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Into The Flames
“Please call me Alice.”
“Then you call me Tasha,” Tasha smiled.
Alice smiled then called out, “Mandy!”
The 11 year old walked out of the room and gave a kind smile to Tasha, “we got the rose?”
“Yeah, let’s go,” Alice said, “this is Commander Tasha Williams.”
“Hi Commander Williams,” Mandy said respectfully, “I’m Amanda Fairbanks-Piezeki.”
“Nice to meet you Amanda,” Tasha said shaking her hand.
“Call me Mandy please,” Mandy smiled.
“Then you call me Tasha,” Tasha said watching as the girl moved to the closet to get her shoes, “I can see where she gets her charm from.”
Alice blushed and said, “that’s all Dana right there. I may be the birth mother, but she’s all Dana.”
“It’s like you always have her,” Tasha said offering her arm to Alice.
Alice took it and said, “always.”
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September 20, 2011
Orange County, California
Bette turned up the music on her Ipod as she jogged down the beach side. Though she worked in LA, she preferred an apartment by the beach. Less traffic, less noise. She wore a form fitting T-shirt that covered the gaping scar on her chest, and black short shorts. She jogged into a quiet suburban neighborhood not that far from the beach. It marked a ten mile mark for her. That’s how she kept track of how much she had run.
Suddenly a giant explosion sent people flying in all directions and Bette immediately was at attention. She rushed to the burning house as people all around her were calling 911. She saw someone at the door of the house and ran without hesitation. She pushed the door open and dragged the blonde woman out of the house.
Then the blonde woman was struggling against her, trying to get into the house again.
“Hey! No! You can’t go in there!” Bette cried.
“My son! My son is in there!” she sobbed.
Bette turned around and saw the little 5 year old boy banging on one of the upstair-windows. “Hose! Do you have a hose!?” Bette screeched.
“Over there!” the woman cried.
“Stay here, I will get him,” Bette said pushing the woman back, “I’m a fire fighter.”
The woman looked at Bette admiringly as Bette ran to the hose, drenched herself in cold water and ran into the flames.
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Amazing, emotional story..please continue!
That was crazy amazing!
Sort of sad about Dana, but this is a cool start, for B&T as well as A&T meeting.
I’m so haappy you like to write and come up with all these different scenarios. Just wonderful. Please continue. Thanks.
I’m so haappy you like to write and come up with all these different scenarios. Just wonderful. Please continue. Thanks.
action packed and got me hooked, PPS
Nice start!;)
I loved it :) PPS
Great start. Please continue. Thank you.
Wonderful beginning, hope you continue
Oh goody a new and interesting story. I will impatiently await the next installment
This is cool stuff!..and I loved “Ladder 49″…Of coursed! pps?… : )
Action packed. Please continue.
I am loving this!!! You are amazing!
Great start.Thank you.
This is so good and please conintue, thanks!