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Intervention – Chpt 5
Previously
“I tell you what. I’ll go with you and Angelica your next weekend together to pick out a kitten. How does that sound.? I’ll bring everything you’ll need before we head out. A small ball, a toy mouse, a couple of bowls for food and water, the food of course, and the litterbox. Some litter. And a scoop.”
“A scoop? What’s the scoop for?” Bette’s eyes widened.
“Why for the doody, of course,” Helena smiled.
“Oh, fuck! Doody?”
Helena laughed. “Darling, there’s nothing to it.”
Bette looked at her new friend and rubbed her neck again.
“Doody,” she repeated. “Well, shit! I guess if you can do it as a small child, I can do it as a grown woman,” Bette muttered.
“That’s the spirit!” Helena said, taking Bette’s hand in hers and removing it from her tight neck. “Now, we’ve solved one problem this evening. Why don’t you let me take care of this?”
Bette closed her eyes and felt Helena’s hand soothingly move against her taut, tender muscles.
“Oh, doody, I’m in trouble,” she muttered under her breath.
Chapter 5
“I’m sorry, darling. I didn’t hear that. What did you say?” Helena asked softly.
Opening her eyes, Bette replied, “I just said, ‘It sounds like a lot of trouble. All that doody.’”
Helena removed her hand from Bette’s neck.
“Quite right. Are you about ready to go?” Helena inquired.
Bette resumed rubbing her neck.
“Yes, yes I am,” she answered, almost sleepily.
“Do you care for anything else?” Helena said.
Thinking she would care for a lot of things from this woman, Bette shook her head.
“No, I think we should be going,” Bette announced quietly.
Surveying her up and down in one sweeping motion, head to waist, Helena replied, “Darling, I should drive you home. I must intervene. I realize you’ve eaten, but I should not forgive myself if something happened to you.”
Bette did not want her evening with Helena to end. She feigned disagreement.
“I’m quite all right, Helena. I’ll be fine.”
She began to rise and stumbled back into her chair.
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LAUGHS. Oh my gawd. Get me home, post haste. That was so funny! I loved that, zheese! ((: You are such a talented storyteller. I’m really loving this one! ((: You really crack me up. Laughs. This is definitely one of my favorites right now. PPS!
Good tip, worth the wait. Now zheese, I want you to use your influence with Peggy to convince her that she wants ME to put charges on her accounts, OK? I like where this is going and you can use all the pussy jokes you want, but please, can all that doody with the litter box, post haste! Please, for me?
WOW! 0-60 all over a little pussy!
Loved it! Humor is always good in a story and you did it well. Great update!
You Z I loved it, these two powerful women make you laugh,feel thier sexiness and wanting one another. I can’t wait to see what happens next!!
Simply delightfully funny! I was rolling on the floor and simply can’t wait to see Helena get Bette’s pussy!
Yea!!! That was so cute…more, more, more…yes, yes, YES!!!!
Post Haste (LOL) I’m suprised these two were able to pull themselves apart long enough to agree that they need to not hook up in a car. Can’t wait to read what happens next…PPS!
Hi Zheese, Great to have Bette and Helena move it on to a physical plasuring of each other. Helena in charge is arousing and Bette is learning to let go and enjoy the benefits of an experienced lover. Can’t wait for more. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
Hey you! Now you really surprised but I guess we can expect that from you huh, should’ve known :) I loved it sweetie it was wonderful and humorous and I definitely loved Bette’s line : take me home post haste haha that’s one to remember. Thanks for posting sweetie, now come up with the next one ….. post haste please
hey beautiful :) long time no see. always the big question,right?! *what do you want?*… for now… more of your words… pleeeeease. ps: this one word.. tzzzz :P
luv these two together can’t wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!!
Hello my most beautiful lady… OUCH my commment was eaten :P… as I was saying before I was so rudely eaten… each and every word you write is filled with so much passion… love… desire. You create worlds within each word that brings the reader to the edge of fantasy into a world that they would dream to hold within their souls… every time you enter the room with your exquisite stories you bring a sense of untold romance that is so powerful… your sense of humor is LOL funny I couldn’t control myself… you inspire me my friend… with your words and your friendship… Mucho love and hugs, JC/Justin (Latin Nephew to those Salsa Angels)
zheese!!!! i want more…like today! seriously, i loved it. i love to see bette and helena playful and sexy with each other. PPS