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Is Forever Over? Chapter 9
Chapter 9 – Chicago
Bette has arrived in Chicago. She called Kit as promised as soon as the plane touched down. Her taxi pulls up to the Hilton. The doorman greets her and grabs her luggage as she pays the cabbie. Bette enters the lobby and heads to the check in desk.
Bette: Hi our reservation is under Lerner, I’m Bette Porter. There should be a key in my name as well.
Desk Clerk: Welcome to the Hilton Dean Porter. I see the reservation here and you are correct, Ms. Lerner has left a key in your name. You will be on our Executive Floor with a view of Lake Michigan and Michigan Avenue. You will find concierge staff available on the executive level to help you during your stay. Jose will be happy to show you to your room. The Art Institute is taking care of the bill, so enjoy your stay and let me know if I can be of further assistance.
Bette: Thank you.
Bette follows Jose to the elevator lobby where he inserts her key for access to the Executive floors. She enters the room and is blown away by the view. She loves the beaches of Southern California, but Lake Michigan has a beauty to be appreciated, especially from this high up.
Jose: Dean Porter, will there be anything else?
Bette: No this is fine, thank you. Tips Jose and begins to settle into the room. She’s disappointed that Jodi isn’t there to greet her. Just then her phone rings.
Bette: Bette Porter.
Tom: Hi Bette its Tom are you in Chicago?
Bette: Yes, I’m in the room now, where are you?
Tom: Well, there has been a slight change of plans. Our flight has been delayed so we won’t arrive until later tonight. Jodi says she’s really sorry sweetie and is looking forward to being with you tonight. How is the room?
Bette: The room is wonderful, though I wish you were here with me. I guess I’ll just look forward to being with you tonight. I want to do some shopping, so I’ll start that today. What time do you think you’ll arrive?
Tom: Well hopefully around 9pm, so if you want to grab dinner while you’re out that will be fine.
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(52 votes, average: 3.42 out of 5)
yeah Tina is back! I think it is very telling that Bette thought about Tina alot on the trip. Jodi is only temporary.
The fact that Bette thought about Tina so much on this trip and bought a gift for her says a lot about how she still feels toward Tina. Tina has to get that game going when Bette gets back to twon especially after she receives the gift. Wonder if Bette really only bought one gift, since she saw a few things she wanted to get for Tina. Jodi is not a permanent fixture in this part of Bette’s life. She only gave Jodi a brief peck on the cheek when she was leaving. Let’s see what she does when she greets Tina back in LA. I hope it is a knock your socks off kiss. Love the story. PPS
I thought it was very telling that even though Bette definitely cares very much for Jodi, it was Tina that she kept thinking about…Tina who she bought an expensive present for. Go Tina!! LOL Thanks!
Well, it was Tina that Bette bought an expensive gift for on her first day in Chicago. Bette thought of Tina a lot during the trip. I would say Tina’s in there! Maybe she’ll be at the gate in LA, and will put a kiss on Bette to make her toes curl!!! PPS
The score is 2:0 for Tina (because of the gift and for being on Bette’s mind so often), and she isn’t even playing hard ball get, right? LoL. Love where this is going.
That was good!
hat was an exciting and interesting chapter. How could it get only four stars? can’t wait for the next installment.