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Is Love Enough Chapter 17
It had been a long week for Bette, she not only had a busy work week but she also has been busy with Kenter. She went and got him the night that Kit called and told her that Tina had left, but Bette has still not be able to get a hold of Tina she was not answering the cell number that she left for Kit to call if something happened and Bette was to the point were she was going to lie and leave a message saying something is wrong but she knew she couldnt do that to Tina it was bad enough that she had left because of her. Bette sat there in her living room wondering where and what Tina was doing, but the sound of her doorbell knocked her out of her thoughts.
Bette: I am coming!
Bette opened the door to the one of the people she thought she would not see at her doorstep.
Bette: Sade, I ask you to leave me alone. What part of that didnt you understand?
Sade: Look Bette I am sorry that your x left and left you with her kid but I have already told you that I want you in my life and I get what I want.
Bette: First of all that kid is my kid too, and No you will never have me, I made a huge mistake going out with you, and I will not do that again, now leave before you wake up my child.
With that Bette slammed the door in her face hoping that Sade finally understood what she was saying. Bette had not even got comfortable on the couch before the doorbell was ringing of the hook again.
Bette: I swear I am going to kill this woman and if she wakes my son up I will feed her to the dogs down the street.
As Bette open the door she saw her friendsShe could only guess to what they want at this time of night.
Bette: Come in guys and by the way what on earth can I do for you at this time of night? Can I get anyone anything?
Kit: No sis. We are here talk to you about Tina.
Bette: Look all of you know as much as I do and that would be nothing but a damn cell phone number.
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Glad that you´re back…great update by the way. Post soon
You’re killing me, First you wait so long to post this chapter then it ends like that. Please post soon. Good Job
ohh…come on…that´s torture…please post sooon…I´m really curious now…what kind of crazy world..?
I have finished all of the chapters and what a great story..keep it going.
I just got on to read the comments and noticed the story didn’t cut and paste like normal. I apologize to you all for this chapter being difficult to read/follow. I hope you enjoy it.
The chapter was good even with the posting mix up. What in the world could Tina have done that has everyone scared to tell Bette? I’ll be patiently waiting for the results. I’ll always be here BC, just close your eyes and I’m there. You won my heart, I’m not going anywhere. I’m yours forever and a day. 381.
Glad to see you back and good chapter. Ok this is more excited and please post soon, thanks!
The suspence is good so far, but you’re really going to have to update more frequently if you want readers to follow the story. Once or twice a month is not going to do it…
Now that I have seen a couple other chapters that have been recently posted, I get the feeling that the formatting of your chapter was something that happened after you submitted the story so ignore my suggestion about the paragraphs.
Well you certainly have my curiosity peaked. Love the story. Might be a little easier to read if you would break the story into paragraphs. Either way I will be waiting for the next update.
I love your story please post soon.Need to know what Tina did
K
Very interesting, can’t wait to see what’s going on.
interesting..can’t wait for the next update!
God damm it BC, ok if you are going to leave us hanging you have to post way sooner, I have been waiting ages for this update. I WANT TO KNOW!!!
Hey BC,
I need, need, NEED to know where is going.
What could Tina have done???
Please post real soon and puts us all out of your misery.
A fan.