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They stood for a long time, holding onto each other as tight as they could. Alice knew that if Dana asked, she would give up this entire trip on the spot. Half of her even hoped she would ask, knowing the pain of not having Dana around would be unbearable. But Dana remained quiet. Eventually Alice let go, kissed Dana on the cheek and walked around to follow Ella into the departure lounge, leaving Dana to curse herself over and over again for letting someone so special just walk out of her life.
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It was 4:30am and Dana was just heading out of her apartment to train when her phone rang. She almost jumped onto the phone, knowing that the only person to call her at this time was Alice.
“Hello?”
“Hello, this is the Tennis Corporation of America. I’m sorry to ring you so early but we need you in London immediately for a new tournament.”
Dana smiled into the phone and decided to play along.
“Oh really? I haven’t heard of any tournaments in London.”
“That’s because it’s new. It’s the um,” Dana could just imagine Alice on the other end of the line straining to think of a genuine tournament title. “The London Tournament?” Dana couldn’t help but laugh out loud at this. “Hey!”
“Nice try Al, but you lost me at the Tennis Corporation of America.” Dana heard a sigh on the other end followed by one of Alice’s small giggles which she adored.
“I actually had you fooled, you just don’t want to admit it,” Alice responded. “Tell me though, if there was a tournament here, you would come right?”
“Oh I don’t know Al,” Dana replied in what she hoped sounded like a sincere voice. The quietness on the other end proved that she had achieved the right affect. “You’re an idiot Al. I’d come in a heartbeat, you know that. So how’s good old London?”
Alice desperately wanted to tell Dana the truth. That the whole thing wasn’t worth it, that Ella wasn’t worth it and that she would give it all up just to see Dana for a second.
“It – It’s good, I guess,” she replied uncertainly instead. Dana gave no response and just waited for Alice to tell her more. “I’m kind of lonely that’s all. I really miss you.”
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great update!
Oh wow, this is a great story. I had goosebumps all over my body while reading this chapter. “Then come back to me” made me swoon. Thank you so much, I can’t wait for them to find out about each other’s feelings.
Really sweet story, please hurry and continue.
Awwww..I’m with warriormsp, love how words just spill out of a person’s lips wihtout thinking sometimes. This was sweetest, now I need to see what happens to the rest of the dinner. :)
oh man! that was really sweet of Dana to buy back and bring Alice’s guitar to her and visit, this is an amazing story hope you post soon!
Yay! Some good old Danish romance! I loved how Dana bought Alice’s guitar back for her and then showed up for her in London. And their argument was SO Danish. LOL.
I really, really love this story. It’s incredible how you prolong the tension between Alice and Dana. I’ve got to say, I can’t wait to see how they get together, because of course they must! Really awesome chapter, please post soon.
why do they always have to go around in cirles they should just tell each other how they feel but that is not the story and I do love it so funny in parts so please post soon
UH, when are they going to see how much they mean to each other. I love this story it is really cute. Dana is awesome for getting the guitar and sending thlocket back to her. Great job, post soon.