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Is Forever Over? Chapter 13
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Meanwhile in Chicago:
Tom: Bette over here! Jodi and Tom had come to pick Bette up this time.
Bette: Hey Tom! She breaks into a big smile upon seeing both Tom and Jodi waving frantically at her. Now that is a welcoming committee. A quick hug for Tom and a long squeeze and kiss with Jodi
Tom: Ladies I hate to break up the reunion, but that cop is coming.
Jodi: You don’t mind if we both climb in the back.
Tom: As long as I don’t get a show its all yours ladies.
Bette: Well I can’t quite promise that Tom. It’s been a while and Chicago is cold.
Tom: Well I guess I better drive fast huh.
Bette: I highly recommend it
Bette and Jodi make small talk and nuzzle in the back seat. When they arrive at the condo, Tom brings up Bette’s luggage then makes himself scarce.
Jodi: Welcome to my home, I love it here Bette. Thank you for convincing me to get it. Soft kiss.
Bette: Well, give me the grand tour. Are we shopping for anything this weekend? With a new place there is always something.
Jodi: Yes, I know this all too well now, thanks for telling me before I bought this place. The girls chuckle as Jodi starts the tour. This is the master bedroom, what do you think?
Bette: This is an amazing retreat, even the scent in here says relaxation, is that lavender?
Jodi: Yes, I love that scent and it is relaxing. She reaches her arms around Bette and presses her body and face into Bette. Bette reciprocates. She needed this hug more than she realized. She tilts Jodi’s face up and starts a kiss full of tenderness that quickly becomes about heat and longing. Jodi separates enough to begin to undress Bette. Bettet allows Jodi to lead and take care of her. She is so ready for this, body and mind. Jodi brings Bette over the edge again and again and Bette loves every moment of it.
Bette: Thank you for taking such good care of me and knowing just what I need.
Jodi: Of course and right now I’d say you need food am I right?
Bette: chuckles You’d be very right. So are we going out or ordering in?
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This was great, warm and very believable. Thank you.
Thank God you were breaking my heart with Bette being with Jodie. Hope IC understands thats what Jodie represents for TiBette fans. Great story I could actually feel the torment Tina was going thru.
Well took me few days to catch up on the story and so gald I did, thanks for a wonderful story. You certainly had me reading some parts looking between my fingers . As I am not a big Jodie fan, in fact I just fast forward through through scenes as I am die-hard TiBette fan. And hopefully your storyline will be the one we all finally see in S5 Great story and looking forward to a sequel ;-)
I’m glad Bette is open to Tina proving herself worthy again. PPS
Perfect; you have made my favorites now, pps
What were you thinking Tina? tell that kind of news just before her trip? hum woman. That was risky. but you have done it girl, still have to work on your wife but you are almost there. Thank you lwsho2005 and yes you are getting me in trouble lol some moreeeee please PPS
WOW!!!! That was really great!!!!! I can not wait to read what happens next!!!! I am so loving this story. Thank you PPS
So is posting a comment on your own story bad form? If so, sorry. I wanted to get this info out and thought this would be better than making a new post that had nothing to do with the storyline.I am so glad so many readers enjoyed this story and want me to continue. I will call “Is Forever Over” finished. I am going to take a bit of time to consider whether I can put my “heart” into a sequel. If I can build another credible, interesting story I’ll be back sooner rather than later. I honestly enjoyed writing this story and that is mostly due to your enjoyment and encouragement. I had many smiles and chuckles thanks to the FanFic posters! If I can deliver the goods, I’ll be back!A happy Thanksgiving to your all!
well i am a TIBETTER… and i think that bette and tina are now at a place where they can rebuild their relation… and i don’t think bette is giving tina another chance just because of angie… sure she loves angie… but she also knows she loves tina… they are soulmates… they both did wrong… and now they both fessed up to it… tina baring her soul to bette, well she needed to do that… bette breaking it up with jodi, she also needed to do that… lets just hope on the show they let them heal, let them love again… but most of all let us see it… not just leave it up to us to fill in the blanks…
Powerful chapter…WOW… i’m glad that tina opened up to bette. bette is willing to try again..excellent!!
Oh my stars, thank you, thank you, thank you. Loved this story and I wondred how you were going to save the relationship, I was crying with Tina. If this is the end of the story, will you please do a sequel. Loved the way you wrote them in this story. Hope IC will let us see something like this very soon. Really enjoyed this. Thank you.
Thank you lwsho for making a space for me here. The reason I am not a Tibetter is because I think that love is also valuing the other person, having compassion and understanding of them, and this is what has always been lacking, IMO from Tina to Bette. Several examples were mentioned in this chapter, one that Tina told Bette that she wanted to date her, yet would continue to see Helena as well. She told her this as Melvin lay dying, when Bette was already in deep pain. Then there is the job thing. I have never understood why it was okay for Bette to bust her ass supporting Tina and herself while Tina sat at home doing nothing, no matter what Bette was going through, but it was not okay for Tina to work at a well paying job to support them and the child she unilaterally created, while Bette took care of the baby, no matter what Bette was going through then either. It wasn’t okay because it wasn’t what Tina wanted. I find it also typical that Tina wants to be forgiven for everything that she has done, when she has never forgiven Bette for anything. On the show, this remains true, but in this fic, lwsho, at least she has started to take responsibility for her actions. This is what a real adult does, but I would not say Bette should just rush back to her, or anyone with whom she has had that kind of painful history. I don’t know what to think about Bette leaving Jodi..I don’t know if they could have been happy in different places, but I also wonder, did Bette come back to Tina because she wants to be with Angelica? I also wonder at Tina’s willingness to come between Bette and Jodi, though Bette was happy with her, because it’s what SHE wanted. Again, she was thinking of herself. I love the interaction between Bette and Boo…Just love it. So you see lwsho..in this fic is what I wish I would see on the show, but we won’t, and that is why I do not want them to get back together. You have shown what Tina could be.
Enjoy the love. I agree with Amanda MG. When we start a relationship it is full of passion, love and hope but always reality screws it up. It is what we make of reality that counts. Both these women messed up but they deserve another chance to try again and treat one another with respect, love and realism, not expecting perfection but promising to be honest and true to themselves that way they can be true to their relationship. You wrote a great story. Thx.
That was wonderful and now let see B&T be a family again!
Ahhhhh I can wipe the tears away now, im happy they got back together in the story and on the show, my life is incomplete without Tibette. Thanks for the journey of reconnect with the Porter family