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Introductions – 7 [Final Chapter]
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“What?”
“I–I…” Alice took a deep breath. For the first time in her entire life she had no idea what she was suppose to say, which really scared her. She had always managed to use her humour or sarcasm to defend these kind of stupid comments that slipped out ever so occasionally, but on this occasion she had nothing. So instead she decided to go for the truth. “Lara… that is your relationship with Lara it… it hurt me.”
“Al, I don’t understand,” Dana replied quietly, wishing the blonde would look at her. “Lara never did anything to hurt you.”
“I know that Dana,” Alice said loudly as she looked back up at her confused friend. “I-I don’t mean that… not on purpose or anything but… *****,” Alice sighed as she tried to concentrate. “Seeing her with you… being with you it-it hurt.”
Dana’s breathing increased as she realised what Alice was saying. Unfortunately for Dana her initial expression was one of shock, which made Alice believe that Dana was in fact repulsed by what she had said.
“Well – I… why are you overreacting like this Dana?” Alice’s cynical defenses kicked in as she battled to stop herself from running out of the apartment. She was on the verge of tears and had never felt so vulnerable in her life – all in all she felt pretty *****.
“Because Ella isn’t good enough for you Alice,” Dana said quietly. It was her turn to look down at the floor this time. “She treated you badly and I didn’t want to see you go through that again.”
Her words were greeted by silence on Alice’s part, who felt like an absolute idiot. Dana was simply worried about the interest of her friend. Friend. Nothing more. Maybe Ella had just been bullshitting her with all that stuff about Dana, if it were true than why wouldn’t she had said anything earlier? Alice let out a deep breath, attempting to control her tears, and slowly began to walk, making it all the way to the door before she felt Dana’s hand on her arm, pulling her back.
“And because when I saw Ella there I thought I’d never get the chance to tell you that I love you.”
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that was awesome. the whole story was great. thank you for posting so soon. it was so emotional. i can’t wait for your next post, from an old or new story.
That was wonderful end to this wonderful fic.*raises hand* For your consideration, maybe another chapter of how they contunue their night in London? I’m a sucker for romantic moments :).
BRAVO :) I agree with layla, please consider another chapter or two…this is such a sweet story. thanks for the post.
This was a great ending, and I would also have to agree wit layla and artichoke on another chapter, but other than that keep up the awsome work, and thanks for the post!
Woohoo!! Go Dana and Alice. I just luv Danish so much. And you write it so well. :) Another chapter would definately do no harm…. ;)
YES!!! that was a very classy way of ending the story. that was beautiful. thank you and please don’t disappear pop in from time to time. PEACE.
My little danish heart is quite happy. :-)
That was great! I’m glad Dana admitted she loved Alice, and I loved the ending. :)
Finally it happened. Well done! I hope you post soon!
Yeah, these two need a night in London..*winks*That was good stuff…*heehee* Enjoy studying…
that was great I loved it I just wish there was a bit more in it but hey that was just an idea please post again soon