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Intervention – Chpt 20
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“No wants to stay, Mommy,” Angelica protested, looking first at one mother and then the other.
“Please, Angelica!” Tina said, staring at Bette. “This is big girl talk.”
“But Mommy, me big girl! Me eats bacon and Fwench toasts and scwambled eggs for bweakfast. Not Cocoa Puffs.”
Stroking Angelica’s curly hair and gazing down at her, Tina asked her again to leave the room. “That’s wonderful, Angel. You are a big girl. But Mommy needs to talk to Mama alone.”
Helena arose. “I’ll just take Angelica into her room to play.”
Angelica walked to the couch and stood next to Helena.
“No!” Bette said forcefully. “I want you to stay, Helena.”
“This doesn’t concern Helena, Bette,” Tina said, again glaring at Helena.
“Bette, I’ll just take…” Helena began.
“No. I want you to stay. Please,” Bette said, turning to face her. “Angelica, be a good girl and take Fluffy with you to your room for a while. You didn’t do anything bad, sweetie. I’ll come get you in a few minutes.”
Helena placed Fluffy in Angelica’s arms. “Be gentle with her, sweetie,” she cautioned.
“Me will, Ella.” Angelica turned and looked at her two mothers forlornly before heading to her room. “Gwown-ups sucks,” she mumbled, holding her kitten to her cheek.
“I heard that, Angelica!” Tina scolded her. “Bette, what are you teaching my child here? She doesn’t use language like that at home!”
Helena walked towards Bette.
Growing flushed, her anger warming her face, Bette grimaced. She looked back to make sure Angelica had entered her room before proceeding.
“What the fuck do you want? What are you doing here?” Bette growled.
“Darling!” Helena said, taking Bette’s side, trying to calm her, and wrapping her palm around Bette’s hand soothingly.
“See! Listen to your filthy mouth!” Tina accused, after staring at Helena’s hand taking Bette’s. “And look at the two of you! Dressed in your bathrobes. Correction, Bette’s bathrobes! What do you think you’re teaching Angelica? Bette, I want to talk to you alone.”
“Well, we’re not teaching her to be a bitch!” Bette said. “And Helena’s not going anywhere.” Bette scrunched her eyes, peering closely at Tina’s face and hair, her shirt and her pantlegs. “And what in the hell is all over you?”
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I will be back I just wanted you to know that you are the best… love and hugs, JC
Tina calmed down rather quickly, I must say. Or should I say ‘post haste’?
Post hastily, zheese.
Post Hastily indeed! Is this twice in two days or am I dreaming? Is anyone gonna introduce Fluffy to Tina?!!! Maybe she likes banana! LOL
Just when you make us believe that hell is going to break out. You turn everything around and tina is a gentle pussy cat and Helena is the Lion Queen. thanks
Hellbent your so bad “maybe fluffy likes bananas”. Zheese what are you scared of? If there were still those contests for the writers here you would have won that funny catagorie one. You did have me wondering what was going on with the whole Tinas mad and Bettes nervous about it things, then I though Helena was going to get turned off and leave post haste, so glad things are working out and looking forward to were they go so even if you get scared, pretend your not and post anyway. Have a good turkey day, Thank you, Md
dang Z, you let tina have it with both barrels and it was bloody marvelous…LOL…you write A so well!! Really enjoyed the post and Happy Thanksgiving to you too!
yep yep yep… you are as Tina Turner… not “Tina” would say ‘simply the best’ you my most amazing friend are truly so very freaking good… you never cease to amaze me with just how much you can move me… with your words… with your delicate humor… I wish I was ‘funny’ like you :D… but more so with your incredible friendship… you know I love ya right… always and forever my friend… always and forever, much love and hugs, JC (Latin Nephew to those Salsa Angels and extremely excited Cuz to the ever beautiful Dragonfly Eunichick)
Zheese, Good to see Tina and Bette making some progress in dealing with their past. Yes, they are forever linked by Angelica and the time they spent together. Now is the time to put the past in its place and look to live in the moment and plan for the future. And it Bette’s case that is with Helena. Tina needs to move on and find her own path. Just brilliantly written and capture all the right and proper emotions. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
Sounds like Tina is heeding the advice I was going to suggest….It’s over. Get over it….Now as for poor cute wittle Angewica. No wonder da kid can’t speak cowwectwy. Mama Tina weinforces it….Hopefully hanging out with our fair lady Helena will correct that speak impedent post-haste.
That should be “speech impediment”. Fingers impediment got away from me.
I think Bette is alot more tolerant than I would be, barging in uninvited and screaming at Bette and Helena, accusing them of being inappropriate with Angelica, because Helena stayed with Bette..”What are you teaching my child?…..No tina, bringing in guys off the street and banging them in your partner’s bed is inappropriate, saying all kids of shit, and then just, “oh well I was missing you..” and that was supp.osed to make it all better. I know they are connected because of Anglelica but they are no longer together and Tina needs to respect that, and Bette and Helena. If she is missing Bette, she is SOL. I would have Tina out on the doorstep until she could treat me and my partner and my home and my relationship wit hmy child, with respect.
Apparently I have caught Squirl’s finger impediment cos I kant tipe so gude tu.
that was kinda of awkward (the conversation, not the writing)…i can’t imagine trying to have that conversation with an ex…sometimes i think tina is crazy, lol…anyway, that was great z, pps!
Hey baby let me tell you that you handle it perfect, no need to be scared of anything. You are a good writer otherwise you wouldn’t have brought home the BeLena trophee,right? I know it can be very difficult to get over a relationship, especially when little things like songs, places you used to go to and other stuff reminds you of the good times but there comes a time you have to let go and move on with your life and that’s what Tina needs to do. Their relationship wasnt working so what’s the use of keep on trying making each other more and more miserable. I thought for a moment B&H were both going to jump at her throat but lucky for her that didn’t happen. Oh and have I already told you I adore your Angie, you write her the cutest way I’ve ever read so far :). Great chapter baby!
Zzzzzzzzzzzzz that was a wonderful chapter you wrote here and loved how it all worked out at the end. There was even a bit of humor in it, thanks to Harry,,LOL. Wonderful!!!!
You wrote that so well! Not only was it a great chapter, but you also gave us flashes of the old Bette. To you and your family have a happy and safe holiday!
Graet Chapter!!! I so love Harry!!!! Thank you
LOL. I love Harry!!! Great chapter!