a good friend who is always in the wrong place for Bette and Tina. Alice has this knack of coming between Bette and Tina.

    17. HEy Pseud, Loved the humor here. Alice is such a clod at times. And yes, this is one of those times. Instead of letting these lover enjoy an intimate bite Alice, Sit downs pulls up and plate and starts to dig in. Doesn’t she know Tina was only being polite when inviting her to stay for food. Bette’s face will be a study right now. And Tina’s teasing comment really got the gals interest. Please contine soon. I just love the light and shade in this tale. Much gratitude from Your Loyal Fan.

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